Player Comments on Reach Love

I'm surprised almost no one has commented so I think I ought to: the story was good and nicely written but it was a little on the short side, it also follows romance story conventions pretty predictably so the reader doesn't get a very strong emotional reaction, I'd suggest writing more on each page and giving the reader stronger emotional responses to the events and people they meet.
It's not a decent story and has good multiple branches but it is a little on the predictable side.

For the love of god, YOU'RE.
Your is only used when talking about something that belongs to you. You're is a contraction of you are, and should be used as such.
Other than that, it was too short for my taste. Okay story.

This was extremely short, and it didn't have that much writing as I would usually expect. It wasn't exactly well written, and the different colored text actually makes the sentence hard to read. Also, there were many grammatical mistakes, so please work on that and develop your plot and characters.

1/8. Sorry, but you'll need to try harder next time.

I like the part where you die, because you FORGOT to put on a parachute when you go skydiving...

Okay, so this was...okay. Every other character was in a Different Coloured Font, which kinda felt a bit creepy. Especially Jack. He started talking to me in this thick red font? I thought he was going to kidnap me or something.

Oh, and I couldn't read the girl with the bright bright yellow font. I actually had to highlight it in order to read it.

In the end, I ended up ignoring every character until the game forced me to go with some random guy called Colin. I guess I was supposed to go with someone and romance would ensue.

I didn't really enjoy it. It was alright. I just ended up going swimming with some stranger, something I would never do either.

It feels very short and the plot is kinda lame. Maybe adding some more description of people and getting to know them more instead of just their names? You don't really get attached to the characters or feel much because you know practically nothing about them.

Also, there was one typo that bothered me. "You are" shortened is spelled "you're", but you kept spelling it "your". It's a small mistake, but repeated many times.

Good simple story

The romance was way rushed. This could use description, but good job on the varying choices. The concept was pretty basic. 2/8

Was fun