Player Comments on High School Romance
Your very first game… and from a long time ago. How does it have so few comments? No matter, I’m here to put my two cents in. I have to admit, though, this is going to be tough: with the setup you’ve given in the comment and on the first page, I’m not getting my hopes up too high for this one, and I think that’s the point now. Well, if this shall be an example for others, I’ll attempt to help by attempting to clearly point out things that I think can be improved.
First page: “Hey, this is my first game.” You know, I get why people put that there. In fact, I’m pretty sure I have used almost those exact words. But that actually gets old quite quickly. After all, this story appears to be 12 years old when I’m writing this comment, and it will just get older. Again, I understand why people write that, but unless you’re sure you’re going to take the story down in a few days, I think that actually takes away from the story – it sets the story up for failure before we even start reading.
It’s a fair setup on the first page. I do really like that I’ve got a lot of options on the first page. SO many stories start out the first page with a link to the second page, so this is very nice for a choose your own story site. But that page could be developed a bit more to give hints or clues. I get that I don’t have a date and I’m shy, but I’m not completely sure which is my best avenue for success with these choices. Maybe that’s the point, but I like to perhaps have a little tiny hint or two as to which choices might work out better for me.
I went all out and for Kelly. My story ended quite quickly. It was nice that there was a pretty clear hint on that second page that I was going to go down in flames! That’s what I’m talking about when I mentioned little hints to help the reader select the option that will succeed. Playing again, I’m not sure I liked the colored dialogue. It is nice that it is clear when someone else is talking, but the red font confused me at first. I did manage to get the date, but only after clicking through a bit.
It was a nice, very short story. It does show potential and others who read this should be inspired by this as a starting point!
on 5/6/2018 10:54:14 PM with a score of 0
It was to short and it didn't even tell what happened at the dance.
-- Ronin on 9/23/2020 1:47:17 PM with a score of 0
this was too short and i didn't like it very much.
-- mia on 9/2/2020 5:22:44 PM with a score of 0
-- Jagraj Singh Grewal on 7/13/2020 10:59:07 PM with a score of 0
the best ever
-- Batisane on 7/8/2020 11:12:49 AM with a score of 0
it was okay but u should add some photos
-- hab on 6/16/2020 6:17:48 AM with a score of 0
can I play the game
-- chelsey on 6/9/2020 9:00:45 AM with a score of 0
It was okaaayy i guess??
-- ram on 6/7/2020 11:47:40 PM with a score of 0
-- josh on 6/7/2020 2:31:15 AM with a score of 0
this was great since im a cuck
-- scott on 5/31/2020 2:06:10 AM with a score of 0
I love this game
-- lainey on 5/7/2020 4:45:05 PM with a score of 0
I would rate the game higher but nothing is better than Reeses
-- Alexandra on 4/25/2020 3:48:24 AM with a score of 0
i like your game virtual,so much fun person in game
-- andrea abigail on 4/11/2020 10:49:41 PM with a score of 0
amazing! I always wanted to be kissed ?????????????? I love reeses
-- daniel payne on 4/3/2020 4:00:23 PM with a score of 0
-- FakingG00d on 3/25/2020 6:30:03 AM with a score of 0
Hey I liked your game it was kinda hard but also it was very short. If you make a new one can you make it longer plz?
-- Josilyn on 2/15/2020 7:18:37 PM with a score of 0
This was short, but honestly just super cute.
Definitely you would give this an 8 as it brought enlightenment to my soul. ??
-- Kiri on 1/14/2020 5:35:27 AM with a score of 0
It's really good, but too short
-- RJ on 1/9/2020 6:03:20 PM with a score of 0
i fucked shawna
-- lol on 1/4/2020 10:17:55 PM with a score of 0
-- no on 12/18/2019 7:23:49 PM with a score of 0
Not that bad
-- Frenia on 11/16/2019 5:38:03 AM with a score of 0
I guess I enjoy the fact that I can get Rachel and Shawna, but pissed that Kelly won't even look my way
on 11/1/2019 8:12:02 PM with a score of 0
-- Talia on 10/4/2019 4:55:51 PM with a score of 0
I like you so much
-- victoria on 9/30/2019 9:54:49 PM with a score of 0
I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVED IT
on 9/20/2019 11:30:02 AM with a score of 0
Well it is good maybe
-- Evan Larson on 8/22/2019 7:12:49 PM with a score of 0
-- Alex on 8/2/2019 6:04:06 PM with a score of 0
Hi! It was great but you should TOTALLY make it longer! It was awesome, but then I got disappointed when it ended so quickly! Please consider, I'm sure others feel the same. No hate, and keep up the good work!
-- Me on 6/8/2019 12:04:49 AM with a score of 0
bleh its boreing
-- mariene on 5/11/2019 5:18:57 PM with a score of 0
This was a great game and I really enjoyed, but can you choose more girls to go on a date with? I would really appreciate it
-- Unicornstar001 on 4/28/2019 10:11:51 AM with a score of 0
Its awesome, but can you add more endings?
-- Jacob on 4/22/2019 5:53:58 AM with a score of 0
-- emily on 4/8/2019 1:01:55 PM with a score of 0
Good Job! I'm impressed by this considering that it was your first time.
