Player Comments on Is Dave Chappelle crazy?

This was a strange one. The story was also kind of boring. I was not captured by either the hopeful or appalled feeling that I have been recently by reading the fan fiction section. This was just a meh read. I hope you know that OJ Simpson the football player and OJ Simpson the murderer ae the same person.

5/10 won't read again

This was alright. I didn't hate it, but I didn't really like it either. It was overall just boring and there wasn't really any substance to it.

The very first thing that I noticed was the text. You constantly changed text color which is distracting and sometimes takes away readability. I don't care enough to see if there's a meaning behind it, but just so you know, people don't usually like that.

I think you were trying to capture Chappelle's style in this, and if you were, you did an ok job. It does ok at humor, though I personally don't like much of Chappelle's stand-up, so that might be why I didn't really enjoy the humor.

This is much less of a story and much more of a game, which is something that I don't really like. This is chooseyourSTORY after all, and there's really no story to this. The writing is meh and has several errors throughout. It just feels like it was thrown together in a day and doesn't seem to have much effort.

One last thing I'll note is that stories in this format typically work better in second person. The third person you used is ok, but usually the goal of CYS stories is to put the reader in the mind of the protagonist, not just outside.

So check bad?

A funny short CYOA without neglecting work, chores, or children.

Funny story. I wish it was longer though and some of the text was hard to read.

That was funny, though too short :)

Hey, I managed to make Dave insane. Hurray

Yeah... Like Kiel, I tried to lose but still ended up winning. 2/8

I won!

Great game. Funny at some parts. I think the length could be longer, but it's decent nonetheless. Very creative and thought out. I like it.

Very funny.

Heh. Pretty funny.

it was good but way too easy

March in the swamp, my eye. I was trying to die in this game and I still won.

B-O-R-I-N-G
and
S-H-O-R-T

Keep at it! Great story :D

I thought this was enjoyable. I had to think and consider what may happen if I chose certain escapes. It was fun

Just meh. It's alright. I won with 30 insanity points.

I WON IT!

Short. Make longer. Then good.

It is a really interesting concept and you pulled it off pretty well. I thought it should have been longer. Good job!

Nice concept, good references...um, good! Oh, and I couldn't find use for some of the items. Not that it matters.

I liked it. Other than the phone though, what were the items really for? Anyway it was great, easy though, I beat it without getting any insanity. :)

It's good, but not great. There's a lotta blind luck in the running, and it's pretty short, but good job anyway

That was Great! I got out with 0 IP on my first try...

Yes! I win! I like this game- it does a good job capturing the spirit of the Dave Chapelle show.

A bit too many uses of the word bitch for me, but okay.

Great fun, clever dialogue. Good job.

Fun game! Though the picture of his wife should relieve stress anywhere. Anyway, Great game!

COOL! I won with zero insanity points! By the way, good game!

Odd, but good. I ended with only 5 IP!

Do you have something against Dave Chappelle?

Creative! Good job, worth playing, with some nice Chappelle references.

Cool game, but what was the use of the items?

seriously if this game was longer i'd category feature it no prob.

LOL!!! What an original game, original idea. Not the best, but i still loved it.

Pretty fun game.

Is that your first game? That was an amazing use of varibles. I couldn't figure out what the item does though. Excellent game none the less. Nice pictures also. I couldn't find much to fix about it.

HALF BAKED!!!! Funyons!!! lol had to play it again. great game.

it was a good game and when it said "THIS IS MY REGOULAR VOISE" it is acouly "THIS IS HOW I TALK!"

great concept. change the font and make the items more necessary and it will rock.

Your other game is by far better, but this game rocks. Did'nt like the font though.

I'm the only one that would give this game an 8! Still...It appears to work. That's all I was shooting for.