DELTA: The Beginning
"choose your own boredom"
played 227 times (finished 26)
"march in the swamp"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
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DELTA Operative Colbin McCallahan is dropped into his first mission in Kolvia. You must stop the terrorist threat before they take over the world. Don't be fooled by the short storyline! There are multiple storylines that branch out just by making a simple mistake.
It was okay but I don't really like story games where it shows what people say by typing their names and then a colon. That's how script's are written and this is a story, not a script. Also in the one where you knock the guy out of the plane, how exactly are you supposed to clear your name?... You did it. :p
on 11/17/2012 5:16:29 AM
Seth says NO! WAYYYY too short.
on 10/29/2012 10:10:25 PM
You should try to expand the first storyline.
on 7/5/2012 11:41:03 PM
sick, but only one choice, on my path. instead of making a sequel make more choices. this should not be a 7 for maturate level
on 7/5/2012 7:00:24 PM
Your other one is better.
Could you please just make 1 big story instead of alot of sequels.
on 7/5/2012 6:16:46 PM
I made one choice the entire time, which might be OK if it was a wicked badass story with a blow-your-socks-off plot and a bunch of compelling characters, but it wasn't. I'd say, take several days to write your next story. Perhaps a week, maybe even a month or a couple of decades, because one day is simply not enough time for you to produce your best.
on 7/5/2012 1:44:22 PM
I guess, you tried your hard and it's pretty good to see that you completed two stories in a day.
Could have added more choices and it was almost linear with descent plot.
on 7/5/2012 10:39:09 AM
Better than ST. Still you need to put more effort. There are only 2 choices on each page and its real short. But still better than any recent short story. Good luck. 4/8.
on 7/5/2012 10:06:06 AM
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