Player Comments on My Sweet Anna

At first I was really kinda liking it. Yes, the memories were all very trite, stereotypical "romance" moments, but It felt like you tried to give it some decent description, your spelling and grammar were good, too. Then, what happened? The end feels like you just got tired of writing. You gave me a couple of memories, then out of nowhere "you were married for x number of years and had x kids the end."

I think I appreciate the game more for what you were trying to do than what you actually achieved. It felt very rushed, going straight from meeting her to marrying her and then to some other memory and then the end. I didn't really see anything meaningful in there that made me care about the characters or feel like they were really in love. I think if you want people to feel a connection with the characters in a short space of time, you have to focus more on little scenes that seem unimportant but demonstrate the kind of relationship the characters have instead of big things like meeting, wedding, pregnant, death.

I'm crying this is truly a sad story and I have nothing better to do but wish that you make another hopefully you do :)

Sadly Sweet. I like it.

Well this felt a bit awkward.
I met Anna and the next thing I know we're married with a daughter. What on earth happened during all that time? Need more details. It was over too quickly as well.

I dont really like it. Overall 4/8

A very disjointed story. Doesn't mesh.

Soooo, he met anna, he married anna, anna died, anna was their daughter.

had this not been so rushed and actually had a little more story into anna it would have gotten a bigger emotional response then it barely achieved.

Ouch! I was so close to crying like a baby! lol

Quite short, semi well written but to familiar. It reminds me of "Snow" by Sethaniel only I feel that "Snow" produces deeper emotional response.

love it

Short and very sweet but, I didn't really like the she died last year thing. maybe you could of left it at a "How I miss my sweet Anna. but, nevertheless it was a very good storygame!

At first, I was kind of liking it. It was very romantic, and the memories were sweet. It was, sadly, slightly more fun than HOMEWORK. Decent game. Nice job.

Really sad and heartbreaking, but a good game

That, was so sweet, I love it... I have been inspired

Very sweet

it was good wish it was longer though

much of a plot but a verry good game nonetheless.

This started off well and I thought it was going to be a good story. Then it seems the author got bored with it. My advice would be to take the story down and improve the endings. All in all enjoyable but let down by rushed finale.

You don't even get to know the characters at all. No emotional attachment will usually mean that it's pretty boring. Also, pretty short.

it was amazing!!!

Sweet story

This is the first 'romantic' one I've worked through. Neat concept. It could use a good proofreading though.

Sweet, but depressing. Starting off with the love interest already dead makes the rest of the story feel irrelevant.

O.K. Game.

Personally, I thought it was way too short and completely rushed. When I saw the 'End Game, Leave Comments' link, I actually said, "WHAT?" It was going so well, and then it ended. But I thought the storyline was pretty good.

Seth says MEH!!! I didn't really like it. 3/8

Not bad, I enjoyed this even if it was a little short

Very nice, reminds me of snow even though this is shorter

A little skimpy...

Linear but interesting enough to keep reading. It's way better than few new ones.

I thought it was pretty good. It's a bit on the short side, but entertaining enough to leave you wanting more :)