-- Brianna on 4/3/2019 5:40:21 PM with a score of 0
I like it I would not reamend it tho
-- Lie on 3/27/2019 2:13:04 PM with a score of 0
i didn't get the point of this game
-- not telling you on 2/27/2019 10:17:30 PM with a score of 0
OMG so great. You know, mabie that will happen to me somday ;)
-- Saaaaaauuuuukkk TRAILER on 2/25/2019 7:33:48 PM with a score of 0
A bit short i want to know what hapens after she says yrs...
-- Bbb on 2/22/2019 3:16:10 AM with a score of 0
Luved it! Very interesting to know what would happen if you did or didn’t do something.
-- Crystal Rose on 2/16/2019 1:40:32 PM with a score of 0
ok so the only reason i said it was slightly better than homework is because 1 there is nothing ti look at 2 its very shot and i no ur probly working on another one bou like at least put some other things than those choices and endings
-- a person on 2/10/2019 6:55:01 PM with a score of 0
Ah not the best but pretty good maybe some picture`s would help.
-- cate on 2/1/2019 4:25:57 PM with a score of 0
u friggen suc, ur choices r really douchey, no 1 would talk to a guy like dat, Rachel isn't funny, and learn how to write axehole. Also, ur plot is crud. -yeeeeet
-- NO on 1/13/2019 10:25:24 PM with a score of 0
it would be better if dress up your person
-- mystry person on 1/10/2019 11:45:05 AM with a score of 0
-- Egg on 1/7/2019 2:41:00 AM with a score of 0
Really great, but it could be a little longer. I gave it a 7/8.
-- A. on 12/28/2018 10:20:59 PM with a score of 0
the worst game ever
-- jacklevop liuyt on 12/28/2018 3:03:12 PM with a score of 0
It was kind of a cute story, but I wish it had more depth and juiciness, ya know? But, this is your first story, so I guess it's okay for the very first.
-- Anonymous on 12/28/2018 1:57:09 PM with a score of 0
-- Ella on 12/24/2018 2:24:47 AM with a score of 0
-- faith on 12/22/2018 1:33:00 AM with a score of 0
Its good, well plot and it shows if you not good or in the game you will never win. Points for that but what it needed is depth something more than a simple can you go out with. MAKE IT RISE MORE
-- vicky on 12/7/2018 4:46:45 AM with a score of 0
-- Lollypop on 12/2/2018 9:32:37 PM with a score of 0
It was interesting, however not much of a story there. You either get a date or you don't, the end. On the positive side, you can redo the story a bunch of times and it still would take more than 5 minutes. I am sure as you write more stories you will get better, I do see potential.
on 10/2/2018 5:26:05 PM with a score of 0
I love this it’s so cute I wish it continued I wanted to find out what happened later.
-- Plasma on 9/10/2018 8:16:07 AM with a score of 0
Too short, terrible
-- squishy on 9/10/2018 12:30:44 AM with a score of 0
fun game. easy... maybe to easy. a little short
-- Crystal on 9/2/2018 1:14:48 PM with a score of 0
I really like this game. It gives you an idea of how a boy might ask you to a dance.
-- Mae on 9/1/2018 4:36:55 AM with a score of 0
It was good wish it was longer tho
-- Bailey on 8/31/2018 1:38:33 PM with a score of 0
I want a female version plz.
-- Rachel on 8/27/2018 11:00:55 PM with a score of 0
It is not really that fun but I didn't have much of a choice. But I am sure that if you keep going and making choose your story games it is positive that your games like these will become more thrilling! You can do it!!!
-- Bella on 8/27/2018 12:57:00 PM with a score of 0
it too short
-- bob on 8/18/2018 11:40:29 PM with a score of 0
not even romantic,,,
-- Why should i tell u on 8/18/2018 6:03:38 PM with a score of 0
a bit short
-- hi on 7/30/2018 6:08:36 AM with a score of 0
wow not what i expected but in a good way
-- ava on 7/27/2018 6:22:19 AM with a score of 0
i think it should be longer and with more romance in it. Maybe even more stories
-- laila on 7/11/2018 9:49:58 AM with a score of 0
Great Game! This was worth the time!
-- hi on 6/22/2018 10:03:01 PM with a score of 0
It was really good. But it is obviously better than mine. I don't know how to make one!
on 6/14/2018 4:08:43 PM with a score of 0
its boring because its not long enough
-- Zaquirah on 6/11/2018 10:43:28 AM with a score of 0
But I am not a boy...keep writing??
-- Anime_girl on 6/3/2018 3:25:02 PM with a score of 0
hey can we more of those please
-- lucy on 5/17/2018 10:25:10 AM with a score of 0
It was a bit short
-- Bobby on 5/5/2018 4:23:51 AM with a score of 0
I got it right the second time
-- boden on 4/30/2018 3:34:03 PM with a score of 0
-- Amanda Moore on 4/26/2018 2:44:44 PM with a score of 0
Short and sweet, just like Rachel
on 3/28/2018 4:08:56 PM with a score of 0
-- McKenna on 3/10/2018 10:12:49 AM with a score of 0
Hey I loved it it was simple yet hard thanks ????????
