Player Comments on Murder!

There's only one word I can use to describe this: shit.

I'm going to guess this takes place in Africa (could be Madagascar or Australia too) considering there are baobab trees, and the characters are cats. I get strong WC vibes from this story, but I could be wrong since I get that feeling with pretty much anything that involves a lot of talking cats.

I can't be bothered to put too much effort since, the author will never read this, so I'll just point out a few things. On the "Other Clues" page, the formatting is inconsistent with the rest of the story and doesn't add to or enhance the story in any way. There are very few reasons to include internet slang like lulzy in a story, and this isn't one of those stories.
The characters suffer from the same over-dramatic personality. There isn't a point in talking to the other cats since there's a summary before clicking the end link. While there is an end game link, the story lacks a proper conclusion, leaving the reader wondering who killed Flare.

I don't care who killed Flare because what little story there is isn't worth caring about, but I'm sure someone out there does. 2/8, but it should've been 1/8.

We a river like a park in park west west of river

I'm drawing a blank on what this is. I've read a lot of different books with this style in my cringe pre-teen years but I don't know what ASP is supposed to stand for. I tried looking it up and all I got was books about the internet.

Idk I think Poison did it. I've thought that since I read that there was a character named Poison.

4/10 I will solve this mystery for myself later. I just need to put it down in my notebook so I remember.

i bet it was poison!

This was enjoyable. I would love to see more. I'm guessing kali and Soren.

I think t is Kali and Soran. its the most evidence there is.

I think they died of a heart attack.

I killed Flare. Really though, you could've expanded on the story a bit more.

I think Kali, Soran, Ikaika and Poison worked together to kill Flare.

no anwser? disapointing

I think that poison and star worked together because p gave s a bribe- like he would be her boyfriend- but then star went back on the deal because she wanted Ikaika for her mate instead

I feel as if it is between star and poison because of their motives and how they reacted.

meh

I believe that Poison, Ikaika and the Elite couple worked together to kill Flare, each for their own reasons. The other wolves, no offense, seemed too stupid to be able to kill Flare. Anyway, good story.

I think it was Star

I Think they're all work together or One of them Screwed the clue by putting the others clue Example : Star Use Baobab Perfume, Put Some Grey Hair and made The Shoe Muddy.

Not terrible. Could have had more to it.

I'm gonna have to say the murderer was all of them.

Wow! This was a great story. The only thing that could have been better was if it was a little bit longer. Maybe more on Misty Falls?

Who ever wrote Phantoms part was not very nice... you should think how it will effect people you know....

Not bad. The murderer was Poison.

I do like this story so far, but it would be awesome if there was an adventure and everything to find out who the murderer was.

It was Dr. Plum, in the kitchen, with the candlestick.

An okay game but I didn't really like the ending where I would have to post my decision. It didn't let me feel like I had finished the game.

So much better than Homework xD

Imma go clean mah furry feat now, bai bai xD