Player Comments on Helping Leena

seems interesting...

NO DEMOS. They are usually not completed, and also usually crap. Read this: http://chooseyourstory.com/help/articles/article.aspx?ArticleId=4046

It was good, but you really should finish it. I want to keep playing! In the future please don't post something that isn't finished. You have talent, but just stopping before the game even really begins is not okay.

This was far too short, granted it is a demo, but still, otherwise it is pretty interesting and leaves me wanting more. I didn't find any mistakes, but I read fast so I typically ignore them anyway.

looks good so far

Looks promising

It's extremely short, even for a demo.
Are you going to finish this? Because I think it would be very interesting. Like you have to say the right thing to get Leena to tell more, I don't know. Also maybe you could do something about the other patients before that you have to see.

Awhh, I never got to kill Dr Black in the library with a candlestick :(

Pretty good, maybe something that, you know, isn't a demo?

Good start but please finish your storygames before publishing them. Poste on writing workshop and get someone to look it over. I mean, we barely got to talking to lina.

Would love to read the full thing.
And what Tanstaafl said.

A good game, and I would enjoy the full thing.

Actually, I for one enjoyed this. Although it was so short, I can tell you're off to a great start! I will check back to play the game when you're finished. Good plot too! Good luck fellow story maker!
~ Avery

Awfully short, even by demo standards.

Uhh... Please don't publish demos, just make a post in writing workshop and ask others to read it over for you.
Good start though.