scary creepypasta

Lol, this was some funny shit. You managed to piss off quite a bit of people so this was a very successful troll. But unfortunately troll games aren't a category here, so I'm forced to give this a 1/8. But good job at pissing people off.

Whoever gave you those 8/8's should know that they were undeserved. First of all, you don't go and call critics bastards just because we said your game sucks. Honestly, we know that you tried to troll, because everything you did about this game was terrible.

We should be more polite? No, I don't think so. If you can't deal with the criticism that comes with a game this horrid, then you shouldn't write a story game that no one with common sense will like.

Go and see what you did wrong with this game, and use it to write something worthwhile.

I try and give us gamemakers some credit we try and you just criticize and you just hate us for trying so guess what I will see if you jhave made any storygames and if you havuent you are a basterd and if you have you shold be moore polite

Honestly... one of the WORST games ever. I don't know if you're trying to be a troll, or you are just really bad at writing, considering your other games sucked too. I pity you, if you waited 90 minutes to publish this game-no these words.

I don't want to see anymore games from you if they're going to be this bad.

I thought it was hilarious, but there were too many grammar and spelling mistakes to give it a decent rating. Get yourself a 'Proofreader!'

--If at first you don't succeed, try, try again.

No...just no.

Don't published unfinished stories. *sigh*

I would suggest improving your grammar. The common theme amongst your storygames is the bad grammar.

Of course, these are just trollgames, but since you want good feedback, there you go.

Anyone should stay far, far away from this story.

Well somebody is an idiot, and it isn't the girl who vanquished me. And it isn't me. And it isn't sleeping angel. Here's a hint:

It's you.

lol it is in beta