Player Comments on Doors I

I think you are a very good writer, but there seems to be little effort put into this story. There are very little hints as to what will happen when you make a choice, and I went through every path to see if there was more than one "good ending". Unsurprisingly there was not. Also the cliffhanger at the end. If you want to write a story ending in a cliffhanger, just write a book series! Storygames should have a proper ending, not a cliffhanger! You have potential to make great games, but this is not the way to do it.

This was a shame. Most of the short story games seem to be from people who tried hard, but were just not very good writers. This game had the opposite problem. You're a really good writer, I just don't think you tried very hard. Instead of making a series of games where you open three or four doors and nothing really happens, why don't you write one long game with lots of doors, where the player actually feels a sense of achievement when they win?

MY PANTS GOT A LITTLE TO WET PLAYING THIS GAME TODAY I WOULD NOT RECOMNED PLAYING =) WITH THE LITTLE SALLY DOLLS THEY DO NOT TRY TO SOOTH YOU EEVN THO IM SOPOSED TO BE THE MIAN MAN

IM SCARED THIS MADE ME VERY SCARED DONT READ UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE SCARED FOR LIFE.

i was scared the whole time i might have mental disorder now because my dick got 2 inches smaller and now its 1/2 a inch (and im 37)

My stinky got scared when it siad MONSTER MONETSER WHOOOOO BOOOPOPOOOOOOOO POOOOOOP LALALALALALALA;A; AHHHHHHH i almost shit me myself for the third time today playing this game i woulnd not recamamend becwuase thiw game is reallly scqrey in it i mak4 es nyou do some thingfs nyoi u8 might not wannna do

I really liked the story.

That was... That wasn't a puzzle game! You just opened random doors and hope you don't die. That's not how puzzle games work! I really don't feel that I should have to explain this, but puzzle games actually require puzzles.
>.<

Not too shabby for a first Story game.

no

thanks very cool

very cool

Ok then

Not bad but could be made better

Just plain silly.

I don't know what to rate it... Crews to the author for the very creative nightmare deaths though.

It was short, and made not very much sense, so of could be updated a lot. But, no rush. It is a creative thinking type.

Shiny Levers Must Be PULLED!!!!!! :p

It's well written and the story is entertaining, but there seems to be a problem with the freedom link, I click to go one direction and it says I go the other. If that was intentional than it was not very amusing, if not, then now you know.

Well, it's certainly an interesting game. A bit shorter than it could have been and I think with items it would have been better but it's still fairly decent. Good work.

Found every ending. If you tried harder this could rival the Wal*mart game with ease.

Noooo bad game. Back to Warrior Cats!

It wasn't bad, but it's not great either. It's written well but is deviod of plot or challenges so it's a bit pointless.

FUN!!!

I got the cliffhanger and was all like "NO!! What did he see!!!!!!!"

I hate those things....but liked the story. :D

short, vary short.

I always like a good puzzle, but the options should take you on a different path rather than just saying "nope, that didn't work" and go back to the choices again. Also you could get in some back story by the player finding a note in his/her pocket, or hearing an ethereal voice, or memories coming back to him piece by piece.

I don't get the crown page...and maybe raise the maturity level by one?

The game is a little nonsensical for my tastes. Your writing is pretty good, but I think you forced it too much.

I like it, but it needs to be longer. Grammar is good and pages are not long. Easy to read. I want more.

Mostly random, no real plot, and rather short. Random stories can be fun, but you need to invest a little more in the plot/character development to get there.

It's good, but a bit random. For example, why was he in a room like that, I have no clue. I like how it's well proofread and there doesn't seem to be any spelling/grammatical mistakes. This game is sort of similar to Three Keys.

dis game was teh bomb I especially loved all mah fave references in dar, dat party room, dat stinkface, dat crown mayne #ssrb4lyfe #teamgame #worldwide