-- Rae on 2/22/2018 2:12:46 AM with a score of 0
-- yboidagoat on 2/7/2018 6:12:58 PM with a score of 0
-- Mr. Doodlebird on 1/24/2018 9:18:06 AM with a score of 0
It is great. I know it was hard to make but I wish that it was longer. Also maybe more characters and have scenes actually at the dance. I kinda wanted to go alone and meet someone there...
-- wowlookaname on 1/15/2018 12:26:13 AM with a score of 0
this made me feel idk i love the feeling that he kept telling her more and more info bout his self i mean i would love it if my crush gray winfree acted like that with me wow i just wantedd to celebrate reading all this wow!
-- penelope on 1/10/2018 9:46:06 AM with a score of 0
Great but wished there was more!
-- Emilien on 1/2/2018 12:59:26 AM with a score of 0
It’s a little short; but other than that it’s not bad.
-- FN1-287 on 12/22/2017 1:04:48 AM with a score of 0
-- Gigi on 12/17/2017 4:41:23 PM with a score of 0
this was enjoyable. i guess
-- jany on 12/13/2017 10:45:03 AM with a score of 0
Well, It'd be a lot better if it was longer. But at least ya tried, bud!
on 12/3/2017 10:01:45 PM with a score of 0
this game is so so so so so so so so stupid
-- hi on 11/18/2017 2:22:21 PM with a score of 0
NeverMind I got one!
-- Shadow on 11/10/2017 6:24:20 PM with a score of 0
I love this but um...I haven't gotten a stinking date yet.Not like I need one..Right? LOVE'D IT!
-- Shadow on 11/10/2017 6:23:01 PM with a score of 0
Nice. But short so actually trashy.??
-- Anna on 11/5/2017 1:55:51 PM with a score of 0
i loved it sike boring ass hell
-- i kjfhf on 10/25/2017 6:42:10 PM with a score of 0
You need to make it more exciting but I liked it but I think it needs more
-- Beth on 10/18/2017 10:20:38 AM with a score of 0
-- ....... on 10/5/2017 7:21:33 PM with a score of 0
It was very good, but it was too short, i would like if it had more depth in it, but overall it would make for a very good game
-- Chaos Knight on 9/1/2017 12:56:36 PM with a score of 0
"you seem like my kind of guy" :'( *sigh* i was RPing a lesbian lol
on 8/7/2017 7:23:42 AM with a score of 0
It wasn't the greatest game more quick and a little boring because there wasn't detailed things nor was the game even long it was amazingly short.
-- Lonely one on 7/6/2017 8:53:19 PM with a score of 0
ya it coool
-- bob.com on 6/29/2017 8:49:21 PM with a score of 0
it was no fun no visual things not a real game
-- dede on 6/23/2017 5:00:54 PM with a score of 0
For what it's worth, a good game! Considering this was your first, it doesn't really matter that it was so short, the realism was at least there. Good job!
-- Kingdomville on 6/8/2017 3:09:49 AM with a score of 0
It was fun
-- Magdalyn on 6/6/2017 12:07:37 AM with a score of 0
I hate it
-- Chris on 5/31/2017 1:39:01 PM with a score of 0
it was kinda boring
-- hello on 5/30/2017 8:34:57 PM with a score of 0
Amazing love it make some more you are an awesome author
-- Anna on 5/27/2017 3:46:57 PM with a score of 0
was that all?
-- lilli on 5/23/2017 11:12:28 PM with a score of 0
-- no on 5/13/2017 7:14:44 PM with a score of 0
then worst app in da book
-- Samore on 5/11/2017 3:49:55 PM with a score of 0
-- Puglover on 5/3/2017 5:49:27 PM with a score of 0
-- Kyle on 4/29/2017 5:08:06 PM with a score of 0
GREAT LOVE ALL THE DRAMA KEEP MAKING MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!! ps:plz make them longer!
-- Yurio on 4/29/2017 10:20:24 AM with a score of 0
really funny but short
-- yo on 4/25/2017 2:47:06 PM with a score of 0
it was funny but SUPER SHORT!!!
-- no one in particular on 4/18/2017 7:03:34 PM with a score of 0
-- hfhfjgj on 4/16/2017 4:43:28 PM with a score of 0
I DID IT HELL YEAH
-- Khyrah on 4/15/2017 7:08:56 PM with a score of 0
-- bob on 4/12/2017 3:48:01 PM with a score of 0
thats a really cool game to play if you want to ask somebody out to the dance
-- Thobela on 4/10/2017 5:17:05 AM with a score of 0
Ok, should be longer
-- Kk on 4/5/2017 3:20:04 PM with a score of 0
-- anaa on 3/25/2017 9:37:34 AM with a score of 0
it was funny
-- lily on 3/18/2017 10:53:23 AM with a score of 0
it was absoloutley rubbish what was the whole point of the story on the stag option
-- Lunchisthebest on 3/12/2017 8:57:51 AM with a score of 0
Cool story! I like it!
on 3/9/2017 5:13:47 AM with a score of 0
You could make it a bit longer.
on 3/8/2017 5:00:04 PM with a score of 0
It's boring non fun at all you don't get many choices and it goes by fast.
