Player Comments on Die Untoten , Kapitel 1

Ich glaube, dass deine Story kein 1/8 verdient, nur weil sie auf Deutsch ist. Sie ist gut, aber es scheint, dass nicht so viele Leute auf CYS Deutsch sprechen.

I see that this story has a decent number of 1/8s, which I think is nonsense. It’s not a bad story. It isn’t too linear; it isn’t way too short (if it were a standalone story, that is; a lot of people really dislike the whole “chapter” thing). Regardless, even a three is, in my opinion, too low. It’s a promising piece of writing that isn’t able to get the attention it needs because of the language it’s written in.

— BradinDvorak on 8/1/2015 7:24:35 AM with a score of 0

Short and straightforward, without Google translate I wouldn't have been able to read it. Perhaps a few more details, describing your surroundings, etc. I liked it, good work!

— MrSnuggles on 10/30/2022 7:19:40 PM with a score of 0

I don't know German but luckily that's what translators are for.

I doubt the author is still active on the site but in case they do come back ubersetze das. I liked it and it was a fun little short game about zombies with a lot of potential just hard to read for someone in a different language.

I think the whole idea of a zombie virus while unoriginal is interesting enough to make a good CYOA story out of, So I think it was pretty good for the amount of length.

— Axxius on 1/12/2022 7:20:32 PM with a score of 0

Sterben oder nicht sterben...

— Geordie on 2/20/2019 8:49:41 AM with a score of 0

335/5000
Als ich das sah, konnte ich tatsächlich eine anständige Summe übersetzen, da ich in der Schule Deutsch lerne. Es ist eigentlich keine schlechte Geschichte und niemand sollte es schlecht beurteilen, nur weil es in einer anderen Sprache geschrieben ist.

Es hat anständige Grammatik und Inhalt, und ich werde es 5/8 geben, weil ich denke, dass Sie vielleicht mehr Details hinzugefügt hätten. Gut gemacht.

TRANSLATION: When I saw this, I was actually able to translate a decent amount, since I take German in school. It isn't a bad story, actually, and no one should judge it badly just because it's written in another language.

It has decent grammar and content, and I'll give it a 5/8, because I think maybe you could've added more detail. Great job.

— abchiaramonte on 12/18/2018 10:30:02 PM with a score of 0

Ich mag, wie diese Geschichte nicht auf Englisch ist. Spaß.

— Quorrah on 9/19/2018 6:15:00 PM with a score of 0

Don’t even know

— Thegreatlord3 on 6/16/2018 8:23:43 AM with a score of 0

it is cool and good

— nelsoday14 on 9/14/2016 4:11:13 PM with a score of 0

I didn't under stand a word of it because it was not in English. I don't know if I won or lost. I give this game a 6/10

— Zaguiza14 on 12/7/2015 3:04:53 AM with a score of 0

Ich würde dieses Spiel geben, eine gute Bewertung, aber warum es wurde in deutscher Sprache verfasst ist mir ein Rätsel. Ich werde dieses Spiel eine 4/8 bewerten, Es tut uns leid.

— AntoniusTheCreator on 11/8/2015 5:49:08 PM with a score of 0

Nein! Sorry, I didn't understand anything. I just came here to get the point for rating it. XD

— Penworth on 6/12/2015 9:05:08 AM with a score of 0

OPky.

— WarriorCats on 12/29/2014 2:15:18 AM with a score of 0

Well, a nice zombie story. It's cool that I get an axe right away, although I'd rather have had it as an item, rather than the game just telling me that I use it.

— Skysworne on 9/19/2013 10:26:12 AM with a score of 0

I gave up on this after running the description and the first page through Google Translate.

Really, if you could write a story then you can obviously understand English, so why not just write a story in English?

— ck23838 on 8/13/2013 8:50:07 AM with a score of 0

Was kind of hard to decide what to rate this since after translating it, I still didn't really understand it, which makes it impossible to tell how good the quality of writing is since the translator mucks it up. Still I got the general gist of the story and I thought it was pretty good.

— Briar_Rose on 12/27/2012 11:13:24 AM with a score of 0

Es tut mir leid, aber ich weiß nicht, wie man Deutsch sprechen.

— playa988 on 1/6/2012 5:42:08 AM with a score of 0

Nun, habe ich einen Übersetzer, und verstanden vor allem die wichtigsten Punkte. Gutes Spiel, ich mochte es, ein bisschen linear wäre allerdings mehr Plot Entwicklung gemocht habe und ein bisschen länger.

Well, I used a translator, and understood mostly the main points. Good game, I liked it, a bit linear though, would've liked more plot development and a bit longer.

— ChaiHai on 9/27/2011 5:02:45 PM with a score of 0

Unfortunately I don't speak German, so I'll give it an even 4/8 because I can't tell if it is good or bad, but I still need the point haha.

— ThisisBo on 9/10/2011 7:26:32 PM with a score of 0

My translation wasn't perfect but from what I could tell, this was decent!

— JJJ-thebanisher on 5/6/2011 2:54:32 PM with a score of 0

Warum haben Sie sich diese Geschichte auf Deutsch geschrieben? Ich habe zehn Jahren seit keine Deutsch gesprochen.

But seriously, is there an English translation forthcoming?

— Sethaniel on 5/6/2011 12:44:55 AM with a score of 0

Uberarbeite die rechtschreibung, bin zwar kein faschist in sowas stoert aber den lesefluss. An sonsten gut. (kleiner tipp) die story ist unlogisch niemand testet ein medikament weniger als einen monat. dh das am anfang mit maximal 10 infizierten zu rechnen ist nicht mit vielen vielen. Lass den infizierten ausbrechen oder so..

— Dani on 4/18/2011 4:49:29 AM with a score of 0

that was interntaining. if only i spoke german? anyone wanna translate the entire story?

— ugilick on 4/16/2011 12:54:53 AM with a score of 0

Pretty good,but I think some people won't understand it, because it is written in German ;)