Player Comments on Snow
Short and sweet.
In its shortness it was precise and lovely, and in its sweetness it was gut-wrenching and heart-warming
This is a story in part about duality; snow itself is beautiful, but it is cold to the touch. The story chills you and warms you, and the warmth is made more wonderful by the chill, like drinking hot chocolate after a day out in the cold.
The aspect I was most impressed with was the way the story concisely captured the essence of the feeling of snow. A story which, with every word makes you feel the FEELING of the title deeply, is cold and lovely, quiet and sad.
Criticism: The story is gripping, in a way which speaks to the lovesick teen in us; only a youth's eyes could see a character which is entirely without flaw. A character who is perfect is without depth. They will be confined to the rose-tinted fiction of the page, and never apply in a universal way to the lives of the readers. This can be hard to do in such a short format, where character development is already so minimal. I would have included one memory where she was showed to be not so stunningly, dreadfully, perfect, and then loved her anyway, loved her more.
on 8/23/2015 7:45:45 PM with a score of 0
As I began reading the story I was digging the style of your fragmented and vaguely connected bits of memory. I wondered briefly if it would get any more detailed, and was starting to think as I moved forward in the story that it wouldn't and that I would be disappointed because of this. You proved me wrong though, the emotions in this story, especially towards the end, were fantastic. Excellent use of the sites formatting. Well done.
on 9/2/2007 6:48:21 PM with a score of 0
I actually gave this an 8. A brilliant piece of clean writing. It manages to set mood in such a short amount of time, and really made me care about the characters. The romance was just that - romantic - without seeming forced or cheesy. Very clever, too, how the story is structured. Excellent, effective way to develop the characters. I really liked this.
on 6/27/2007 7:53:56 AM with a score of 0
It's so sad but I love it!!
-- Nikima on 3/26/2017 7:15:01 PM with a score of 0
good game sad ending
on 3/14/2017 3:14:19 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful. I want more of your stories. They are short but sweet and everything a good book should be.
-- Celeste on 3/14/2017 12:36:06 AM with a score of 0
I don't cry, I haven't cried in years! This made me. Thankyou!
-- Atharva Kulkarni on 3/7/2017 11:15:11 PM with a score of 0
I can't seem to find the words for this. It was short, sweet and beautiful.
-- Reader on 3/7/2017 3:53:21 PM with a score of 0
This is beautiful.
-- Dini on 3/1/2017 5:23:53 PM with a score of 0
-- ddogg on 2/17/2017 8:54:01 AM with a score of 0
This was a beautiful game! I love the fragmented style, and the simplicity; some things don't need elaboration. Very well written, and certainly one of my favourite stories so far.
on 2/17/2017 5:38:43 AM with a score of 0
Made me cry.
-- Lilllly on 2/12/2017 2:56:58 PM with a score of 0
That's what I'm talking about
-- Joepbwoy on 2/9/2017 8:50:34 PM with a score of 0
good game sad eniding
on 2/8/2017 11:20:35 AM with a score of 0
It's really good and I love it!
-- Aly on 2/7/2017 6:32:23 PM with a score of 0
I think it was sweet and cute. And it also made me tear up
-- Me on 2/7/2017 12:04:24 PM with a score of 0
-- Mudmaker on 2/4/2017 9:31:23 AM with a score of 0
this was interesting but short
-- Callista on 2/3/2017 7:57:01 PM with a score of 0
This was so sad that I started crying. I loved it so much and I usually don't get emotional with this kind of stuff
-- Phoenix on 2/3/2017 3:25:17 PM with a score of 0
Very good, actually.
on 1/31/2017 1:51:37 PM with a score of 0
I loved it, it is impossible to express how wonderful the story was.
on 1/24/2017 12:20:23 AM with a score of 0
You got me good. I thought i wouldnt be swayed by this but I was wrong. I enjoyed the little stories that started as a kid then becoming an adult.
-- Benj on 1/23/2017 9:01:23 AM with a score of 0
It was fun with a good emotional part XD
-- Gabby Yeltsin on 1/22/2017 5:35:10 PM with a score of 0
I loved the story, so deep and truly warmed my heart.
-- Peteter on 1/21/2017 12:24:20 PM with a score of 0
I loved it, make more stories like about sexy stuff
-- Karlyn on 1/18/2017 6:11:15 PM with a score of 0
Duuuuuuuude!!! This is the cutest thing I've ever read!!!
-- Taco Lord on 1/18/2017 11:08:29 AM with a score of 0
It's 11:32 pm, and the night is long. I stumbled across this site by accident, while searching for choose your own story's, after playing a video game that follows the same mechanics entitled: Life If Strange.
-- Robby L. O. on 1/18/2017 2:34:55 AM with a score of 0
It was great
-- Masha on 1/13/2017 10:32:26 AM with a score of 0
Wonderful. Short, but poignant, a bit of sweet but sad candy that I needed.
-- almostcried on 1/12/2017 9:26:04 PM with a score of 0
This is great. It's short , sweet , and emotional at the same time. it's just a good little game.
-- John on 1/12/2017 1:16:49 PM with a score of 0
Very sad.... but pretty good tho.
-- Brad on 1/12/2017 1:08:45 AM with a score of 0
I almost cried , the tale so beautiful but so sad. I work my hardest going back seeing my options. Why must it end the? I'm not mad just a sad man pondering his choices.
on 1/11/2017 12:51:29 AM with a score of 0
This was a pretty fun story! How old were they during the scene with the posing, though?
-- Silver on 1/9/2017 8:30:11 PM with a score of 0
While it was well written, it was painfully short. If we took more time to slow down and see what he relationship blossom more naturaly then it would have been a top story. I just felt that it was rushed.
-- Nick on 1/5/2017 6:41:16 AM with a score of 0
on 1/4/2017 1:48:20 AM with a score of 0
I want to know what happened after. The author left a suspense
-- Anuj Agrawal on 1/4/2017 12:31:45 AM with a score of 0
I love this story and you bye
-- harmony on 12/31/2016 8:47:19 PM with a score of 0
Nearly made me cry! So good! :-)
-- Catrina on 12/31/2016 6:53:51 PM with a score of 0
Great start but definitely needs more development and thought. And do not end it the way u did...have him go on a quest to find her with some supernatural elements for sure!!!
