Player Comments on Dead Space: The Virus Awakens Part 1

Loved the game and the storybook. Cant wait for number 2 :)

What a rubbish game. First, capitalization when it wasn't needed (such as in the middle of the sentences), extremely short duration (5 minutes or so), and i personally think the only thing matching Dead Space is the Plasma Gun and the necromorphs.
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This gets a note two,
From who?
Scooby-Doo!
And me too!

We need part 2 and some more action :)

I figured out how to fix the ship :D
Though I would have liked to see more character development.

I thought it to be exciting yet I couldn't help but wonder if there should have been more options and also every time I went to the market the same dialog window would show up, which repeated for three consecutive dialog boxes. I would have perhaps had an alternative dialog if the player has already been to the area, also as exciting as it was it was pretty short. I hope another one comes out though because it was a fun read. Thank you

This makes no sense. I literally wandered around in circles...for like an hour.

Not enough detail, alot of things were just glossed over

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No, bad fullmetalfan80, no episodic entries! They end up being too short and lackluster.

Whilst I did spot some grammar/spelling errors that annoyed me, it was much better than your previous works. That being said, I must re-iterate, once more, that episodic content is, by its very nature, shit.

The individual episodes are simply too short and by making them separate games you essentially guarantee that the choices we make won't matter in the least as they cannot be carried over. So instead, take your time and make a full game.

Just my two cents.

Could have been so much more...

Could have been a great story but sadly you finished to early. I do however like the idea. Keep up the good work.

cool line...resting in pieces.

I feel like the pacing is way too fast. Try to build tension in horror stories, as that is the best part. Take your time in developing the stories and don't rush them. I like the premise and you have potential, you just need to take time to work on the story.

A little confusing. I have not played Dead Space, but it is obvious that you tried to rewrite a pre-existing story and omitted a few details important to understanding what is going on. Even fan-fiction should be self-contained and should provide enough information for someone unfamiliar with the work on which it was based to play. Still, it is readable, and you use items well.