Player Comments on Detective

Writing is awkward and does not have enough description. Also it is almost entirely linear. 2/8.

And don't tell people to keep their negative comments to them self. In fact negative comments are more important than positive ones. They make you a better writer.

Would have been a two if it wasn't for "All negative comments to be kept to yourself." 1/8

Cant you just post this on the OTHER website.

Wow, those wolves sure like their potatoes :p

Great job! Kinda eh, but better than I can do so not the worst! :)

I'm sorry but the whole idea of a 'wolf detective' was for a competition on another site. You also commented on another story saying why is everyone calling an African Wild Dog 'Radioactive'. He was a character for the competition. Just clearing things up a little.

To be entirely honest, I did not expect a wolf detective. Terrible grammer and a complete lack of choice or logical storyline. Needs more work.