-- Renee on 12/30/2016 1:39:32 PM with a score of 0
sad but good
on 12/25/2016 2:55:06 AM with a score of 0
so s so lovely
on 12/21/2016 10:17:12 PM with a score of 0
It was a extremely lovely but sorrowful story. It had me enthralled but somber. You should write more.
-- Brian on 12/20/2016 2:29:05 PM with a score of 0
This was really cool, but answer one question please. Did the girl die?
-- Raina-The-Fire-Wolf on 12/17/2016 4:41:17 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing and very well written! I just wish there was bigger detail in the death part and the pain and suffering the boy felt :0
-- Nani Cat on 12/13/2016 5:13:11 PM with a score of 0
this is AMAZING LOVE
-- hunnybunny on 12/12/2016 12:02:48 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
-- L on 12/11/2016 7:19:17 PM with a score of 0
Its good except you didn't make me feel emotionally attached to the character. I didn't feel like these two really knew each other, they only shared a couple of childhood experiences and then are mad with love.
-- WhackaBoy on 12/10/2016 7:15:17 PM with a score of 0
Excellent. Fragmented and not to detailed, like the memories that the story is told in it is breathtaking for its simplicity. Not only is the writing style excellent but so is the decision making aspect, with multiple choices, each feeling right in its own way, and multiple endings, neither good depending on how you feel about them. All in All 8/8 would play again and again and again and again. P.S. I played this with classical music on in the background that seemed to change with the story, so that only made the ending that much more traumatizing.
on 12/9/2016 8:44:32 PM with a score of 0
:3 luvved it
on 12/5/2016 11:07:08 AM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story, and so sad, too!
-- Jara on 12/5/2016 9:43:27 AM with a score of 0
This story was great! I loved every bit of it, but I wanted to know more. What happened to her? Did she die as well and if so then how? I don't know your style of writing well enough to offer how to portray that but overall the story is fantastic!
on 11/29/2016 6:21:56 PM with a score of 0
Wow. Just wow. That was SO dramatic and sad! You did a good job,but try not to over do it.
-- Chloe on 11/29/2016 12:50:49 AM with a score of 0
What an incredibly beautiful and haunting story of love. Brilliant
-- Ty on 11/28/2016 3:55:05 PM with a score of 0
-- Rahila on 11/27/2016 12:06:00 PM with a score of 0
I don't get it, how did she die? But it was good tho
-- Destiny on 11/24/2016 4:59:29 PM with a score of 0
Very good, I liked it :)
-- Miranda on 11/24/2016 4:56:08 PM with a score of 0
Short dialogues and descriptions within scenes make the action and general feel of the story stick better. I've always followed a belief from my English class at UVU in that every word has a dollar amount and that you never want to make anything too expensive.
Death is a strong theme here, and living life is as well. The emotional experience is well worth it.
on 11/22/2016 8:17:28 AM with a score of 0
on 11/21/2016 2:17:45 PM with a score of 0
This story is shot but it makes you feel by the way Sethaniel describes the girl.
-- Mari on 11/18/2016 11:08:49 AM with a score of 0
short, but incredibly powerful. I truly felt like all this time I had been chasing her, never quite catching up, until she vanished and I could never hope to reach her again.
-- um on 11/18/2016 8:14:08 AM with a score of 0
Oh my... The feels at the end though. Reminds me of Your Lie in April tho. Good one! I demand more xD
-- Rycan on 11/15/2016 7:51:13 AM with a score of 0
Truly enlightening, a good story needs no numerous chapters to be touching and this proves it, a journey of love, loss, friendship, life and death. Be proud, you are not just an author, you are an artist.
-- Reaver17 on 11/14/2016 11:30:37 PM with a score of 0
on 11/11/2016 11:55:10 PM with a score of 0
Deeply moving, the memories were perfect to create both characters. However, there could've been some done to make the ending more poignant. Overall, excellent read, well done and thank you!
-- IsaacL on 11/11/2016 7:17:42 PM with a score of 0
found story too short
-- AnubisLT on 11/11/2016 12:42:46 PM with a score of 0
Wow! This is a great story.
on 11/10/2016 11:54:52 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it, but I think it would have been better if here had been a happy ending as well.
on 11/10/2016 5:15:11 PM with a score of 0
For an unexpected first time, this was amazing!! Very sad though, I was really liking the girl :( but it was fantastic!!
-- Hime on 11/9/2016 10:34:43 PM with a score of 0
One I dont like the fact that they are more like friends with benifits then lovers, and that there isnt a moral option to love her. Then she just dies. great. then you see her as a ghost but she'll never be yours. That sucks
-- Loco on 11/4/2016 9:56:14 AM with a score of 0
The feels. So good.
-- Logan Hernandez on 11/3/2016 8:56:13 PM with a score of 0
This is really short but great. People, you should play this!!!!!!!!!(Warning: This is a sad story)
-- Tori on 11/3/2016 10:20:42 AM with a score of 0
So beautiful and tender. I cried. Hahaha!
-- Grill on 11/3/2016 1:20:23 AM with a score of 0
Sad yet good
-- Ryan Wheatley on 10/29/2016 1:52:59 AM with a score of 0
Amazing story! There wasn't too much backstory to the two characters... but still really well done! Masterpiece!
on 10/28/2016 5:52:43 PM with a score of 0
It was good, though the part were its explict 18 or older...
I am 10...
soo u might want to change that.
For the young, at least...
-- Dafluff on 10/27/2016 8:37:59 PM with a score of 0
this is an excellent story but its just a bit short
-- josh on 10/27/2016 1:35:39 PM with a score of 0
An interesting story, with some touching and vivid scenes.
-- Dr. N on 10/26/2016 12:40:20 PM with a score of 0
This is really awesome. Sweet, and at the same time heartbreaking as well. Can you please do more of these? It really made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, hehe. But seriously, great work. Two thumbs up for you.
Even better than Reese's cups. ??
-- Jenna on 10/26/2016 6:10:46 AM with a score of 0
Wow, what can I say? This is a prime example of "less is more" if there ever was one. As brilliant as snow!
-- Dian on 10/24/2016 5:57:51 PM with a score of 0
delicious story, would've liked more
-- reader on 10/23/2016 10:11:53 PM with a score of 0
I cry ;; It jumped around a bit but the story it's self... well WOW
-- Mink on 10/23/2016 8:33:41 AM with a score of 0
on 10/22/2016 6:51:44 PM with a score of 0
For me, this was a lovely introduction to this site.
