Player Comments on Paraplaniac
Hm, wow.. It was f*ckin' awesome! It's one of the first storygames in a long time that actually held my attention longer then a few pages. I don't wanna give it away for anyone who's not played it yet, but I liked the story and worlds in general. I especially liked how it all turned out... Kinda reminded me of Buddhism for some reason. Though, honestly, I thought that the master was some sorta pedophile. :D 8/8
on 7/11/2008 5:19:39 PM with a score of 1
Great story, very creative with excellent descriptions and clean writing. You created your own mythology within; possibly inspired by a certain film, it stands wonderfully on its own. I'd love to know how much the stats were changing the outcomes of certain things - the battles were fun and not annoying in the least and I would have liked to see a few more. Looking forward to, and hoping for, a sequel. This is one of, and perhaps your best, work on the site. Writing has improved dramatically - great work triple J!
on 7/11/2008 2:06:31 AM with a score of 1
Entertaining! Though not your best work. It was pretty linear, except for the battle sequences which were dynamic. I think keeping the plot a mystery was very effective, however the tone or voice used felt more like it was a movie and less like a story. I don't know yet if that is a good or bad thing, since I watched the movie Jumper just two days ago :P
Anyways, good job!
on 7/9/2008 1:51:18 PM with a score of 1
The Game was Amazing! 8/8!
But it was too short :/
on 3/17/2013 4:46:54 AM with a score of 1
It was unforgivably short game for it's quality, why the best ones are so short!
I hope you make a sequel, a prequel or another game set in the same universe, I really liked the story :(
on 3/16/2013 4:30:25 PM with a score of 1
The only downside I find about this story is the ending, which is a bit unsatisfying. Otherwise, it's quite good. I don't usually rate good but this was a clear 7/8, mostly because of the interesting plot but the writing wasn't bad either.
on 2/13/2013 7:49:59 AM with a score of 1
Amazing Story, I love the fact you used matrix and jumper to such a degree. I wish this was longer though and that there was development between Tiras and Sarit.
Other than that, Awesome.
on 2/3/2013 1:03:14 PM with a score of 1
Pretty awesome game! Very imaginative and interesting.
on 1/17/2013 3:36:16 PM with a score of 1
it could be longer
on 1/17/2013 1:26:31 PM with a score of 1
That was awesome. I loved that twist, and the way you made the characters have such distinct personalities. It was intense
on 9/16/2012 11:10:21 PM with a score of 1
Pretty good not very long
on 9/2/2012 9:12:38 PM with a score of 1
I thought it was supposed to give me a number at the end? My ending (i think the perfect one) simply said "the end," no number :/
on 8/12/2012 9:35:43 PM with a score of 1
Great one with perfect choices!
on 7/22/2012 7:09:18 AM with a score of -1
-- Haha on 6/11/2012 2:58:27 AM with a score of 1
i won. I wish i had the choice to not kill my brother though
on 4/19/2012 3:08:19 PM with a score of 1
Great writing and gamePlay but some pages are confusing
on 4/16/2012 10:00:20 PM with a score of 1
I wish it wasn't so short and the story was developed more overall a bit disappointing.
on 3/21/2012 10:47:49 PM with a score of 1
arrtolI liked it athug iwas ather linea nd sort.
on 3/11/2012 12:41:02 PM with a score of 1
Really nifty setting :)
on 2/6/2012 12:56:04 PM with a score of 1
on 1/30/2012 12:17:46 AM with a score of 1
on 12/31/2011 11:33:27 PM with a score of 1
on 12/15/2011 11:16:25 PM with a score of 1
Quite a fun game, but not an in-depth story. It won't give you that "enlightment" unlike stories similar to Eternal. It still is really good.
on 11/28/2011 8:30:23 PM with a score of 1
on 9/10/2011 5:30:12 PM with a score of 1
that was amazing! i can see why this is in the top five! the only thing i didn't understand was how he killed his brother. how did he kill his brother?!?!?
on 9/2/2011 4:47:50 AM with a score of 1
Nice, story JJJ.
on 6/4/2011 5:13:51 PM with a score of 1
Lol Madglee reference. Bo approves
on 5/14/2011 10:07:10 AM with a score of 1
Very interesting story
-- Jon on 3/19/2011 11:55:01 PM with a score of 1
It is a game worthwhile. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
on 12/15/2010 4:32:12 AM with a score of 1
This was a very unique and interesting story, well done!
on 10/13/2010 11:10:35 PM with a score of 1
I am a winner! I think that actually should be a 6 rating but it was a great story and I did it first try
on 9/26/2010 11:16:04 PM with a score of 1
Beat it. Great game! Better than a 6, but I'd say it ties with Reeses. (Or in JFP's case, chocoball)
on 8/9/2010 6:43:11 PM with a score of -1
Excellent story, you definitely can see the inspirations of "The Matrix" and such but in a good way. I'd personally love to see a sequel, or atleast a story set in the same universe.
on 6/18/2010 11:28:38 PM with a score of 1
Seven. Pretty good, I dunno if it's better than a Resses cup, cause those are absolutely amazing.
on 12/28/2009 2:45:08 PM with a score of 1
Pretty good :)
on 12/4/2009 10:04:17 AM with a score of 1
grate story!! but thers to one part cuting it prety close to losing all ya paraplanic
on 8/30/2009 4:35:07 PM with a score of -1
That took forever
on 4/10/2009 2:26:24 PM with a score of -1
Oi, aweseome game!
on 9/17/2008 8:32:42 AM with a score of -1
it was coo.
on 8/12/2008 9:46:07 PM with a score of 1
Great Story, Loved it.
on 8/6/2008 2:25:58 AM with a score of 1
Great storygame. Your customary skill at combat scenes is evident.
on 7/11/2008 1:47:34 PM with a score of 1
Definitely one of the best stories on the site. It wasn't as long as some other stories, and it could have been slightly longer, but the doesn't bring it down too much. There were a few grammatical errors here and there but - hell- who cares? Excellent job, JJJ.
7/8 (Maybe like a 7.5/8)
on 7/10/2008 12:42:40 PM with a score of -1
It's very good, I'll say that. A nice storyline, good (yet slightly graphic) battle sequences and a decent gameplay. The problem is that it is too linear. A brilliant story, nonetheless, but if you don't take the one path you die. But seriously, make this a little longer and you could turn it into an actual novel or something. Or create alternate paths, extend it a bit. It's got potential, and was fun to read, but you've wasted how good it could have been by making the plot move so quickly. Don't get me wrong, it's good, better than most things, I'm not disappointed that it's bad (which it isn't), I'm disappointed that it could have been even better than that.
But good work, another good storygame and I'm liking it lots.
on 7/9/2008 10:05:18 PM with a score of 1
A very original story that was well made and easily navigated, with a variety of decisions. Will have to play it again soon to see the extent of what you've created here. Thanks JJJ!
on 7/9/2008 6:09:11 PM with a score of 1
SWEET! great story, I think I got the best ending, and it was awesome. Great explainations of mysteries in this world andd great story all around
on 7/9/2008 11:08:32 AM with a score of 1
Very unique and interesting premise for a parallel universe story. I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
on 7/9/2008 1:14:20 AM with a score of 1