Player Comments on How not to be eaten by a dragon

Yeah swedish meatballs. If you had more food in this it would be better.

So, to sum up... To not get eaten by a dragon, you have to not attack a dragon... Good to know I guess? It's just... Really, what was the point of this game? Was there supposed to be one? >.<

Dragons don't exist, man. If they did, we would finally have a "compelling" reason for MANPADS sales to the private citizenry.

The premise was cute. I found myself chuckling at some of the pathways. I read through four or five different endings, so there's a fair amount of interactivity. The grammar is also decent; I didn't notice any obvious errors.

The pages themselves were short, only 2-4 lines each. Any individual playthrough also only requires reading through 3-4 pages. You could improve this by increasing the length.

Well I saved my village from dragons. :)

"You buy Ikea.
You live an epically fun life, eating Swedish meatballs and bouncing on furniture. And you have an awesome dragon by your side!
You win!"
Well, giving it a 4 just for this creative idea! =D

I feel like this might have been a decent storygame if you'd put more effort into it, but I'm sure it took you about 30 minutes to make, if that. Barely any thought has been put into this story, and the writing feels more like shorthand than fleshed out description, dialogue, or anything else.
1/8

This was written well and there were lots of choices to choose from. However, it was very short and so I finished my first run through in a minute, if that. Work on the length and you'd have a good game here.

Way too short. I do like that the choices are not average. Build the length and this storygame's rating will probably go way up. Good luck! :)

No... Just horrible.

Thanks for the free point!

Funny story.

I was murdered by a pacifist... um, okay.

Hahahaha very funny

Great!!! I loved it! I made it out alive by the way. Very imagintive

its ok

You seem well researched. However, remember: Dragons would rather live by a lake than a volcano. Just because they breath fire doesn't mean the like lava. At a lake the have water, prey, and shelter. A volcano would be to risky.
Also, You better feed some of those Ikea meatballs to the dragon. Everyone knows dragons love Swedish meat.

Note: If you do not believe me, look at my name. It obviously proves I'm right, because calling something makes it true...
And I call this story great (though I wish it was longer)

Short but cute. ^_^

Pretty decent humor here and there.

The dargon.. does what?!?!

A nice storygame if it was long enough.

AWESOME

I........ I really don't know what to say

tame dragon, buy IKEA, seems legit

not bad

Ehhhh....i've seen a LOT better, longer, and more in depth Multiple Choice dragon games.

Hahahah. You really surprised me, iamayeti! Bravo! Also, the ending in which dragon does me to death? Yeah. Best death ever. I so don't see why I lost. I wasn't eaten! =D

It was nice

The only thing I didn't like about this game was that at the end there was no option to play again! I loved it! I'll give you another post the next time I play. : )

that…was…AWESOME!!!

LOVE IT!! Still....

Cute but relatively irrelevant :/

I HATED IT!!!!

Yeah, I -really- think I need to learn how to deal with a real life dragon.

It really did not have anything great

Was my dragon baby a good ending?

this was awesome
i always wanted to buy Ikea
swedish for me!

Cute! I rescued a baby dragon like some sort of fantasy Diego!

short, but cute. Would be even better as a longer, fully-developed story.

Huzzah! I made all the dragons drunk!

Wow, the way to win the game is by befriending the cute little dragon. Not bad.

This was cool, short but cool. id like to do another longer one :) nice title btw

I like the ending with the Bob master and then discount at Ikea

hehe, I won on my first try (thanks to your book on wattpad)