I don't often cry at pieces of literature, movies, etc.; more often, I get chills at moments that might bring a tear to another's eye. Needless to say, the ending gave me goosebumps - which made the conclusion of this story all the more beautiful for me. Clear proof that a story doesn't have to be lengthy to be great.
on 10/21/2016 1:12:32 AM with a score of 0
ITS ONE AM AND IM CRYING THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL
-- rhiannon on 10/20/2016 4:13:42 AM with a score of 0
Bless you filled my day up with hope of love
on 10/18/2016 10:18:39 PM with a score of 0
An enticing story, had me on the edge of my seat. The ending I got was quite pleasing and surprising. Loved the read.
-- FoxTrotr on 10/17/2016 8:13:54 PM with a score of 0
I did not cry or anything. But it's good.
-- Ngo Van Ngoc on 10/17/2016 5:41:48 AM with a score of 0
It's amazing. It made me want to cry. It's really short but that's what makes it amazing.
-- Yael on 10/16/2016 6:09:41 PM with a score of 0
not really cup of my tea
on 10/15/2016 11:06:03 AM with a score of 0
Very nice writing.
-- anon on 10/14/2016 11:26:12 PM with a score of 0
First timer here, loved the story, I was drawn in more and more every time I had picked a selection, definitely glad I picked this one first. Awesome story keep it up
-- Gman on 10/13/2016 1:15:19 AM with a score of 0
Interesting delivery / plot
-- Colette on 10/11/2016 12:18:59 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful and simply written.
-- Dan on 10/7/2016 8:39:57 PM with a score of 0
Sethaniel, how dare you make a story so depressing but beautiful, that it makes me cry? I should not read these stories, but stories like this are just unable to be refused. This story is sad, and brings many memories to my mind that I had formally forgotten about.
on 10/7/2016 5:33:03 PM with a score of 0
-- bobby joe on 10/7/2016 3:25:48 PM with a score of 0
Aww it's so sweet
on 10/7/2016 12:03:59 AM with a score of 0
This is good. Not the best, but good.
-- Flash on 10/5/2016 7:40:22 AM with a score of 0
-- Sky on 10/4/2016 10:00:46 PM with a score of 0
i love it so much thank you your amazing i wish to write like yo did may i contact you to get tips and any pointers
-- hunter on 10/4/2016 5:28:28 AM with a score of 0
Welp, that was depressing. It was good though.
on 10/2/2016 1:54:40 AM with a score of 0
This was cute, but depressing...
-- Gamergirl.exe on 9/30/2016 8:32:55 PM with a score of 0
it's a nice story but really sad at the end :(
on 9/29/2016 1:40:27 PM with a score of 0
It's short, and it's melodramatic, but I'd be lying if I said this didn't really get to me. This is obviously different from most of the storybooks on here and I'd love to see more of this style and quality.
on 9/29/2016 9:30:17 AM with a score of 0
can i not cry please...
-- Lucas on 9/28/2016 4:04:33 AM with a score of 0
daaammmmnnn boy or girl dammnn you can wriiiittee...im a sucker for sad love stories
-- rayne on 9/26/2016 7:17:01 PM with a score of 0
Well done, I enjoyed how my earlier choices were reflected later in the story, something that the old choose your own adventures couldn't do I guess.
-- heath macfarlane on 9/25/2016 4:40:50 AM with a score of 0
sad... but amazing i don't know how to describe it
on 9/23/2016 9:05:46 PM with a score of 0
Very emotional, lovely game.
-- Olivia on 9/23/2016 6:48:29 PM with a score of 0
This was heartbreaking
-- Bryan on 9/20/2016 9:02:49 PM with a score of 0
THIS STORY IS SO UNEXPECTEDLY SWEET. I highly suggest reading and playing. It's not long at all but very worth your time
-- Gabriel Stanford on 9/20/2016 10:10:39 AM with a score of 0
That was stupid. Especially the portrait part and then the stupid death. WTF.
-- Andrea on 9/19/2016 4:46:13 PM with a score of 0
This story is heartwarming and simple and short, like the snow so delicately described. I definately did NOT cry at the end.
on 9/19/2016 4:25:33 PM with a score of 0
Interesting I want to see if other choices get me any other ending
-- AJ on 9/16/2016 7:21:16 PM with a score of 0
IT IS STUPID AND STUPID AGAIN
on 9/15/2016 5:09:39 PM with a score of 0
It was very well written! Loved it!
-- Kate on 9/15/2016 1:50:06 AM with a score of 0
Very well written, nicely done.
-- Philip MEinecke on 9/13/2016 3:43:14 PM with a score of 0
This story is good! It might be a miniature masterpiece of literacy introduction!
-- Christian on 9/12/2016 9:39:08 AM with a score of 0
so sad omg i love how this was so soft and loving.
-- caramelmesshead on 9/11/2016 3:04:54 PM with a score of 0
A great story. No spoilers, but it's very sweet and sad. I personally enjoyed it.
-- Billy Mays on 9/6/2016 8:37:09 PM with a score of 0
umm.. the ending was... i... ehh...bad cuz the poor mother that has always have cared, loved, and all... plus choosing between a DEAD GIRL that cannot....err,reproduce and his living mother. really??
and he could die... or come back alive but his father will never forgive him i guess......
other than that fine.
-- anonymous on 9/6/2016 5:36:59 PM with a score of 0
hi im jeff and i <3 this story. mai rating is 7.8 too much water. nice and emotional and stuff.
-- Jeff on 9/5/2016 12:26:31 PM with a score of 0
7.8 too much snow. Emotinal
-- Bob on 9/5/2016 12:25:56 PM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story, with an amazing ending. I loved it! :D
-- Never gonna give you up on 9/5/2016 10:24:55 AM with a score of 0
its ok i just wish she didnt die
-- Tony on 9/2/2016 7:04:37 PM with a score of 0
-- kayden on 9/2/2016 4:54:15 PM with a score of 0
Holy shiz my heart. She died didn't she.
-- Hazzy on 9/1/2016 12:13:20 AM with a score of 0
on 8/31/2016 12:49:08 PM with a score of 0
This was a beautiful story. I felt joy and sadness in such a short story. Beautiful.