-- Ashlynne on 2/25/2017 6:45:41 PM with a score of 0
Great story! I wish it were longer, though, because it's really good! Maybe you could make part 2 of this...?
-- Katrina on 2/21/2017 1:44:46 PM with a score of 0
Ok..so I liked it, but it was short. ;-; I wanted to continue!!!
on 2/14/2017 9:43:50 PM with a score of 0
I have done it 3 times and I loved it every time
-- hihihi on 1/25/2017 5:10:53 PM with a score of 0
on 1/25/2017 4:57:30 PM with a score of 0
It could have been longer then It would have been beter
-- Faith on 1/20/2017 2:46:19 AM with a score of 0
Good for ur first story... Congrats I give you 9/10 stars!
-- 2017 Reader on 1/16/2017 8:12:46 PM with a score of 0
-- Kyle Evans on 1/15/2017 4:55:05 PM with a score of 0
Awesome ending! It took me a while to figure it out, but it was worth it!
-- barnesyboy333 on 1/4/2017 9:35:09 PM with a score of 0
really good for your first go! just what i was looking for!
-- koolkatkid on 1/3/2017 2:29:29 AM with a score of 0
-- emma on 1/2/2017 5:35:45 PM with a score of 0
its kind of short, and i was hoping for more, but its good!
-- Ang on 1/2/2017 8:53:20 AM with a score of 0
It is so call I found a girlfriend
-- Jay on 1/1/2017 4:25:18 PM with a score of 0
Kelly needs a chance or there is no point and no challenge
-- Chris on 12/26/2016 1:14:16 AM with a score of 0
It was a little short and I saw the ending of the path I chose from a mile away. However, it did have a well-written composition and was thought through
-- . on 12/22/2016 11:18:12 PM with a score of 0
This game is so stupid!
-- Alex on 12/18/2016 7:19:44 PM with a score of 0
i like it love choose your story games so this was pretty fun to do
-- ariyanna on 12/17/2016 2:14:41 PM with a score of 0
It sucked because it was literally two questions.
-- ava on 12/13/2016 4:42:33 PM with a score of 0
it was pretty good but it should be longer
-- lilly on 12/9/2016 10:19:45 AM with a score of 0
Not very many date options right from the beginning. I chose to go alone cuz I hoped I'd have an option of a guy once I got there, but you just moaned about my choice.
-- BYou y Byby on 11/29/2016 1:19:09 AM with a score of 0
Okay. I asked Shawna to go out, clicked on a couple options, and the next thing you know, we're gay. Thanks a lot.
-- Chloe on 11/29/2016 12:33:39 AM with a score of 0
no picture this suck never ever play this xoxoxo
-- sandy on 11/28/2016 1:42:19 PM with a score of 0
-- petra on 11/28/2016 11:40:51 AM with a score of 0
on 11/28/2016 12:44:56 AM with a score of 0
-- Brooke on 11/27/2016 8:10:59 PM with a score of 0
Is the character a boy or girl?
-- kc40140 on 11/19/2016 3:39:13 PM with a score of 0
I actually quite enjoyed it. I bet everyone says it's really really short in story. If your willing to make more "Pick your own path" romance stories, then count me in!
-- Ryan Vang on 11/6/2016 12:18:21 AM with a score of 0
You are good at making these, but I think you should make one for girls to.
-- Abby on 10/28/2016 6:48:24 AM with a score of 0
It was over in less than a minute
-- Amelia on 10/26/2016 12:12:59 AM with a score of 0
i liked it
on 10/6/2016 9:37:06 PM with a score of 0
it was so cool!
-- Amy Byce on 10/3/2016 6:16:59 PM with a score of 0
it was meh...
-- nobody important on 9/21/2016 4:38:17 PM with a score of 0
The game was really good to play in my spare time and I had fun playing it.
-- poo on 8/29/2016 6:39:27 PM with a score of 0
it needs to be longer i am looking for real romance like a long MAKE OUT or SEX add those things
-- jasmine smith on 8/28/2016 9:51:35 PM with a score of 0
short,sweet and to the point.
on 8/17/2016 7:16:47 PM with a score of 0
-- magic land on 7/19/2016 11:11:00 AM with a score of 0
Too short had promise at first
Then ended 2 minutes in
-- Belsnickel on 7/14/2016 1:28:23 AM with a score of 0
It was pretty good but it finished too quickly!
-- Evie on 6/24/2016 4:16:38 AM with a score of 0
Why is it bad to go stag?
on 6/15/2016 7:02:07 PM with a score of 0
Great game, I love how you can end up with Rachel and Shawna
-- Summer on 6/9/2016 4:08:33 PM with a score of 0
I think it's great! It took me a little while to get it right but when I did I just wanted to play it more! I really like how you worded everything! How do I get this game?
-- Summer on 6/9/2016 4:04:48 PM with a score of 0
-- Katie on 6/8/2016 10:33:37 PM with a score of 0
I LOVE this game
-- Katy on 6/8/2016 1:31:12 PM with a score of 0
Haha this was hilarious!
