Player Comments on Escape The School Part 2

Nice little puzzle game you have here - I liked it :)

I think you could boost its Ratability though, by giving more information (a paragraph or so more) with each location and interaction with the Items.

Also, maybe add more interaction with the shooter than just random Left/Right Die/Live. Perhaps have a 'Beg For Your Life Choice at least or a clue as to why going in one direction over the other would be bad or good.

Finally, After the Shooter, I went back into the SS Room, even though I thought that encounter occurred in the Science room or hall coming out of it.

Anyway, not too shabby ^v^

The story isn't great. Who is rick? Who had a shotgun and why were you attacked? Very odd.

Good! Kind of easy though.

This was a nice little puzzle game. I feel like it just needed more context then it would have a higher rating.

For example, who is Rick and why am I shredding his file? Secondly who am I and why did I wake up in math class? Why is the school empty except for the shooter? Those are things I would have liked answered but the puzzle in itself was fine if simple.

I guess that’s why the game got a lower rating due to the simplicity and lack of story to it but that’s about all I can see that needs improvement.

... I really want to know who the hell Rick is and why we felt the need to shred his file. :p

Guess it's good for time wasting, though I feel intrigued. WHO IS RICK?

There was more to this one than the 'Random Room' one, but there's still just no story here, and what little writing there is is just completely disjointed and incoherent.

I shred a file for no reason except that I need to do it to progress. There's a gun in a desk and then I shoot a random man who just appeared with no explanation before, during or after. I'm not sure how this wound up with a 4 honestly. It seems like the author has a good grasp on the inventory system at least but there's just nothing else going on here besides clicking on items.

It's not that challenging, make it harder

A little disappointing.

Good game challenging can't wait for next one.

I liked it! Am looking forward to the next one. One thing that would be more interesting those is if the puzzles were a bit more... Puzzly. Like, half the items you pick are are keys to specific room, so you know exactly when and where to use them. Next time, try to throw in some items that get the player thinking, for example the player has a wind up mouse and there's a cat in the room. If the player uses the wind up mouse then the cat chases it... Something like that. :p

Fun game

This wasn't that bad of a game. It was simple, and a good one for players who have never played with the advanced editor before, since it is simple and makes it very clear when to use items. Also, it makes you "use" items, rather than giving links that have a variable restriction.

Other than the game, which was made well, the writing was pretty sloppy; although it was understandable, it lacked any sort of fluency or deeper level meaning and did not seem to be grammar-edited.

I hope to see the third one come out soon. This one was not the best, certainly not the worst. 5/8.

Not a bad diversion for a while :)

One of the main problems I found in it was the grammar. Though is wasn't as bad as it could of been (ohhh, it could have been MUCH worse) but it still confused me a bit.

Another thing, is that you didn't explain the background and objects enough. I would have like the shooter to be a teacher turned psycho or something :)

Lastly, the thing that was a bit odd was that if you go (spoiler?) into the closet after already killing the shooter it makes you have to fight him again.

Anyways, way better than your first one, I expect the next one to be even better ^=^