Player Comments on Genesis > ChooseYourStory.com

It was a very short story. I expected there to be a lot more to the story. There are still a few grammar and spelling corrections that need to be made.

— Anonymous on 7/1/2016 5:25:12 PM with a score of 0

BEST FRIGGING THING IN DA WORLD!!!!!! Awesome story. Wish it was longer.

— TK0805 on 2/16/2016 9:23:15 AM with a score of 0

I liked this story, I only wish it was longer though.

— corgi213 on 8/26/2015 8:22:34 AM with a score of 0

I am one evil son-of-a-bitch >:D

— TheFluentReader on 4/9/2015 12:28:11 PM with a score of 0

Really anticlimactic it's good but it should be longer

— priryan123 on 2/13/2015 4:55:01 PM with a score of 0

Good story. Engaging from the start.

— Jordi P on 9/25/2014 12:51:22 PM with a score of 0

Needs to be expanded. Pretty anti-climatic ending.

— ArrowzworrA on 7/12/2013 10:23:37 PM with a score of 0

Good plot idea that could be great if expanded.

— steve1959 on 6/1/2013 9:43:16 AM with a score of 0

Great Game! Lots of action.

— harrypotter on 5/17/2013 7:11:49 PM with a score of 0

6/8,

It's pretty damn good.

— Zane on 11/18/2012 2:04:33 AM with a score of 0

A little bit short, but I love the fact that you didn't skimp on the details :).

— alienalpha on 8/25/2012 8:45:25 AM with a score of 0

pretty good.

— betaband on 8/22/2012 9:31:31 PM with a score of 0

pretty good it's sooooooooooo coooooool!

— SEULaw on 8/22/2011 3:28:31 PM with a score of 0

I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

— Killer999 on 5/25/2011 11:28:45 AM with a score of 0

:) I remember playing this story in it's earlier state.

— SindriV on 5/11/2011 1:47:49 PM with a score of 0

Bo approves

— ThisisBo on 5/9/2011 9:25:24 PM with a score of 0