-- Dominic on 8/30/2016 1:01:08 AM with a score of 0
It only took five minutes to read it but it still made me cry
-- Blake on 8/28/2016 11:14:37 PM with a score of 0
More like a interactive poem than an choose your own adventure, but the tale is still a well written one.
on 8/26/2016 1:22:00 PM with a score of 0
This was something i will never forget, the way you put the story together was brilliant but,the thing is, this is the only story that made me cry. So congratulation i guess
on 8/20/2016 1:53:46 PM with a score of 0
almost made me cry its so good
-- cool fire on 8/18/2016 4:22:24 AM with a score of 0
sweet, short, and a little sad. Beautiful story.
Thank you Sethaniel
on 8/16/2016 12:18:00 PM with a score of 0
Wow, I'm speechless... That was done very well.
on 8/15/2016 9:55:07 PM with a score of 0
I started this a fun thing, and I ended up crying at the end. How dare you.
-- Mr Pooble on 8/14/2016 2:32:46 AM with a score of 0
on 8/14/2016 12:53:22 AM with a score of 0
Beautifully told; a lovely story.
-- B on 8/11/2016 11:34:13 PM with a score of 0
That had the right amount of feeling where I almost cried and also smiled.
-- Angel Wilber on 8/11/2016 10:44:21 PM with a score of 0
It was a short and sad story. I loved it.
-- Meg on 8/10/2016 2:18:04 PM with a score of 0
This was heart breaking (did she kill a man)I am a little confused and heart broken for him but I love it so much!
-- Kika Grether on 8/7/2016 11:30:19 PM with a score of 0
It's good, it's beautiful, and really sad at the same time.
I like how it's kind of vague about the story.
on 8/7/2016 5:56:30 PM with a score of 0
This was an amazing story! Please make a part 2, would love to see the loose ends tied up.
-- CLL on 8/7/2016 12:26:36 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful...it's perfect and sad...
-- Tristion Saiara on 8/4/2016 4:29:13 PM with a score of 0
What a wonderful story. Terrific writing
-- Victor on 8/4/2016 3:04:29 PM with a score of 0
Gave me chills. Any story that can do that is good in my book.
-- brad on 7/31/2016 10:13:33 PM with a score of 0
This was heavy.....
-- Wow on 7/22/2016 10:56:29 AM with a score of 0
The first story I've read on this site — like a modern Ethan Frome, very universal and sweet.
-- Misha on 7/21/2016 12:43:34 AM with a score of 0
Wow, that was a beautiful story.
on 7/20/2016 12:08:29 AM with a score of 0
It's so sad yet makes you feel warm. In the end when she reaches for him as a ghost it makes me feel tingly. You phrased everything so beautifully it made me feel like I was in the story. 8/8!
on 7/18/2016 9:46:48 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god. This is amazing and sad at the same time. I am honestly glad you had made this, though I want to know what happened to her. I want to know so bad xD
-- Ethan Parker on 7/17/2016 2:48:32 PM with a score of 0
Cool. I just started this. It made me sadness??
-- Potato person on 7/12/2016 10:38:14 PM with a score of 0
It was ok but sad ??
-- Kaylie on 7/9/2016 9:48:45 AM with a score of 0
sweet, and I was always on the edge of my well... couch. bittersweet though... I was close to tears
-- Cul on 7/9/2016 8:26:32 AM with a score of 0
Aw it is so sad.
on 7/8/2016 12:58:26 PM with a score of 0
-- xYuuki on 7/8/2016 2:56:18 AM with a score of 0
This was intense, heartbreaking, and bueatiful. It reminded me of Erased. Good work!!!!!! You are a phenomenal writer.
-- Ragablaze on 7/7/2016 11:18:53 PM with a score of 0
This was so interesting! Its really creative and I really want to play until I see all the ending options! This was really wonderful. <3
-- Tee-Chan on 7/7/2016 10:00:11 PM with a score of 0
This story was honestly very beautiful. I could feel an honest sense of loss when the girl died, and I actually miss the chance to have saved her.
-- Amy on 7/3/2016 11:18:53 PM with a score of 0
why is it called snow when it's summer
on 6/30/2016 9:47:55 PM with a score of 0
saddest story on the site...
on 6/30/2016 3:37:35 PM with a score of 0
It was a really delightful read.
-- Cardinal Funky on 6/30/2016 12:10:43 AM with a score of 0
The writing is sweet and poignant. I enjoyed the story of young love and bitter loss. The simplicity of the writing makes the story all the more touching, allowing the character's emotions to shine through.
on 6/27/2016 4:24:35 PM with a score of 0
It was a great story. Very heartrending at the end though
-- Eli on 6/27/2016 12:28:59 PM with a score of 0
Great work, congratulations.
-- one on 6/26/2016 11:01:44 PM with a score of 0
..sweet yet sad at the same time
on 6/24/2016 4:18:05 PM with a score of 0
Very neat little jewel of a story. Quite beautiful.
-- MikeO on 6/22/2016 10:19:49 AM with a score of 0
I actually cried reading this. Sethaniel, you are a genius.
on 6/21/2016 2:21:12 PM with a score of 0
Good but sad.
-- Kate on 6/20/2016 7:05:02 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful to read. I've always liked the snow; it felt sad and sweet and lovely to me. This is all that and more. Absolutely Incredible.
-- Elli on 6/19/2016 8:38:43 PM with a score of 0
It ripped my heart out in a beautiful way.
-- Rachel on 6/17/2016 12:12:12 AM with a score of 0
I honestly have no idea what to think/feel about this, but I feel.. different, a good different though.
-- Macks on 6/15/2016 10:11:10 PM with a score of 0
Basically I read this twice, and the second path was incredible. First path was obviously good enough and intriguing enough to do it again, but wow...the second path left me breathless. Beautiful writing throughout though. Absolutely genius.
-- Kim on 6/14/2016 12:53:39 AM with a score of 0
Is it normal to cry
-- Zerø on 6/10/2016 9:58:04 PM with a score of 0
To be honest, i kinda liked it. Yes if we overcome the fact that i'll never love a ''man'' who can't even stand a bully and let his self be saved by a woman, and that by the way i will never let my love die frozen just to follow me....But still it was really nice and cute, even if the end was a little sad to me,i mean, i
expected that she came out alive from the woods and that they would have come back together...i am too much of a dreamer, ain't i? It's a cool game, and a nice story, expecially de memories ??
-- Chanelkomskaikru on 6/9/2016 11:12:01 AM with a score of 0
Uneasy, that's how I feel. As intense as short.
