Player Comments on Cutting Up Some Tomatoes
Very little on this site makes me laugh, but this succeeded in doing so, good on you for that. Some things I suggest are longer pages, a more interesting plot and a less linear story. Sometimes it's nice to see simple things like this, so it was nice compared to the low-effort monotony you normally see from newer authors.
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bjhovey
on 3/28/2015 10:09:27 PM with a score of 0
Yey! I passed my first cooking lesson. ^_^
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Avery_Moore
on 7/15/2020 2:54:00 PM with a score of 0
This was a short read, but it was still quite funny. It made me laugh out loud, a couple of times. The narrator has a very satirical / derogatory tone that is honestly hilarious to read. ("It's just some fck-ing tomatoes, man.")
My favourite ending was probably the one where I came to an epiphany while chopping tomatoes. That was fun.
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Reader82
on 1/16/2020 2:53:51 PM with a score of 0
It was great and I laughed a lot. However, try not to use so many bad words. That isn’t that good.
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GeniusPancake
on 6/28/2019 5:31:57 AM with a score of 0
Every was interesting and good, but think about censoring the bad words.
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StoryTurtle
on 6/28/2019 4:38:03 AM with a score of 0
Well not bad
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— Drew on 4/30/2018 7:43:50 PM with a score of 0
Short and funny. I like that the story did somewhat branch at the stabbing the cutting board to give ways of victory by not just doing the boring stuff. I definitely enjoyed a little bit!
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Saltiner
on 4/30/2018 7:31:07 AM with a score of 0
I think that since it's your first story game, you did pretty well and managed to put in a few giggles without making it crap, but there's still many ways you could've improved it without too much of a fuss.
It was basically just one straight line with a few branches coming off here and there, but that's it. You should've added a few more choices and using items would've helped it out a bit.
3/8
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WickidLion
on 4/26/2018 11:40:39 PM with a score of 0
so funny i almost killed myself laughing. Mission ACCOMPLISHED for you any way nicely done
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AurondragonTyr
on 10/8/2017 2:14:26 AM with a score of 0
Wait... Just because I didn't go to the kitchen one time, I became eternally lazy and my corpse rotted?
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MinnieKing
on 12/3/2016 9:25:37 PM with a score of 0
Oddly satisfying... :)
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Vittorio99
on 9/23/2016 2:04:13 PM with a score of 0
this is so stupid and lame and your "story" had stupid dumb "endings" spell dis for me Y.O.U.R. S.T.O.R.Y. I.S. L.A.M.E.
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— anonymous on 9/5/2016 12:05:52 PM with a score of 0
This was pretty humorous in all honesty.
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TharaApples
on 8/16/2016 4:30:06 AM with a score of 0
Its hilarious x3
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Seto
on 6/4/2016 1:31:19 AM with a score of 0
Needs a lot of improvement.
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Shadowgirl_101
on 4/13/2016 3:18:09 PM with a score of 0
A stupid game, or maybe one you made when you were bored and had nothing else to do. Oh well, it works.
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Lzark
on 8/8/2015 1:00:53 PM with a score of 0
There is no win
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Dmanxbox
on 5/19/2015 9:57:08 AM with a score of 0
that game was hilarious!
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— warriorcatslover on 5/11/2015 8:08:26 PM with a score of 0
My mom would be so proud of me.
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Tapiocaqueen17
on 4/19/2015 11:43:20 PM with a score of 0
I didn't laugh... On the outside, anyway...
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Wolfmist
on 4/12/2015 5:14:02 PM with a score of 0
It was okay.
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— sugarpopcrystal on 3/31/2015 10:30:45 PM with a score of 0
Really good grammar, really funny, but the plot isn't very deep.
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WizzyCat
on 3/30/2015 3:01:07 PM with a score of 0
I found the story to be quite amusing, although it could have been longer. Well, it was a well spent 5 minutes.
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Zelnite88
on 3/29/2015 11:18:49 PM with a score of 0
This succeeded in making me smile so good work on that. I died of a heart attack from making salsa which was definitely unexpected. Being that it was not meant to be a story and that it is slightly amusing. 3/8
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jaryeth
on 3/29/2015 1:12:39 PM with a score of 0
Holy guac and tomatoes!! This was hilarious, and really funny to play! I only wish it was longer and somehow more challenging... but really, how could slicing tomatoes be challenging?
You'd probably be able to make lots more cooler games, and hopefully just as funny! I rated 8/8 - maybe more than this game might deserve, but in my own opinion, this is probably the funniest thing I've read on the entire site!
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Wolfrunner
on 3/28/2015 6:09:01 PM with a score of 0
Who mixes tomatoes and guac? That's just wrong.
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— Almighty Capy on 3/28/2015 4:23:05 PM with a score of 0
It was kind of funny. I actually giggled a bit.
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bluejay14
on 3/28/2015 2:54:09 PM with a score of 0
Hehe I liked that :) You got a giggle from me, so you have succeeded. Keep writing!
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Tintin
on 3/28/2015 2:29:18 PM with a score of 0
I'm sorry but I didn't giggle at this. I found it very non amusing and boring. 2/8
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Creature
on 3/28/2015 3:23:28 AM with a score of 0
Meh.
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WarriorCatsRPStories
on 3/27/2015 10:35:50 PM with a score of 0
For a random story it's good, my character's reaction to the salsa made me smile. For a first story it's ok but from the writing style and humour I guess you could write better things than this :)
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Will11
on 3/27/2015 10:00:41 PM with a score of 0
Not too horrible. Still, some things were a little too unexpected.
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jamescoker1226
on 3/27/2015 9:30:55 PM with a score of 0
It was alright.
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DerpBacon
on 3/27/2015 9:27:38 PM with a score of 0
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