Player Comments on Princess Pretty - The Captain of the Queen's Guard -

There really isn't enough words to describe my fondness for this series, but I will certainly try my best to do so.

Touching. This was endearing, and it didn't sacrifice any of it's usual humor or charm to elicit that, especially towards the end. Just like the two previous games, the writing never fell flat in captivating me with it's wit and charm.

The new perspective that we are given as Floridel, as we see his story that explains his history with the Princess, and how their relationship came to be is done quite well. All of their interactions were just hilarious, and it made me even more fond for both Pretty and for Floridel, as it provided both characters with more depth.

It was fascinating to witness just how much their relationship changed, and how so much of it didn't. As confusing as that sounds, there's really no better way for it to be put into words by me :)

The Princess Pretty series never fails in consistency. The writing is always done so wonderfully, and each story leaves me with a sense of joy.

This entire series definitely gets the Thara seal of approval :D

I love the entire Princess Pretty series. It's heartfelt and entertaining despite - or perhaps even because of - it's innocent, almost child-like tone. Proof that storygames can still be excellent even on the light and fluffy end of the spectrum.

I very much enjoy your writing voice. It suits truly the tone of your story. You built the atmosphere with such a perfectly pleasant sense of humor.

Because it is a prequel we can't expect much in the form of choices but we still get a fun element of autonomy. I enjoyed the somewhat cartoonish style of characterization. It really worked in your favor.

Your work would have benefited from a bit more proofreading, several cases of "i" instead of "I," and a few other typos. They are hardly distracting from the story which overall reads neatly. Personally the length of this storygame is nice. Just long enough for depth, detail, and immersion but not long enough to wear out its gentle touch.

love it

it was pretty average...you should use pictures

Awesome

Passable story. No real tension thought so hard to like it a lot.

very interesting ending I like it

It was funny

so cool.

Simply amazing.

I really loved this one! On the one hand, none of the choices actually affected the final outcome. But that makes sense, since it IS a prequel. And it's great to have this story play out with some choices to actually have a few possible paths. It really makes me appreciate the character of Floridel even more. I knew there was more to him, and now the laughing at Pretty and pulling her hair makes much more sense. Honestly, even though this one was even easier since it was a prequel, I think it's the best. The writing is fantastic and the characterization is even better than before! I really hope we see more from you!

... the end was a little confusing but gorgeous story

Very cute story. Some problems with subject-verb agreement.

Love it

It ended a little bit abruptly, I thought maybe florian would get a chance to marry the princess but it was still really good!!

Wow. This is better than the original. Now I have to go back and reread it with Florian's point of view in mind.

It's great!

:D

Now we know Floridels story! This really clears up a few things, like how Floridel seems so attached to princess pretty, And once again great story!

Even when Floridel seemed sad P.P had a little surprise for him :D

Hi! Just curious, but has anyone succeeded in playing the route wherein Florian and Pretty leave the palace?

This was my favourite out of all of them. Publish the next one before I die of anticipation or something, I absolutely love these! Thanks for being a wonderful authoress.

Very entertaining, though there were a lot of false choices that lent a certain linearity to the story.

This is terrific :D I enjoyed your two earlier stories and you seem to be maturing more as a writer, this is starting to enter teen fiction territory now :) This is one of those rare stories of publishable quality so please keep writing as the more you write the better these stories get :D

Well done, but I can't tell whether I lost or won.

Well done. I quite enjoyed that :)

Fun cute story

Played through it just once. I'd like to thank those people who played the earlier installments of this series, especially those who left such kind words of encouragement. Things have been really tough for me lately but your words gave me strength. I thank you for all for being so patient and I look forward to hearing from you after you play. ^ ^ - cheniepenny