-- Cristian on 6/3/2016 5:44:54 AM with a score of 0
Tears. Nothing but tears
-- Il_Capo on 6/2/2016 1:57:32 PM with a score of 0
It was AWESOMESAUSE!!!!
-- MagicalTacocatYT on 5/30/2016 6:05:48 PM with a score of 0
It's heartbreaking. The author has truly left a depressing ending for me. Good work!
-- 1bel on 5/27/2016 9:32:53 AM with a score of 0
Damn dude,so sad :,( But i liked the story
-- Mr_Incolor on 5/24/2016 2:29:59 PM with a score of 0
I think it's a great story, but in the first 4 memories, the actions don't affect the other memories. I love this story! :)
-- Malachite on 5/24/2016 8:55:06 AM with a score of 0
Almost cried. WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?
-- Daniella on 5/22/2016 2:16:16 AM with a score of 0
It's only raining a little bit on my face now...
-- Tom on 5/19/2016 10:06:21 PM with a score of 0
More touching than me Before you, better ending though...
-- Victoria on 5/14/2016 9:10:35 PM with a score of 0
Very good I liked it
-- Anonymous on 5/14/2016 1:19:04 PM with a score of 0
good story. i hate recess
-- Zero on 5/12/2016 12:03:31 PM with a score of 0
this is great! a must read for all new comers to this website!!!
on 5/11/2016 8:27:12 PM with a score of 0
Good but shortly
on 5/11/2016 5:12:59 PM with a score of 0
This is really amazing. Pure art and sends you on a roller-coaster of emotion. Good work
-- Bob on 5/10/2016 2:12:17 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful story, actually teared up at the end. The mood was perfect, the characters were memorable, the romance was good. Really well done for a short story.
-- Thorngage on 5/3/2016 8:31:44 PM with a score of 0
A bit boring, not the worst, not the best
-- Ricky on 5/1/2016 10:42:10 PM with a score of 0
That is the saddest thing I've ever read.
-- Hannah on 5/1/2016 1:24:56 PM with a score of 0
on 4/30/2016 2:17:38 PM with a score of 0
That was well how can I put this into words just amazing and certainly unexpected I loved it.
-- Alannah on 4/30/2016 1:41:39 PM with a score of 0
It was beautiful and shows how determined two friends are to see each other.
Very well done indeed
-- Mahnoor on 4/29/2016 6:43:38 PM with a score of 0
-- lsls on 4/28/2016 4:25:15 PM with a score of 0
Pretty sad, but not rated pg-13. nor rated pg. somewhere in between.
on 4/27/2016 2:55:17 PM with a score of 0
So great, so sad...
on 4/26/2016 7:36:50 PM with a score of 0
Wow this is deep.
on 4/26/2016 6:37:42 PM with a score of 0
Was there a drastic change to the end depending on how you answered the first questions? Idk but It was a fine start as my first CYO story here.
-- Valentine on 4/24/2016 4:37:15 AM with a score of 0
This was amazing. I am speechless
-- I_WannaBeA_Real_Fake on 4/22/2016 4:13:43 PM with a score of 0
-- Samara on 4/22/2016 2:03:45 AM with a score of 0
I don't like the fact that she has to be your lover... But good story though!
on 4/19/2016 10:50:41 AM with a score of 0
It was so short, but so sweet. I loved it. This Storygame is great for new members.
on 4/17/2016 2:03:03 PM with a score of 0
-- anon on 4/16/2016 10:49:50 AM with a score of 0
it was a great story but it just makes me want to know more like what has happened to her and what will be depper in the woods also this stories always leave cliff hangers
-- Samuel on 4/15/2016 10:59:29 PM with a score of 0
Deep, Great and pretty short. PLAY IT RIGHT NOW! (draw me like one of your french girls)
-- SKULLZOR on 4/15/2016 6:16:27 PM with a score of 0
My Heart is hurting now. I don't know how to feel about this story, I got so excited and then a single tear started falling down as I realize she is dead.
THAT was amazing, and i'm happy I had the honor to read your story :').
-- Yaron on 4/8/2016 4:37:30 PM with a score of 0
A very artful experience. Not too many words, especially at the start, but it paints a beautiful portrait of the story. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
on 4/7/2016 5:08:16 PM with a score of 0
This is my first story I played on this website. And I couldn't do anything but read it twice.
-- Illist on 4/4/2016 4:30:17 AM with a score of 0
-- tom on 4/3/2016 6:17:32 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it.
on 4/1/2016 2:09:57 PM with a score of 0
-- sean on 4/1/2016 10:21:35 AM with a score of 0
It's — so — GOOD!!!! can't believe it...
on 3/31/2016 10:08:49 PM with a score of 0
Good job it was really good!
on 3/29/2016 4:24:49 PM with a score of 0
Needs more action c;
-- Crabgus bibcok on 3/29/2016 1:43:26 PM with a score of 0
-- cho.de on 3/28/2016 7:45:25 PM with a score of 0
Made me wanna cry!
-- G on 3/26/2016 11:43:28 PM with a score of 0
Not quite the ending I expected, but amazing nevertheless.
-- Jonathan on 3/26/2016 8:31:10 PM with a score of 0
-- rowan on 3/25/2016 8:01:06 AM with a score of 0
so sad. so very very sad.
-- emma on 3/25/2016 12:18:07 AM with a score of 0
This was delightfully heartbreaking. Very pleasant read though, I applaud you.
-- SiennaS on 3/23/2016 7:14:50 PM with a score of 0
While it was enjoyable, it was in fact rather predictable.
-- John X on 3/21/2016 11:48:30 PM with a score of 0
As an inexperienced author, I found this really interesting. I like the recurring themes of snow and first love and I thought they were used very well. I just wish there was more explanation of her death. Also, I thought we didn't really have enough material to get really attached to the characters, which is both a blessing and a curse. At least the reader was spared some tears. I think if it were longer it would be better, but this was, in my humble opinion, an excellent read. Keep it up!
-- Caitlin on 3/21/2016 9:34:18 PM with a score of 0
Wow That was deep
on 3/20/2016 10:57:28 PM with a score of 0
Short but good.
I liked how a lot of the choices led to "memories". :3
on 3/19/2016 3:22:52 PM with a score of 0
It was am adorable story written about love and lose
on 3/18/2016 9:46:31 AM with a score of 0
well, I didn't expect to get depressed. ;-;
-- Nicole on 3/17/2016 11:39:06 AM with a score of 0
Very emotional, I'd love to read more.
