Player Comments on Positive or Negative?

You use way too many commas, not every long sentence needs a comma. Good story idea, just needs work on the grammer

This was short and pointless.

I don't think refusing to let someone pay for something of yours in a store means you're being negative and offended, so that was a weird one. I also am wondering where the author lives that they believe taxis can be flagged down OUTSIDE of a city.

Not a bad idea but more could have been done to make these scenarios interesting. But I do like that instead of random questions it at least took time to make it a consistent plot, even if a dull one.

it ok

Meh. I ended up with a neutral ending on the first play, and am not interested enough to even look at the other endings. I would have preferred to be placed in either the negative or positive group rather than be told "sometimes you see things positively and sometimes negatively". Trick me, coerce me through choices, or put me in the group I want to avoid and provoke some kind of emotion. But, other then my irritation at the actual game, meh.

I also don't think that this was presented very creatively, and it is easy to see which choices will bring the result that you want. Additionally, some choices, like whether to let someone else have a taxi instead of you, don't really seem to be about being positive or negative, but rather generous or selfish. Providing tougher choices and perhaps a stat based way to get endings would make this a lot better.

mean the title speaks for itself either you’re a positive or negative person. Either you’re a Scrooge or a saint. There’s also a neutral ending. I don’t know what’s up with the disclaimer saying there’s no point to the game at all. If there’s isn’t a point why bother playing it?

I feel like there’s a certain linearity to the game which is inherent since it’s all about your day and whether you choose to be happy or unhappy. I mean I felt that it was alright I just wanted to know what motivated the character’s decisions. I feel like there’s a more creative way to explore this concept but the way you executed it was fine to if rather plain. Overall this stories not that bad but it does have some things that I’d like it to add.

There’s more complexity to a persons emotions than just happy, neutral, and unhappy and I felt like you could’ve done a better job of explaining that in a less linear fashion.

Just like the author stated there wasn't all that much to the plot of the story, and read exactly like a PSA a therapist would give someone to try and explain simple emotions at a young age.

The way you went about it wasn't bad and I'm sure this could lighten up someone's day that was in a bad mood, so a good effort was made in that department.

Not many spelling errors to go about, but that's fine.

Even if the story was this short it wasn't all that terrible and deserves the overall score that it has. Hope to see more come about the author who made this even if this was posted awhile ago.

Its kind of simple

I got VERY positive! I think there could've been more detail, and some of the answers could be written a bit differently. For example, I hate coffee, so it could be something different there, like what @Yuisawachelsa said about different wording.
I'ts short and sweet, however lacking some detail that would be very helpful. Good job though! :)

This was a nice quiz, but I think you should have done something different with the coffee one, other than just feeling happy or unhappy. Maybe edit it so that it was something like "Do you drink the coffee anyway because it's better than nothing or do you not drink the coffee because you're not gonna enjoy it anyway?" (Or something like that. The way I said it was weird >.<) or maybe just make a different scenario.
P.S. I discovered I was a "VERY positive" person. I guess sometimes I pretend to be cold, but in actual real life situations I do tend to be nice. Oh well.

Yay! I'm a neutral person.

I liked it! Perhaps I should think about being more positive maybe... Hmm.

It was interesting.

Okay. Good. It's actually not pointless.

Very random

That was a good test for my attitude, I guess! (:

It was too weird for me.

I'm a positive person so you get a positive score :) Good quiz though I'm not sure if all the lengthy back stories to the questions helped them :)

It is pretty good, I am nuetral.

To correct my earlier mistake(sorry, it's mistman96 who said that) I played again. I picked all bad, except one to see what would happen. Of course, I was neutral.

???

I had one negative, and got neutral just like, um, Q did.
(In a quieter voice)
Q?

Sorta good. Try it once. No matter what you pick the same questions will be asked. It's a okay story game.

I got positive to go along with my happy!

The only thing I didn't like was that because I chose 1, ONE inherently negative choice, I got the neutral ending. I think you can make one or two negative choices with the seven or so total, and still get the positive end, you need to get EVERY SINGLE ONE.

I'm neutral. Yay. 5/8.

Fairly good, 5

I'm a negative person! Ok...

Well, despite the fact that it was short, I still enjoyed. The only thing I don't understand is the lack of diversity in the different endings. I'm negative, so I get an extra paragraph on how much I suck. Despite the fact that it's mostly true, I still would have preferred. "You are negative. Chapter 2... An angry existence." And then at the end of each chapter, the story branches into 2 different paths, maybe even three once in a while, resulting in, like, 30 different endings. It's not badly written, just sort of uninteresting. The original plot was good, but there were no sudden changes, twists, or anything in that regard. It wasn't horrible, though. Make more! It would be worth the wait.

It was a nice little game to play. Quick, and straightforward. I think it accomplished all that the author wanted it to.

I got neutral ,have more options and more test to find out more about personality

Every story is better than reesies cups but ,I like this story and you should make a part 2 or maybe something longer and harder! Love the game.

A nice quiz/story, replete with fitting diction and without grammatical errors. It would be cool if you expanded on this and made it slightly less linear, but all in all you have made a fitting perssonality quiz.

Meh, could be better.

It was far too short, and lacked depth, but you could theoretically improve it and make a great game, and perhaps have a rank at the end to show how positive or negative you were! Good luck on future stories!

rather one-sided, doesn't find all the options and doesn't give an accurate analyzation

i thought i'm a negative person. i have never been so wrong..

It's not bad... a bit dull perhaps. It would be interesting to see the positive/negative concept played out with a more compelling scenario.

I got positive! I think that is very true.

It would be nice if the game was a little longer. Very interesting concept, though.

Replayed it after the update. I take back what I said about 'not having all that many perspectives' because I was thinking specifically about perspectives of other characters vs. your own, when it's more about what your <i>own</i> perspective could be, and such. The game is still a lot like it was before, but I raised my rating a lil', since there's more incentive to play again 'n' stuff. A small number of grammar mistakes remain, and on the 'thoughtful child' page the only link that appears for one of the 'neutral endings' says 'click on this if nothing else shows up.' Maybe you should change that to something less conspicuous like an arrow?

interesting conceptuially, but the execution was sub par

Short, but intersting look on how you COULD take things.

Interesting. Like you wrote there is not really a point in it. Or winning poing.

But interesting nonetheless.

I agree with a lot of what was said before me, although it could use a proofreading for minor punctuation and spelling mistakes. I think this game could have more of a point to it if the reader saw what effects your actions have on other characters through branching paths, sort of like what playa said (or maybe exactly like it). As it is, it...doesn't actually offer too many perspectives.

I thought it was well written and clean, though a bit mundane.

I liked it! I thought it was cute. Sounds like me at my nephew's birthday, only with Ben 10 instead of Beyblade. Thought it was a fun little game on perspectives, only choice I didn't like was the man offering to pay for my toy one, 'cos if someone offered to pay for something I was buying, I would decline, but not because I was offended, I'd just decline because I'd feel guilty having someone else pay for my things.

When I read the description, I mistook it as a game where you saw events unfold from the perspective of other characters. That would be an interested idea, but neither are really relevant.

You said not to judge it on it's length (Which is stupid actually. One of the main draws for a story is it's length or lack of.) so I won't.

I'm judging it on the lack of branching. None of your choices affect the game. You either choose to be a positive person or a negative one. You live the same day and any "choices" are superficial at best.

My advice would be to unpublish it, make it longer (It was really short), and add some branching depending on how you take the situations you're presented with.