I'm actually a straight girl and i was really bored but this was fun!
You should make one for girls.
-- A girl on 5/20/2016 10:17:04 PM with a score of 0
It was good. Just wish it was longer
-- Ya boy on 5/18/2016 6:57:42 PM with a score of 0
Although it was really short but hey this isn't worst at all for a first timer. Keep it up and just make some more stories a little longer. :)
on 5/10/2016 10:36:38 PM with a score of 0
I think that if you only go for one option, it seems too short, but after I tried all of them out, I enjoyed it! ???????????? I like that you end up with Shawna
-- Kyle on 5/9/2016 8:26:15 AM with a score of 0
huh too short.
-- olivia on 5/3/2016 5:35:31 PM with a score of 0
I think you should not listen to bad comments.you did good it was fun:).
-- kiki on 4/12/2016 8:32:54 PM with a score of 0
I liked it, although it was too short :/
on 3/19/2016 12:57:21 AM with a score of 0
i thought it was really GREAT its just its too short
-- luna heart on 3/18/2016 2:41:05 AM with a score of 0
its way to short and its boring
-- kij on 3/11/2016 7:43:47 PM with a score of 0
it is too short
-- Katelyn on 3/5/2016 4:49:00 PM with a score of 0
It's not good to say the least , should be longer as well .
on 2/12/2016 1:29:46 PM with a score of 0
Uh. Well, kind of boring.
on 2/11/2016 6:35:55 PM with a score of 0
-- tcgvvd on 2/5/2016 5:48:23 PM with a score of 0
not anything much, but first try so I guess not the worst
on 1/26/2016 2:48:42 PM with a score of 0
-- veronica on 1/25/2016 11:06:05 PM with a score of 0
Boom! Got gf first try
on 1/15/2016 3:48:13 AM with a score of 0
Why am I as a girl, doing this lol :$. It's very funny ;)
on 1/10/2016 9:49:04 AM with a score of 0
hahaha, this is cool, I wish it was that easy for me, otherwise, I would have like 10 girls that I would ask.
on 12/14/2015 3:50:50 PM with a score of 0
on 12/7/2015 7:18:00 PM with a score of 0
-- Andrea King on 12/5/2015 12:52:12 PM with a score of 0
I was ok, honestly a bit fast.
-- David on 12/3/2015 2:37:03 PM with a score of 0
it was good.
-- tay on 12/2/2015 10:19:22 PM with a score of 0
I gave this a 5/8, because it was pretty short and there was an occasional spelling mistake. My real rating is something like 5.5, though.
on 11/24/2015 5:54:58 PM with a score of 0
please bring it to next level (longer version)
on 11/23/2015 12:35:33 PM with a score of 0
As short and "bad" as it may be, it makes me laugh. I love it :D
on 9/19/2015 9:08:27 PM with a score of 0
Idk.. Alright I guess
-- Pearl on 8/26/2015 1:48:09 PM with a score of 0
I like it, it's a little short but really cool.
-- Peter on 8/23/2015 7:01:48 AM with a score of 0
Great! But is there a version for girls?
on 7/23/2015 5:55:03 PM with a score of 0
they should make one for girls honestly
-- jessica on 7/21/2015 6:17:05 PM with a score of 0
Fine what I expected and very imaginative.
-- Art on 7/4/2015 1:20:53 PM with a score of 0
Longer is all I got to say. I love it
-- Not saying on 6/23/2015 4:01:41 PM with a score of 0
Yeah. Not great, but definitely better than a lot of other romance stories on the site.
on 6/23/2015 1:49:39 PM with a score of 0
on 6/23/2015 1:28:01 PM with a score of 0
4/8 i got racheal to go with me. Its not a bad story so hate to rate low, but too short to give it a good score so you get a 4
on 6/21/2015 3:15:56 PM with a score of 0
You just tuat me how to get a girlfrend
-- I love you on 6/1/2015 4:26:52 PM with a score of 0
You should add the option to date boys. Otherwise nice.
on 5/12/2015 7:03:18 PM with a score of 0
Short, but really fun.
on 4/25/2015 10:54:01 PM with a score of 0
ugh, so homophobic :( what about the lgbt community? or even if your just a heterosexual girl?
-- name on 4/24/2015 6:16:06 PM with a score of 0
That was a little hard to figure out which one, but very good for a first timer!
on 4/21/2015 9:21:05 AM with a score of 0
I got a date
-- Jhtv on 4/19/2015 7:25:18 AM with a score of 0
It is awsome I LOVE IT
on 4/9/2015 7:36:17 AM with a score of 0
That was great!
on 3/31/2015 7:48:09 PM with a score of 0
It was easy and I love it.
on 3/26/2015 3:15:23 PM with a score of 0
It was so stupid, with context that would never fit the real world. Open your eyes to life! Do better, or I will tell all my blog followers not to read your stories!
-- Claire on 3/22/2015 2:01:03 AM with a score of 0
I thought that the point of this story was to be confident...
Until I asked Kelly out.