-- Lauren on 3/16/2016 8:41:16 PM with a score of 0
Love it! It was very sad but it was amazing too.
-- annaisawesome on 3/16/2016 12:27:55 PM with a score of 0
Shortly put, this is one hell of a story and I continue replaying it.....so bitter-sweet....I love it
-- Rhinotz on 3/15/2016 12:22:56 PM with a score of 0
That was so good I am still thinking about it.
-- Zombie killer on 3/15/2016 10:42:06 AM with a score of 0
I (Katy) thought it was very cute yet haunting and really makes you think about the morality of humans.
i marie was thinkin boi he bout to do it the entire time thought our homie the narrator was boutta commit sue of side.
-- Katy and Marie on 3/12/2016 9:20:06 PM with a score of 0
beautiful story, couldn't have written it better my self
-- Justun on 3/12/2016 8:50:26 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry!! 10/10
-- Asdf.craft on 3/12/2016 12:01:34 AM with a score of 0
What a beautiful story sad yet amazing I would love to read more like this again. (:
-- Lauren on 3/11/2016 2:24:04 PM with a score of 0
Wow that is deep, unbelievably good story!
-- Nick on 3/11/2016 11:00:11 AM with a score of 0
Gah, this is haunting. Lovely prose, engaging story, a sense of longing and nostalgia present throughout - it made me nostalgic for a life I never had.
on 3/10/2016 1:54:37 PM with a score of 0
D'awwwwww. Very sweet.
-- iavatus on 3/9/2016 12:07:43 AM with a score of 0
Sad. So sad.
on 3/8/2016 12:53:09 AM with a score of 0
Short, but very very sweet!
on 3/7/2016 11:46:43 PM with a score of 0
-- Kat on 3/7/2016 3:54:53 AM with a score of 0
-- Gage on 3/4/2016 9:34:24 PM with a score of 0
this... it was beautiful...
I read this with a wild guess that it'd be terrible, like I usually do, but after 15-20 seconds into it, my mind changed it's thoughts... beautiful ending, I hope you make another story like this sooner or later!
-- thomas on 3/3/2016 9:02:28 PM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful story, but it wasn't quite friendly to both genders. :#
-- Nina on 2/29/2016 9:35:58 PM with a score of 0
-- rowan on 2/28/2016 4:40:59 AM with a score of 0
This really hit me with the feels. **Possible spoilers to those who haven't played yet** It's a fantastic story of recalling memories of a childhood friend who you learn to love. It has a fantastic ending, and although i wish there was an ending where they "lived happily ever after", I'm glad there wasn't. Some of the best things aren't happy or fairy tale-like. Some of the best things on stories, shows, or anything really are dark, sad, gruesome, and that area of emotion. I believe we need more of these types of things to really exult and bring out all the possibilities humans can experience. But getting back on track, it is a great game that references snow amazingly with an awesome ending that truly satisfies love struck people.
-- Vincent on 2/27/2016 8:04:07 PM with a score of 0
Beatiful touching magical
-- Luna stolnove on 2/27/2016 6:56:15 AM with a score of 0
i read this when it first came out i forgot the name and looked for it forever but never could find it till now i still remember my first time playing it, it was beautiful both times around great work
-- Clay on 2/24/2016 10:25:29 PM with a score of 0
Not very captivating. Kinda...boring.
-- Emma D on 2/24/2016 3:55:32 PM with a score of 0
I cried. :-( Amazing story.
on 2/22/2016 7:39:12 AM with a score of 0
Its so beautiful...and it made me cry. ;w;
However, its still beautiful. :D
on 2/22/2016 12:07:15 AM with a score of 0
This story. It was, very touching. It gave me chills and tears, however its truly worth reading. It will surely open up your heart in some way.
on 2/15/2016 9:13:54 PM with a score of 0
-- sudeshna on 2/15/2016 4:26:17 PM with a score of 0
At first I was like "aww, this is so sweet!"
Changed my mind at the end... XD
You have a sweet writing style, I like it :)
on 2/14/2016 9:14:26 AM with a score of 0
Goose bumps! Short sweet love story.
-- Guru on 2/14/2016 3:53:37 AM with a score of 0
A beautiful, simple love story that I would read again and again in my bored, nostalgic hours.
on 2/13/2016 8:30:12 PM with a score of 0
Still my favorite story on the site that I helped create.
on 2/13/2016 1:05:59 AM with a score of 0
A heart-touching story. I loved every part of it. The only problem was that it was a bit too short.
on 2/12/2016 12:09:39 PM with a score of 0
This was... amazing. Seriously, read it before bed, cried, then slept the best sleep I've had in ages.
-- Jinx on 2/10/2016 2:48:32 PM with a score of 0
The type of heart-warming and heart-wrenchingly believable story that makes you yearn for love.
on 2/8/2016 9:34:24 PM with a score of 0
I enjoyed it quite a bit. At the end I almost bursted in to tears.
on 2/7/2016 12:19:14 PM with a score of 0
-- me on 2/4/2016 11:55:59 AM with a score of 0
on 2/4/2016 5:44:39 AM with a score of 0
Wow, this was an amazing short story.
I loved it.
I wish I could forget it and relive the emotions all over again.
-- John DarkFlame on 2/3/2016 5:49:39 PM with a score of 0
This story was as gentle and slow as the snow. I like the innocence of each memory and how they weren't shrouded in too much gushy romance. It was relaxing. The ending really came to a smack to my face and I could feel how the guy felt when he spoke to his father. For a moment, I really missed her and reflected on the choices in our memories, which is a fulfilling thing. Also, that Art scene was really well done. It was delightfully erotic, if that isn't too much of a giveaway. I think replaying the story was more emotional though. The author made the scenes so subtle that when I went back through, I noticed how it led up to what happened. I also somehow unlocked more memories by changing some choices, which was a nice touch. It even led to a different ending that I liked much better. I'm not sure if there's more than two though. Either way, this was a great little story. I'd recommend it to people who like a light and mature mini romance and don't mind bittersweet endings.
on 2/3/2016 8:35:44 AM with a score of 0
it was so sad that i almost cried but i didnt the girl and boy where beautiful together
-- mia on 2/2/2016 9:28:32 PM with a score of 0
Intense. Swirling imagery in my mind. It's like a song and I can almost see the lyrics and hear the melody. Beautiful piece. Thanks for the delight.
on 2/2/2016 1:01:21 AM with a score of 0
Such a sad ending...
