Player Comments on Homo Perfectus 7

not as good as 1

good, good, nice beans and toasty endings

i. love. it.

This was a great story, with a sort of twist at the end. I really enjoyed reading it. The character development was also very good, and I liked this how this story explained the cliffhangerish ending in the previous storygame. The only thing I would suggest is to perhaps add more choices. At times it felt a bit linear, but the choices do determine the ending. There were barely any grammatical errors - I just found a few minor ones like commas being in the wrong place. Also, I felt disappointed when it seems all the characters were being killed off, but the ending proved otherwise (I guess I'm just the sort of person who likes happy endings...) Overall, I really enjoy this series. It sort of resembles the Flash movies, with a team of enhanced people fighting enhanced villains.

try again

It was good

Amazing! Some typos, but a great story

LOVE IT!

This really was awesome and not just because I got the Super-heroic ending which took me many tries. Eventually I figured it out and I am happy for it to end with both Eve and byorn alive. Great job

SUPER HEROIC ENDING. I loved this one the most. Mostly because I am a fan of space and time travel. Best one in my opinion

Initially seemed like a drag but becomes very interesting later !! Good one though

It was a well crafted story, but too rigid for my taste.

Just as good a story as the rest. More of a clear cut CYOA story without the powers to use.

Fun but couldn't figure out ending

I was kind of dissapointed with this one. Yeah I got the super-heroic ending. But, It felt like a regular storygame. I know the point of this site was to make a story out of the ordinary. I am not saying this was bad. It was a great storyline. But, I did not feel as if I was in control. 5/8

This was awesome, I've been looking for something like this for forever and this delivered everything I
wanted;and stuff I didn't even think of. Can't wait to go and try the rest :)

That was the most epic final boss battle ever

Incredible, enthralling story, got super-heroic on the first try!

I sincerely hope you write more stories in the future.

It was a fun game. :)

Super-Heroic for the win! *does boogie*

Boogies aside, this may be my favorite HP game yet. It was awesome, with a captivating storyline, emotion, wonderful and clever dialogue, and much more. Keep it up, man, keep it up!

Is there an ending where only future you dies

Amazing story.

Definitely one of the best games I have ever played. The story was excellent, the spelling was great as well. Overall, I loved it. Thanks for this game!

Very good

This game was fantastic even though I like a good Rpg cys this was excellent

Great Game. Suprised it wasn't on the front page.

very good game, liked how well thought out it was

Awesome. This has been such an incredible experience thus far. I can't believe I'm about to start the last HP. well, here goes nothing...

Awesome, I love conveluted time travel morality carp>:D

Makes my brain hurt, but in a good way, bit short though only complaint. Ty for the game!

Amazing story!

Paladin looks like a color-swapped iron man.

Nice game, got the super heroic ending. personally, I like playing as a homo perfectous better, but that's probably just me.

Got the super heroic ending

Very well-written—I absolutely loved it!

Never mind I got it lol. :)

Really awesome. I got heroic...couldn't find a way to live. 7/8.

YAY!!! spent a while trying to figure it out though

The best one in my opinion.

Utterly Fantastic.

Fuck yeah! So fucking good!

Perfection, as usual.

Too short, and like in most, a plethora of grammar mistakes (that are acceptable due to nationality), but great game.

7/8

Love this series

Can't wait for the next one; you've got a dedicated reader here :D

that was awsome

What a castle writing! Tremendous!

Intent on milking the hell outta this, aren't ya? 7/8

@JMgskills
So you didn't get the super-heroic ending? Pity, I think you would have enjoyed that ending of the final boss fight.

Continued from previous comment.

Also, some of your scenes can kind of be linear in that it kind of tends to go from point A to point B with not a whole lot in between, like when your character transports over large distances. I know that is his ability but maybe a little detail in between could help. Like, say he's going from Africa to America, you could describe how he felt or what he saw instead of him just ending up somewhere. I think that would help a lot.

Lastly, I miss the items in this one. It kind of felt weird without being able to grow stronger or move faster. For this new character, it would have been a great opportunity to try and new battle system with new items and abilities.

Overall, a good game and story.

I got the Heroic ending and this is not bad of a game.

You are really good at these fight scenes and I got to say I love each one of them. Each fight seems to be unique in it's own way and it's always a challenge.

*SPOILER WARNING!!* (The fight with my future self was really cool. It's kind of like, how do you outsmart someone who has more experience and stronger than you?)

But, I still do think there were some flaws. Like I said on a previous game, I don't think you should use pictures that people would recognize or that belong to someone else(Like the Abomination from the Hulk series. Also, white suit Samus.) What I think you should do is to go to deviantart.com, or some site like it, and to ask an artist there for one of their Sci-fi pictures. Normally, they will be happy to let you use it.

one of the best series I have read on here so far.

awsome work...please keep going

^w^ awesome! loved it look forward to seeing Eve's baby grow!!!!! <3

Excellent as usual

hard

Oh, and I managed the Super-Hheroic ending on the first go, though I did find the worm-hole travel portions at the end just a tad confusing. Great story overall!

Amazing how fast you can write these!