-- A on 3/21/2015 11:30:31 PM with a score of 0
Humorous and playfull I like it
on 3/16/2015 6:50:54 PM with a score of 0
I wasn't too good. I'm sure it does work, just not the combination of my answers. :)
-- Hermione on 3/8/2015 7:43:09 AM with a score of 0
wish it were longer
-- ellie on 3/7/2015 9:15:26 PM with a score of 0
That was a really good story,Did you come up with it on you're own?
on 2/20/2015 1:56:04 PM with a score of 0
I LOVED YOUR STORY :D #ilovecaps
-- Srinkles on 2/9/2015 12:46:52 AM with a score of 0
I had to retry 3 times
-- jordan on 2/1/2015 12:27:23 AM with a score of 0
Fast and easy to understand I like that
on 1/25/2015 9:54:35 PM with a score of 0
What I've learned from this:
A) I don't seem to know how to ask girls on dates
B) You can make a good story-game that is short
Like you said a few minor drawbacks like telling a reader how to respond at the start of the story but far better than the first story-game (or gamebook) I ever wrote
on 1/14/2015 1:18:26 AM with a score of 0
It was pretty good. I think there should have been more options.
on 1/9/2015 8:58:47 PM with a score of 0
Short. I just realized they always make boy get girl stories instead of girl get boy stories. I guess it sorta makes sense though, if you think about it.
on 1/3/2015 4:52:06 PM with a score of 0
Originally I disliked the story. Now, I'm watching it while listening to the soundtrack from Inception. That music makes everything feel epic, so I must rate this 5/8.
on 12/26/2014 10:11:04 PM with a score of 0
Nice game, really shows how easy it is to get a date in a story game but in real life it is not that easy.
on 12/11/2014 7:18:18 AM with a score of 0
Im finding games for my neighbors,
they are so cute!
Anyways i found this and i was thinking maybe you
could maybe make it longer,
I think it was too short or something like that,
Anyways have a great day,
-- Selena Gomez on 12/8/2014 12:15:58 PM with a score of 0
Boring but better then sitting doing homework so ya i guess
-- Savanna Ranerceed on 12/8/2014 12:13:57 PM with a score of 0
on 12/6/2014 3:53:15 PM with a score of 0
-- mia on 11/30/2014 2:35:17 PM with a score of 0
I wish it were that easy in real life. Nice!
on 11/20/2014 10:42:40 PM with a score of 0
Quite a short game, but entertaining. I would love to see an expansion where the player goes to the dance, or gets asked by someone after securing a date with someone else. A good first attempt! :)
-- Vi on 11/10/2014 3:45:11 AM with a score of 0
on 11/8/2014 7:12:09 PM with a score of 0
-- alex on 9/27/2014 1:30:45 AM with a score of 0
-- robert on 9/12/2014 8:43:29 PM with a score of 0
yea imma stud!!!
-- romeo on 9/10/2014 1:59:31 PM with a score of 0
it was really really really short
on 8/18/2014 3:34:06 PM with a score of 0
Off the Chain!
-- Walter on 8/7/2014 5:14:04 PM with a score of 0
It was a short and cute story but could of done with more character development.
on 7/26/2014 8:45:59 AM with a score of 0
I love it I just wish it was longer.
on 7/25/2014 12:11:57 PM with a score of 0
Utter crap. There is NO storyline, no alternatives or character personalities...just...No...
-- You are not a good story on 7/24/2014 12:57:46 AM with a score of 0
on 7/3/2014 11:11:23 PM with a score of 0
This is the very first story I wrote for this site. It's terrible, but I keep it up here to encourage other writers.
Even if your first story sucks as much as this one, you can get better.
on 5/27/2014 2:13:46 PM with a score of 0
If u choose that u are going alone then say u r sure it says this:
"You go to the homecoming dance by yourself. And somewhere, miles away, a lonely story writer sighs at the thought of the ENTIRE STORY that you missed."
-- what? on 5/25/2014 10:06:01 AM with a score of 0
Ok do not choose "I'll go stag" If you do she says...
You go to the dance alone and somewhere in the distance a story writer sighs that you missed the whole story
-- WOW on 5/24/2014 9:27:30 AM with a score of 0
So ichose reacheal and if you dont click "hi" she gets sooo mad
-- Anonymous on 5/24/2014 9:22:45 AM with a score of 0
most stupidest game ever, my opinion anyways. way to short, sorry but i dont like it :)
-- Aria on 5/20/2014 7:58:30 PM with a score of 0
its really funny if you ask racheal. (Sorry if i spelt that wrong).