-- Anonymous on 1/30/2016 12:25:01 AM with a score of 0
-- Kyle on 1/29/2016 8:30:41 PM with a score of 0
Lovely! It was very sad at the end, but that just made it better.
-- chloe on 1/29/2016 12:33:14 AM with a score of 0
I really liked this story. It was short, simple, and sweet. You're very creative. Thanks for the wonderful read!
-- Kaiouri on 1/28/2016 10:05:36 PM with a score of 0
This so sweet!
on 1/27/2016 4:33:35 PM with a score of 0
So sad the end why do you have to make me cry
-- Roseanna on 1/26/2016 10:18:31 PM with a score of 0
Simple and elegant, just the way I like it.
on 1/26/2016 4:26:51 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful short story. Sad but heartwarming. Both powerful and emotional for such a short read. Loved it
on 1/25/2016 11:23:00 AM with a score of 0
A good read! Especially the memory parts makes you stay connected with the characters. Good job.
-- rozan977 on 1/24/2016 8:11:42 PM with a score of 0
Great job keeping the tone the same throughout the story. I like the fact that there feels like I had some control in which way the story goes, but that ultimately you were telling me a story with flashbacks and a coherent ending.
-- Bob on 1/24/2016 6:32:47 PM with a score of 0
amazing just amazing so sad and happy at the same just awesome
on 1/23/2016 8:51:26 PM with a score of 0
-- Arc on 1/23/2016 5:11:10 PM with a score of 0
The imagery was very vivid throughout the story. I would have preferred more impactful decisions. Thank you for sharing.
-- Melinda Oliver on 1/22/2016 12:27:03 PM with a score of 0
I liked it
-- Anarkin on 1/21/2016 8:30:55 PM with a score of 0
Short, depressing, and sad. Not my favorite, but not bad either.
on 1/20/2016 7:03:29 PM with a score of 0
-- cory on 1/20/2016 3:18:39 PM with a score of 0
Amazingly written and easy to read. I almost cried at the end
-- R on 1/20/2016 7:18:21 AM with a score of 0
Short but meaningful
-- John Garcia on 1/18/2016 10:24:08 PM with a score of 0
umm i liked it i mean why does he not find her
-- sadie on 1/18/2016 6:37:03 PM with a score of 0
It was very short and sweet, you'd always want to see how she'd react to what you said but never want to offend her. She seemed like your only friend. And since I had a lonely childhood, this story helped me feel what it would be like to have had a friend then even if just a little, thank you.
-- Jen on 1/18/2016 2:28:46 PM with a score of 0
I finally have sad feelings...????????
on 1/15/2016 4:21:17 AM with a score of 0
it was pretty good!
-- john on 1/13/2016 7:58:08 PM with a score of 0
This was a great story! I just can't put how good it is in words.
-- Elsa on 1/12/2016 5:01:53 PM with a score of 0
I felt that the ending was rushed
-- Saifire on 1/12/2016 2:59:48 PM with a score of 0
Good ending, good story.
-- Tyler on 1/11/2016 11:17:55 PM with a score of 0
So powerful for so short a story.
-- Dylan on 1/11/2016 10:07:55 PM with a score of 0
wow. this is just so sad and joyful at the same time :')
-- Bobeatspie300 on 1/11/2016 8:39:48 PM with a score of 0
on 1/11/2016 1:35:49 AM with a score of 0
This was amazing. I loved it, so, so much. Thank you for making this <3
-- Dandelion on 1/10/2016 11:39:24 PM with a score of 0
I Found this story completely beautiful. Even if it was short it was heart-warming.It is sad yet it touches your heart.
on 1/10/2016 9:44:09 PM with a score of 0
on 1/10/2016 4:50:25 PM with a score of 0
Very reminiscent of a few of my more intimate life moments. Definitely pulled at my heartstrings. Very well done. Thanks for the experience.
-- Kevin on 1/10/2016 3:02:20 PM with a score of 0
I hope I can dream at night in my sleep about this very beautiful story. Thank you for the very very nice read!
-- Jefferson on 1/10/2016 4:54:01 AM with a score of 0
Good lord I wish I had a love like that...except for the last part.
on 1/10/2016 1:03:04 AM with a score of 0
-- Geethmo on 1/9/2016 5:10:14 PM with a score of 0
-- Me on 1/9/2016 2:03:38 PM with a score of 0
This story reminded me of my first love. I felt like crying. Thank you.
-- Lucas on 1/9/2016 8:23:11 AM with a score of 0
Short and sweet. Really good my first story. Will come back for more
-- Joboo on 1/9/2016 5:41:00 AM with a score of 0
really sweet brah.
-- Nathan on 1/9/2016 4:49:49 AM with a score of 0
Really damn good
-- Ryan on 1/9/2016 3:00:45 AM with a score of 0
I truly enjoyed this one. Without any spoilers to anyone it will prove to you that what you are looking for is right in front of you!
-- Spencer on 1/9/2016 2:51:08 AM with a score of 0
Maybe they were happy, after that. Maybe they weren't. I bless them nonetheless.
-- A Stranger on 1/9/2016 2:01:07 AM with a score of 0
-- harsha on 1/7/2016 11:21:27 PM with a score of 0
What a twisted ending for me.. nice job on making this! this was really well made
-- Jacob Newton on 1/7/2016 3:55:35 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed reading this'll. Thank you.
-- Jorge on 1/4/2016 6:33:33 PM with a score of 0
This is... creative. Very heartwarming. But sad, too. Just what any story needs.
-- ShortHairCat on 1/2/2016 9:43:45 AM with a score of 0
Very sad and sweet. The writing style works well with the overall mood of the story.
on 1/1/2016 8:47:03 PM with a score of 0
It's quite good, except I think there might be a glitch because it makes me press the "older" memories in order.
