Player Comments on Eyes Of An Angle

It might have been the many broken links, my co-pilot's thick Australian accent or the re-rendering of the English language into unfamiliar words such as piolet for pilot but at no point in that story game did I have a clear idea of who I was, what I was doing or why, despite the many drawings which included one of a pink haired girl who, though she didn't clarify the situation any,was at least nice to look at. Not many authors illustrate their own stories so you get extra points for that but despite reading this for at least 15 minutes if anyone asked me what it was about all I could tell them would be "space" before launching into a detailed description about the pretty girl with pink hair :)

This game had a really nice plot and cool drawings.
Unfortunately, those were pretty much its only appealing features.
I would suggest that the author run this whole game through some sort of spellchecker, because literally every page is riddled with misspellings and grammatical errors. (e.g. I think it's "Eyes of an Angel", not "Angle". lol.)
Secondly, several of the pages are dead ends, so this story has not been completed yet.
In addition, there are a few points at which there is no choice of what to do. This means that there are several links but they all lead to the same page. What is the point of that?

Sorry, but this game isn't really worth playing unless you are willing to sift through incomprehensible pages of text, or if you just want the free point.

This is one of the many stories on the site where there is some basic creativity, but the author is either unwilling, or unable to correct basic spelling and grammar. The pictures are obviously from MS Paint, but took time to create, so I'll add 1 to my rating. Just spellcheck and edit this. There is absolutely no excuse to have such hackneyed writing.

Needs proof reading from a fluent English speaker, and needs to be elaborated upon.

I liked the story for sure, and I definitely liked how you made the Microsoft Paint art look good, it's obvious that you put some time into it. This story is a classic example of an unwilling author, though. Just fix the basic stuff. Grammar, spelling, etc... Otherwise, good job!

... In a word: ugly.

I can see you put a lot of effort into this but I just wasn't feeling it. Sorry.

The only good MS Paint pictures I've ever seen, but that was the best part...

I don't even...

More bad than homework.

it was cool i like the pics

Not something I would want to read. Nice topic, shitty plot and shitty grammar.

good try

Nice try

boring.

I could not figure out how to finish so I just decided to die.

Nice pictures for a six year old, but I could hardly read your infantile bullshit.

This Was Completly Errelivent Ots was Stupid

diferent

Some missing links, but overall, interesting story.

Atomic bombs? I thought they would have discovered anti-matter by then.

It's obvious there was time put into creating this, but the spelling is terrible. I think I would like these stories more if they were better-written.

rated a 5 simply cause there arent many games on here with a story. but it could still use some serious work.

Also, the pictures were great. Nice job on that!

So confusing, otherwise it would have been great. Lots of links and stuff, good job for that. There is a dead link at the end. It was ok, I guess..

i would rather do a whole lot of homework than play on this boring game!

Not very good at all.

lot of dead ends here, but an otherwise great story. Cool pictures, and pretty good billy. Just not finished.

Billy, I lost for the third time, I'm so bad, but anyway, cool story but you spelled some things wrong Billy!!

hey! that was actually pretty cool. good job!

AWESOME game.