Peak: Winds of the Forgotten

Player Rating2.12/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 32 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

RPG

The blizzards are blinding you and there is no turning back.
Dried tears do no good to remind you of your past, but in these mountains... frozen tears are forever.
Icy hands can scar you without a single touch.
The cold winds can't hurt a corpse and never will again.
Death is imminent to the forgotten and the foolish. That will always be.
But unlike such, survival isn't always so.
You could live here.
Yet you might die.
Do not decease tomorrow.
Live today.
Live through the tragic winds of the forgotten before the mountain washes your soul away.

Player Comments

The description sounded interesting, but was ultimately not the same.
-- madmax on 6/17/2016 3:50:01 PM
Got shot in the head at age 63. Meh. We all die sometime.
-- Walker. on 6/6/2016 6:27:54 PM
I kind of get it but it just needs more development. Lol, got shot in the head.
-- corgi213 on 5/28/2016 5:40:01 PM
What on earth. There's little enough logic, or idea, or anything to keep interest. Stuff happens, click buttons, more unrelated stuff happens. Not too interesting.

Ways to improve. Either name the char, or give a choice of two or three, and put that in when it comes up. ("[Your Name], huh?" The officials raised a brow.) I'd raise a brow if I was pronouncing the [ and calling someone Your Name. Aside from that, some sort of interesting narrative, or idea behind it, not just, hey look a mountain. Hey base camp. Hey, game over.
-- iavatus on 5/27/2016 12:45:19 AM
'You have HAPE. You must either climb down or die. At your age, you may not continue the game.'

I don't know what this means or how it happened or why, except that apparently I lost. In fact...I don't really know what much of what happened meant. It was all sort of fragmented and disjointed--something about police, 'bones frozen like a living pancake' (that one did get a laugh out of me, though I don't think it means what you think it means...), something about mountain climbing, and then I lost.

The description really caught my attention, but what I saw of the game didn't resemble it much, which is a shame. It looks to me like you must be ESL, so that's likely a major factor...please keep writing and practicing, because I can see you have potential.
-- mizal on 5/24/2016 4:38:28 PM
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