Player Comments on Phoenician Trade Game

This story was quite informative and I found the use of items in this story quite interesting also. It really did provide another level of depth to everything and made things more interactive, that is always a positive.

Spelling and structure wise, there weren't much problems in that area as well. It seems quite a bit of effort and care was placed into making something both educational and fun for the reader :D

Bravo, this is definitely something that was rather fun and serviceable as a Edutainment story game.

For factual contact and an interactive learning experience I would rate this game very highly. For the general reader though there are no characters or plot as such so this would probably only be used as a learning tool. The spelling, grammar etc was all perfect and the item use was good but my personal preference is for something that's a bit personalised, perhaps the information about what countries use what material for what could be told to me by someone with a name and description or perhaps a plot could be thrown in (each country has a different problem i.e. Egypt is suffering from famine and I need to provide each country with the material that could help fix their problem?). Still I learned a lot so for a school project you should get top marks :D

THis game was super educanatiomnlal and lots of funnies and good.

I would rather play Fortnite chapter 4 than this dog crap, I got sold into into slavery twice, and drowned the third time. this is so flipping annoying

Finally, I finally finished it

Cool game

it was really cool

I didn't really like this game because you didn't have a choice to fight pirates and rocks come flying out at you in the middle of the ocean.

good...............for you too poop on.

This sucks

thanks for letting me try the game it was better than doing homework

fun

it was really fun to trade most that stuff like they used to do back in the day

This game was ok i would play it if i did not have nothing to do

I liked it but it wasn't the best.

Mid

yall gonna take my gold argue im get yall

good game

My son Joe Biden played this game, he is now the president.
Thank you for providing for his success

The earth is flat!!!!!!
The boat should have fallen off the map!
Pathetic.

Fun for homework

YAY its ok

AW BILLY, THIS GAME IS HAWRIBBLE!!!!!
I CAUGHT MY SON WATCHING THE BOOS BABY AT 3 AM!!!!!!!
THIS IS A DISASTER!!!!
A DISASTER!!!!!

easy homework so ty

this game is horrible

THIS GAME SUCKS!

me and Quinn had fun doing actually not boring homework.

it is good but I like something that is more interesting to actually look at instead of just clicking on a bunch of links, I also have Questions about the finishing of this, why is the "you win" part of this gam me drowning? that doesent make any sense, like what the heck people!? is it that hard to make an ending where I DON'T die cause I've made plenty of redirected slideshows that are more entertaining than this piece of **** and i think you know what I mean by that and if u just figured out why i'm like this, weeeell good job and also, no shit Sherlock

i like it and the pictures to i also like the text at the top and i look forward to see more of these games

Fun

It was ok.

I love it if it were a little longer it would be realy good

It was fun i really liked it i think that i should play it a lot more i rate it a 10/10

very fun game

I honestly quite enjoyed it. I thought it was gonna be basic and bland but you added in some humour in the end screens when you died and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

This was fun

It's quite fun and entertaining but I would love to see pictures maybe, but using imagination is fun also!

I'd rather watch grass grow

I actually like it, it wasn’t bad but it is better that homework.

fun

It's fun

This is really good. My teacher made me do this for social studies enrichment

not useful

This game is pretty fun but it should be longer and have more hardships like if you don't trade with a certain country you die.

Fun it was funny and exireating

It is Very fun and funny

awesome

this game is a bot and joey beat it and that means it is to easy because he is really dumb and this game needs to be ten times harder if he can beat it

We should be able to do things. Not recommended at all.

love the interaction

Good, but I couldn't drop penguins though.

john cena

cool

thanks

love this game

You should actually be able to use the stuff like the weapons to warn off the pirates

There needs to be ways for you to actually use the stuff that you take at the beginning

No good type of game dose this.

It’s not that fun because there’s only one way you can go in the story, there is no different story for what choice you make

steal give none

good.. for you to poop on. I just steal all their stuff. Very fun but also BORING

nice

I took everything and trade, but kept my inventory. It was weird and different. I want to see the end of the game.

good game and fun to play.

FU

it was fun to play

it waas okay but i did not get the game

The best history related game i ever played!

no

cool game i guess

This is the off brand of Oregon Trail

terrible

Terrible terrible game tghere is no way to win.

Needs WAY MORE choices.

cool

this was fun

im not talking

this game is fun and awesome

Very fun and funny. Love it. 10/10 will play again

it was fun

A neat little educational piece. It's a School talk on Phoenician Trade set up in a game format. Which I imagine you could gather from the title. It's done fairly well for what it is.

BEST GAME EVER 10/10 WOULD PLAY AGAIN. im lying this game sucks

Good game gg

I assume it's the same teacher of the class this story was written for who keeps sending in waves of additional children.

Ma'am, I don't know how to break this to you but some of your children are retards, and it would be great if you asked them to please stop leaving spammy gibberish comments for site admins to clean up.

Otherwise, it's amusing as always seeing this random school game get 100x more attention than all Will's historical stuff. http://chooseyourstory.com/Member/?Username=Will11

fun fun fun fun f

FINGA LICKING GOODS

it was fun but graphics would make the game even better to allow the person playing the game to visualize it even better. The overall layout of the game is decent but i guarantee that if you add pictures/animations to it to act it out it would make it AMAZING!