Kelly is a bitch and you can't ask her out anyway. She needs to die, oh wait she would probably go stag because no one but the dumb boys would ask her out
-- AgentS4 on 4/17/2014 2:29:15 AM with a score of 0
Good, but short.
on 4/13/2014 11:03:17 AM with a score of 0
THIS IS WAAAAY TOO SHORT!!!! I was actually getting interested. Seriously, it was great. I WANT MOOOORE!!! But it did kinda hurt when Kelly laughed at me :( LOL I really liked Rachel's ending, and really Shawna's needed more detail. Again, TOO FRIGGIN SHORT!!!
on 2/27/2014 7:01:37 PM with a score of 0
I have a friend named Rachel Zoe Des "Coco" Chanel irl and i dont want to invite her!
on 1/10/2014 8:50:42 PM with a score of 0
-- Soph on 12/30/2013 10:29:36 PM with a score of 0
Got the darn date
-- ;) on 12/27/2013 6:39:38 PM with a score of 0
NICE , NOT THE BEST , TOO SHORT!
on 11/21/2013 6:30:31 AM with a score of 0
Nice game, wish the character had more choices though.
on 11/4/2013 12:27:25 PM with a score of 0
It is acually alright.I like it ;p
on 10/31/2013 5:59:49 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this, especially with shawna. I kinda have a huge crush on a girl who has become my best friend. But, as of now, we're just friends. This story just speaks to me in a way.
-- Josiah Blizzard on 10/23/2013 1:06:28 PM with a score of 0
I got Shawna!
-- Kelly Sucks on 10/14/2013 8:18:13 PM with a score of 0
really fun game, first time I played it I decided to be SUPER freaking nice and got the new girl as my GF.... then I realised that that was kinda boring... so i then promptly went on an Alpha Male rampage, 'yeah, you can go to the dance with me.' 'I only wanted you cuase another guy wanted you' Etc.
Also, why is everyone complaining about not getting Kelly? The guys just being honest, ya know...
-- Who really cares? on 8/14/2013 10:05:38 PM with a score of 0
Well, needs more penis
on 8/9/2013 4:54:32 AM with a score of 0
Short and sweet. ^-^
-- LittleMissNice on 8/5/2013 10:31:15 PM with a score of 0
Yay! I got a date! My life is complete
on 7/18/2013 4:54:11 PM with a score of 0
This was cute and fun to do!!! <3
-- Ashley :) on 7/9/2013 9:35:27 PM with a score of 0
I think its to short
-- nun yo buisness on 6/5/2013 3:03:55 PM with a score of 0
I like the game. I just thought that you could add some discriptions about what happened to the dance. But I liked the game.
on 5/20/2013 9:58:59 PM with a score of 0
Love this game, hoping that there will be
something like Girlfriend Romance. And i love the characters!
-- A Fan on 5/10/2013 3:38:34 PM with a score of 0
Should be something for Kelly
on 5/9/2013 7:48:38 PM with a score of 0
A bit too brief, and the endings seem to cut you off. Not really much though in it either, pretty vapid.
-- Some Guy on 4/26/2013 3:10:25 AM with a score of 0
It was good I just think you should have had some sort of chance with Kelly.
on 4/2/2013 2:42:51 PM with a score of 0
um... a just a tiny bit WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HAVING THIS SO SHORT IT WAS SO GOOD! yeah, maybe have it a bit longer, and going into the actual dance and beyond.
on 3/9/2013 9:06:55 PM with a score of 0
This junk is funny.
on 3/7/2013 8:47:06 PM with a score of 0
Not bad at all, for this type of game. It's short but it's fun experimenting and playing different cards.
-- Millennium on 1/22/2013 11:07:51 AM with a score of 0
on 1/17/2013 6:15:23 PM with a score of 0
Well written, but as everyone else said, too short... you should revamp it, maybe make it a bit more difficult to get a date, and make some option where you may actually be able to get the popular girl as well.
on 1/10/2013 11:45:40 AM with a score of 0
I completed this in 15 seconds
Rachael all the way!
on 12/28/2012 3:41:53 PM with a score of 0
great story. loved the ending
on 12/5/2012 2:42:01 PM with a score of 0
Awhh, this was really cute. I really liked the ending where you got to go with your best friend.
on 11/6/2012 5:03:40 PM with a score of 0
Super Cute, Absolutley Lovely
-- Emily on 9/14/2012 1:06:33 PM with a score of 0
LOVED it. It was short and sweet and I asked out shwana
-- Morgan on 8/24/2012 8:17:57 PM with a score of 0
It's worth every cent.... so how about you throw me some change? :D Seriously, I enjoyed this, but it was way too short. Moar! For your first story, this is really good! Seeing as I've read some of your other stories, I know you can make a good one. How about revamping this some time? I'd love to see what you come up with! SEQUEL!!!
on 8/15/2012 2:47:59 AM with a score of 0
Cute. Very enjoyable.
on 8/3/2012 11:17:40 PM with a score of 0
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to short
-- katerang717 on 7/22/2012 9:15:57 AM with a score of 0
Short but enjoyable
on 6/20/2012 11:37:50 AM with a score of 0
omg i loved it and if your womndering yes im bi email me back plz laterz grt work make more
-- Katie Joy on 6/13/2012 5:22:44 PM with a score of 0
Shallow waters my friend.
on 6/12/2012 7:03:47 PM with a score of 0
Not bad. I liked it. Could do with more depth to the story.
on 5/17/2012 8:27:02 PM with a score of 0
love it !!!
