Player Comments on Knoq
Had a lot of fun not gonna lie. Could be improved tho. Keep making stuff!
on 4/2/2020 1:34:12 AM with a score of 0
This story doesn’t much sense, but I appreciate the length and the amount of options. I didn’t notice too many grammar mistakes, and it’s overall a great story. 5/8
-- Hi on 2/18/2020 3:51:10 PM with a score of 0
If the whole game were as engaging as the first page, I'd be really into it.
Honestly though, the whole first part of the story feels unnecessary since the main drive of the story starts after the main character gets to America. I get that's part of the prompt and therefor necessary, but from a narrative standpoint it didn't feel like it belonged.
I loved the humor of it and there were some good lines, it just felt like you had a bigger idea then had to cut them out for the contest deadline.
It is interesting though, hope you come back to it!
on 1/5/2020 7:15:53 PM with a score of 0
You had a strong start then it sort of devolved into lots of end links, continually fainting to move the plot, and random stuff happening.
on 1/4/2020 4:19:56 PM with a score of 0
Fixed the dead links. You can now play the full game. I should've playtested before publishing.
on 1/4/2020 2:42:03 PM with a score of 0
It was kind of funny until I ran into the dead links (the Fight, with Boris) and the crashes (at Yellowstone).
on 1/4/2020 9:31:02 AM with a score of 0
The beginning is really good. And it is clear that the planning process was really well thought. Sadly, deadline constraints had made this game really linear and without important choices. But I love the humour.
on 1/4/2020 6:08:01 AM with a score of 0