Dear person who created this game for Bobbi,
Bobbi likes this game. Bobbi happy. Bobbi glad. Bobbi wants you to see this. Bobbi says bye. Bobbi gives you a Bobbi bye.
Bobbi bye.

IT WAS NICE. GOOD CODING DUDE.

Good game almost made it all the way through

YIKES

this was a good game but the pirates took money from me

it is hard but it is fun

it's okay, I'd prefer if it was prettier. You know, pictures and animations and things like that.

its aight

The pirates cyber-bullied me on this game 0/10 would not recommend.

it was ok I guess

I liked it it was just very boring

that boring AKA GARBAGE, complete rubbish the best part was saying that the game was good for popping on, do better next time. #getalife

Could be more fun.

i did not like this but it is better than homework

This game was very boring and did not make me want to learn about phonician trading

I used this game for my middle school social studie class. They had so much fun comparing choices and seeing what happened to themselves, based on their choices. I loved this game too because I got to just walk around and see their silly choices.

This needs more things in it, it's so very short. It would make it way more fun longer. Please and thank you!!!

This needs more things in it, it's so very short. It would make it more fun. Please and thank you!!!

yay i didnt die this time i resoned with the pirates now i dont have to zipline down to a speed boat

To esey once you get used to it

I died if that were me i would have pushed the pirates in the water and then zip line down to a speed boat with my crew and drive away

STUPID PIRATES!!!!

This game is pretty cool. Not gonna use my real name, though.

This is fun kinda I might play it again.

IT was fun but not better than reccese cups thats for sure but very fun game

I'd rather do this than homework

It was cool

it was a really cool game

fun game but too easy

very fun and interesting game to play and you learn certain things that you may not have known at first.

kinda a "eh game" after a few tries you figure out what is the best routes and then it's just repetitive

It's actually not that bad!

Good make it better and make yourself fight pirates and either die or live

it was boring this game i do not get i just is soooo boring!!!sorry but NOOOOO

it was very stressful and dont make sense but it is OK with a partner but i did not enjoy it that well sorry but no.

it was cool i guess

That was Griffin that used my name last time so please dopnt believe that any of these were me cuz they were all griffin.

very fun game good job

This game sucks. I bet you make no money off this. Find a new hobby. You're going nowhere in life. You have no friends.......... Jk lol you good.

I enjoyed doing this game and it helped me learn more about the trading system with people around Phoencia. This game was very fun and I'd like to see more station games like this.

This game was really fun to play and it has lots of history knowledge, it also taught me what life used to be and what they have trading also how to trade with others

stunk

Was very short, other than that I liked it.

It was amazing.

Needs work for a game as well as picktures

I hate homework,and nothing beats reeces. But cool game.

this game is a bleach worthy exprence

Interesting game yes, would be better if there were more story involved. Such as rescuing prisoners and slaves and even royal princesses. ;)

i loved it.it was fun

let pirates search your ship

i didnt understand it :)))

i liked it alot

I have nothing to say it is so awesome :)

i think this game is cool

thanks

it was dope

interesting

It was ok

i love it

This is a great and fun game. My teacher assigned it to us on Google classroom. I like to play it when I have free time.
:)

One of the best educational games could use a good story plot

i kinda like this game

Very educational

Finnaly got it!

Very educational, lots of fun

I cheated my way through - making the player trade instead of assuming they would could solve that. Also, having each item cost a certain amount and having the endgame reflect that would be nice, instead of losing everything without reflecting a value. Different amounts could lead to different lifestyles or homes at the end. That would give a nice variety. Cute story. :)

This is a long journey but when you finish you'll just start iver

It was kinda fun, kinda boring

it was great

This game makes no sense, why would you need to get the stuff at the beginning or ANY time when you get the same ending of 1 money. If this is historically accurate, then you should have to at the very least have each item mean 1 money, but any amount of items, or NONE at all seem to get the same amount. I am very angry about this because the money is supposed to be an object to make you feel good, but it does nothing for you because you get the same amount each time you play. This means that almost every time you play you get the EXACT SAME ENDING no matter how much time and energy you put into it.

it's fun

i love them

lots of fun

This is rigged!!!!!!

It's not very fun at all and you just have to do it over and over again

It is a learning experince

this game showed me how the phoenicians traded and how i could trade toooooooooo lol

i fell off of a cliff but i like balloons

eh.......... it was ok i noice though.........noice

I, i just, i have no words just just, wow. I would agree it's better than homework

It ok but not the best.

Its okay its better than homework

Cool, I lived a while

GOOD GAME I BEAT THE GAME!!

It was ok wasnt what i expected

I love this game just not more than candy.

this is really ill try new way every time

I liked it

It's pretty good.

Nice game

Nice game, needs better graphics

I liked it.

This was fun to do

Its OK.

I won !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not the best but i like.:u

OK but could be better

i almost finished

it was fun but i got kidnapped

This game is the worst. {needs to be like a video game }

there should be more places to trade the would be more fun send a emaim when you fix it at gaque117@wcs mail im going far away

could be better.

so boring [could be better[

loved it.

i tried to argue and they killed me!!! im mad

The storygame was alright. Grammar and spelling was okay.
The story wasn't extremely interesting, but I did learn a lot about trading as a Phoenician from this storygame. I hope you got an A on your project!

Very well done and i like the items added! Good work!

Educational... But a bit boring.

This is really good compared to the other games coming out lately. I was wondering where do I use the items?
5/8

YAAYYYY!!!!