-- cali on 5/3/2012 12:04:14 AM with a score of 0
Should be longer
on 4/21/2012 10:19:47 AM with a score of 0
Really short, but i love the effort and story line. has ALOT of potential.
on 3/20/2012 2:06:59 AM with a score of 0
nice story for a first one
on 3/13/2012 2:27:05 PM with a score of 0
This was a cool idea. You get to ignore the rejection and the anxiety and just become a character. I'd recommend more girl options and descriptions of the girls. Play upon the teenage boy insecurities like looks or masculinity. How about a rival? (Or maybe I didn't try that option) It was a fun fantasy.
on 1/16/2012 10:12:59 AM with a score of 0
It was a good story for each character but you should try making it longer.
on 11/15/2011 11:27:07 AM with a score of 0
Ok pretty good Sethaniel has way better works though...like Snow...
on 11/11/2011 1:46:29 PM with a score of 0
Short, sweet, and to the point. Okay I guess.
on 9/23/2011 1:05:31 PM with a score of 0
on 9/10/2011 4:48:09 PM with a score of 0
Got the "perfect w/ rachel" ending.... Short and sweet, plus i liked the joke in there... no the best, but DEFINITLY NOT the worst!
-- Kayy on 8/27/2011 2:38:39 PM with a score of 0
it was cool especially the joke for the stag ending pretty funny
on 7/31/2011 12:55:27 PM with a score of 0
-- Coral on 6/28/2011 7:29:33 PM with a score of 0
Good story! short, but good:)
on 6/28/2011 10:34:34 AM with a score of 0
I played all the paths and I really enjoyed the joke about you sighing miles away.
on 6/6/2011 2:33:48 AM with a score of 0
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on 4/24/2011 4:24:10 PM with a score of 0
again, good story! needs to be longer...again. but this thing caught my interest and i wanted to try all the endings! hope you write more!
on 12/3/2010 9:32:30 PM with a score of 0
good game! but, ya, needs to be longer.
on 12/3/2010 9:27:26 PM with a score of 0
Awesome! But needs to be longer.
-- Missy on 11/7/2010 5:26:26 PM with a score of 0
It is really cute. I feel like it ends abruptly- tell us what happens at the dance. I think your writing is good:)
on 3/29/2010 11:04:21 PM with a score of 0
Seth, your games leave my speechless.
on 4/10/2009 7:15:52 PM with a score of 0
Short but sweet. I thought it was a very nice first attempt. :)
on 10/28/2008 12:25:56 AM with a score of 0
It would've been nice to actually go to the dance, but for a first game, it was pretty good.
on 4/5/2008 3:19:11 PM with a score of 0
Pretty realistic, I'm a good friend that didn't get a date to the dance : (
on 1/29/2008 7:46:50 PM with a score of 0
I got dumped. *sniffle*
on 1/27/2008 7:03:29 PM with a score of 0
This game is like the stapels button, easy.
on 1/24/2008 7:27:32 AM with a score of 0
Okay, this was your first game but, it could've been written better. I hope I can do one.
-- Orin on 10/21/2007 9:15:20 PM with a score of 0
awww that was cute!
on 6/5/2007 12:56:41 PM with a score of 0
good simple nice fun story made sense -realistic
-- choco on 3/2/2007 11:32:27 PM with a score of 0
on 3/2/2007 7:21:26 PM with a score of 0
Hey! Look at that! a gasme that's pretty good in the love and dating section! Amazing!
on 2/28/2007 6:13:03 PM with a score of 0
I played this one in thanks for your having rated my quizzes. The whole love-and-dating category isn't really my thing, but... in this game, I got a date to the dance. Hurray! (Seriously though, this seems to be an accurate depiction of high school romance....)
on 12/9/2006 8:24:52 PM with a score of 0
needsmwork and pictures
-- sam on 12/2/2006 7:04:42 PM with a score of 0
That was nice, but a bit short, good overall.
on 11/30/2006 8:29:02 PM with a score of 0
Pleasant, with nice twists that may or may not hone social skills!
on 11/21/2006 11:20:18 AM with a score of 0
good game bit way too short. next time make it longer
on 11/13/2006 2:17:36 PM with a score of 0
it was fun, but it was too short.
on 11/13/2006 10:40:43 AM with a score of 0
on 10/8/2006 5:44:11 PM with a score of 0
Hm, noce dating game. Prolly one of the best, might I add! If it was longer, it'd be perfect, but of course, first games can't be Magus material, if you know what I'm sayin'.
on 10/8/2006 4:09:19 PM with a score of 0
I got Shawna. But uhh...I didn't really think her response was a yes.
on 10/7/2006 2:36:39 PM with a score of 0
Pretty well written and mildly interesting. Good job for a first story.
on 10/6/2006 4:51:02 PM with a score of 0
I thought it was okay.
on 10/4/2006 5:01:08 PM with a score of 0
It's fun, and descriptive, but loses points for being too short.
on 10/3/2006 7:34:38 PM with a score of 0
I won! Kinda short. Work on your future stories and make 'em longer.
on 10/2/2006 9:09:34 PM with a score of 0
not a bad little adventure. but thats just it, it was too short. now that you have the hang of this make a longer story.
on 10/2/2006 2:33:02 PM with a score of 0