Player Comments on Randomness > ChooseYourStory.com

By enjoying a steak, I have caused world peace.

11.5/10 would eat steak again

— MrMustachio on 1/1/2017 11:37:45 PM with a score of 0

Cool story!

— Voltage on 11/30/2016 12:19:52 PM with a score of 0

Made me slightly chuckle. I clicked one link, which led to a painful, meat induced death.

I suggest you make this story A LOT longer.

— ZagHero on 6/5/2016 8:06:20 PM with a score of 0

It lacked a plot, was too short, and was quite random as the title suggests... It really wasn't that good. You should put more content on each page, more detail, so the reader can understand everything.

— CurseOfTime on 3/24/2016 11:00:11 AM with a score of 0

I survived...interesting story

— corgi213 on 10/12/2015 7:42:36 PM with a score of 0

It's funny but not so easy to survive.

— ShadowHunterJunior on 5/27/2015 12:30:50 AM with a score of 0

Not a fan of random humour :)

— Will11 on 3/3/2015 10:07:13 PM with a score of 0

BBBBBaaaaaaadddddddd to the bone

— Hannah on 12/28/2014 6:33:01 PM with a score of 0

Way too linear.

— What? on 6/12/2014 2:42:48 PM with a score of 0

Very funny, but I got slightly annoyed at the spelling errors.

— SamIAm on 6/12/2014 2:41:21 PM with a score of 0

Need steak…

— Nightsky on 4/11/2014 4:53:25 PM with a score of 0

But I like steak...

— Boringfirelion on 2/25/2014 7:28:31 PM with a score of 0

I got the "Damn Shrooms" Ending.

— GentleWinterBreeze on 2/19/2014 4:47:30 AM with a score of 0

Very random in a good way. Oh god i being sucked into the computer!

— Epic Reader on 9/23/2013 9:48:19 PM with a score of 0

A bit short... to be random, it has to be at least a little long. I should know. I am random.

— The_Great_Natalow on 9/11/2013 5:22:49 PM with a score of 0

No real story.
But it's supposed to be random, so maybe it's okay this time.

— HaruhiSuzumiya on 6/19/2013 5:50:25 PM with a score of 0

This cracked me up! I approve! =D

— MidnightShadow on 5/21/2013 2:00:41 PM with a score of 0

This is one of the better random stories I've see on this site. Good job. :)

— Brecat on 5/15/2013 3:04:55 PM with a score of 0

Well congratulations! You've written a random story game on this site where the humor is actually random! I think that deserves a medal. Very well done. :p

— Briar_Rose on 12/24/2012 7:14:22 AM with a score of 0

This was meant to be a parody. I saw all the other random games and mocked them in this little bit. I'll revise it again and then leave it alone when i'm done adding stuff.

— alienalpha on 8/22/2012 3:23:48 PM with a score of 0

horrible.

— Marmotlord on 7/20/2012 2:15:39 AM with a score of 0

Could do with slightly more branching

— Xt1000305 on 7/13/2012 9:36:30 AM with a score of 0

I thought it was moderately funny. The randomness kills itself after a few pages, because once you know that something completely ridiculous is going to happen no matter what you choose, it ceases to be random/unexpected. I would have thrown in a couple of 'serious' pages just to keep people on their toes.

— Loon on 7/10/2012 2:04:58 PM with a score of 0

I don't usually like the randomness type stories, but this one wasn't really that bad. Aside from all the random endings (no pun intended) it had a decent amount of meat on it. It seems like some real effort was put into it too, rather than piling crap together just to post a story for the points.

— BerkaZerka on 7/10/2012 11:33:06 AM with a score of 0