Player Comments on Mouldy Oldiez

A very interesting storygame.

It certainly is a humorous story, but I felt like some parts of the game were a lot better then other parts in terms of funniness.

I did like the item use, but some of the situations with items (and a few situations without them) were rather illogical.

The length is pretty good, especially with the fair amount of branching and words per page. I'm glad this storygame was good in terms of quality and quantity, not one or the other.

The detail provided is enough to picture a pretty clear setting and we have a good understanding of what the storygame is actually about.

I noticed a few grammar and spelling errors, but not a lot. Make sure to give your storygames closer proofreading to avoid these types of mistakes :)

All in all, a good storygame with a plot and a goal. I'd definitely recommend this storygame to others.

5/8

Pretty good game. The game had a good use of items, you obviously know what you're doing there, and it made me think a few times. I was entertained throughout the whole thing, but the insulting humor detracted from the experience for me. All in all, I gave it a 5/8.

Also, love the Splinter Cell reference.

"Congratulations, 1,000,000,000,000 hypothetical points, a winrar is you."

Cool! The amazing use of toilet paper in a prison to cause a flood! =D

This really wasn't very good. I ran into a maximum of two zombies, the game removed almost every item I had before I could even think of using it, and the plot and characters didn't do much for me either. It was written very simply, too. Sometimes it switched to reading like out of a play script or something.

I have no idea what was up with your scripting. When you get arrested by the police, they take away all of your items. I played it again, and discovered that they'd taken all but 3 of my items. I have no idea why that changed or why it would have any significance. I hadn't even used more than one of these items yet.

Some of the pages have no text on them at all! It's just a blank page with links on them. I can't tell if that's deliberate or not but I really hope it isn't. At least put something on the page.

You say in your description that this was meant to be an ambitious game. I really can't see that. The genre is extremely cliche, it's not that long, the plot hardly develops and the characters are meh. It's readable, it's playable, but I'd hardly play it again.

Great plot development, pictures and item use... However, it could use more character development... :3 4/8

The game stops after you get to the AGA thing so you should definitely fix that.

idk what happened but it was pretty good

boring. Horrible. WHY DID I GO TO JAIL?!!!!

There was some effort put into it, but it had the potential to be much, much, better

not a bad game

yawn. it was good with pics but kinda boring

I liked it. It is clear you both put alot of effort into it. For some reason, I actually liked the insulting jokes and the use of items made it even better. It was quite linear but it wasn't that big of a problem. I enjoyed it.

Actually a pretty good effort as far as the story goes, but the insulting “humor” did turn me off a bit.

It wasn't my cup of tea, but i did like the humor :P.

I liked it, it was fun using all the idems in difrent ways, plus it made me laugh, if I can think of any flaws hm... I cant think of any right now then again im tired, overall it was a fun game and I hope it gets finished.