-- Anonymous on 12/30/2015 3:13:23 AM with a score of 0
that was kind of a good but scary ending.. i kinda liked it
-- girl16 on 12/29/2015 4:07:28 AM with a score of 0
This is the first "chooseyourstory" I read. Very sad and sweet. :)
-- a on 12/29/2015 2:52:34 AM with a score of 0
I didn't rate it because this is my first time so I don't know what the other ones are like
-- Mihaela on 12/29/2015 1:17:48 AM with a score of 0
I really did enjoy the short story. It was so sweet.
on 12/28/2015 6:11:15 PM with a score of 0
-- Liz on 12/28/2015 5:21:02 AM with a score of 0
amazing gave me goosebumps...no words just amazing!
-- Mike on 12/27/2015 2:43:37 AM with a score of 0
minimalistic, compelling, and heartbreaking. three of my favorite things!
-- Will on 12/26/2015 5:35:58 PM with a score of 0
She romantic but what happens Nextel? After she brings him further into the woods?
-- Kiyom on 12/26/2015 7:31:36 AM with a score of 0
The romance was just right, the story warmed my heart even though the title says Snow, and you put a lot of emotion in just a short piece of effort. Good job!
However, I still have one teeny bit of criticism: it's just too short. The ending left me rather hanging. Could you please consider extending this story? Anyway, still a good job. 7/8
on 12/25/2015 5:36:33 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful Story, truly worth your time to walk through it once or twice
-- geovonni on 12/24/2015 1:22:44 PM with a score of 0
I wish the art class thing happened
-- Ryan on 12/22/2015 6:39:35 PM with a score of 0
Dang that went really profound and dark
-- Savanah on 12/22/2015 10:08:54 AM with a score of 0
It was so sad. Was not expecting that
-- Anonymous on 12/21/2015 4:44:04 PM with a score of 0
I really liked the writing. Made me want to play over and over.
-- Finnick on 12/20/2015 6:58:13 PM with a score of 0
OMG THE ENDING WAS AMAZING!!
-- Ximena on 12/19/2015 10:23:16 PM with a score of 0
This was amazing! it really pulled me in to the story until the very end. great job!
-- kales on 12/18/2015 11:34:20 AM with a score of 0
This is beautiful :)
-- Art on 12/18/2015 1:19:17 AM with a score of 0
I actually cried reading this????
-- Chelsea on 12/17/2015 8:18:03 PM with a score of 0
-- Anonymous on 12/14/2015 8:20:16 PM with a score of 0
Jeez, this was both fantastic and terrible. It was fantastic in that it was well-written, sweet, nice and gripping, but terrible in that it crushed my heart and soul. Fantastic work, though, absolutely amazing.
on 12/14/2015 11:47:15 AM with a score of 0
The way your story goes is amazing and unbelievable. We loved it with some friends :)
-- jacques carlito on 12/12/2015 5:19:51 PM with a score of 0
it was a great story...somehow i begun relating myself about the story :) your pretty good when it comes to story, even if im a girl i totes like the story. its not just because it has much effort, but it adds a heart ;) hope you do well till you manage to do advance :)
on 12/12/2015 1:40:52 AM with a score of 0
-- ccc on 12/11/2015 5:59:57 PM with a score of 0
-- Chief Keef on 12/11/2015 4:07:08 PM with a score of 0
meh.. love story
on 12/9/2015 11:33:14 AM with a score of 0
Short but sweet. This is an amazing story
on 12/8/2015 11:02:21 PM with a score of 0
Oh my god this is amazing!! I love the ending omg
-- Laraa on 12/3/2015 3:51:52 PM with a score of 0
It was good
-- good story on 11/30/2015 2:31:58 PM with a score of 0
Great story. Loved every bit!
on 11/29/2015 11:53:40 AM with a score of 0
sad but good
-- Ben on 11/23/2015 10:51:01 PM with a score of 0
meh, should've been longer
-- jenna on 11/22/2015 12:03:09 AM with a score of 0
I love it. It's just lovely.
on 11/21/2015 9:01:19 PM with a score of 0
Oh, it's so sweet!
-- OnePieceTreasure on 11/19/2015 10:32:55 PM with a score of 0
This is beautiful. There are certain things that make these swirling emotions that you can't describe. This is one. It's haunting and wonderfilled and moving. Arggghh, it's undescribable.
-- Natalie on 11/19/2015 6:07:32 PM with a score of 0
It was sad and short the 2 Ss
-- Isai on 11/18/2015 6:38:41 PM with a score of 0
This was sad. It reminds you of your first true love. And what you lose when it is gone. Most go on without it but some can't or won't
-- Bella on 11/18/2015 6:37:31 PM with a score of 0
it was good, but I'd like it longer with more choices.
-- luxy on 11/15/2015 1:21:52 PM with a score of 0
this was great very sad, very hard to understand, but I got much enjoyment from it.
-- zoe on 11/14/2015 7:33:30 PM with a score of 0
Make more alternate endings.
-- R on 11/12/2015 3:04:29 PM with a score of 0
This was simply beautiful. The ending honestly almost had me in tears. 8/8
on 11/8/2015 8:22:09 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this. So sweet and simple, very interesting the way it all plays out.
on 11/4/2015 11:42:42 AM with a score of 0
incredible, so many feelings, simple and beautiful, the snow melting in my mouth
-- Raf on 11/4/2015 6:28:28 AM with a score of 0
Made me sad the girl went missing and leaves the character missing her
-- randy on 10/31/2015 12:17:47 AM with a score of 0
Damn... Painful and loving.
on 10/29/2015 8:58:12 PM with a score of 0
This was so heartbreakingly good...please consider making plenty more!
-- Kels on 10/24/2015 11:09:35 PM with a score of 0
THIS BROKE MY HEART. DAMN. I HAD A CHILDHOOD FRIEND THAT LATER BECAME MY BOYFRIEND AND RECENTLY WE BROKE UP AND I HAVEN'T SEEN HIM IN A LITTLE OVER A MONTH, MAYBE THAT IS WHY I AM SO EMOTIONAL, BUT THIS REALLY TUGGED AT MY HEART. SHOWS A LESSON. APPRECIATE WHAT YOU HAVE BEFORE IT'S GONE, AND WHEN IT IS GONE, BE HAPPY THAT IT HAPPENED
-- Alyssa on 10/19/2015 3:11:01 PM with a score of 0
wow it made me cry i love it. it is beutiful and sweet im crying its sad to.
on 10/19/2015 12:37:15 PM with a score of 0
It was good, but for when I did it, I didn't like the ending.
on 10/17/2015 7:44:18 PM with a score of 0
The premise was really cute and romantic, but it would be so much better if we could have understand the main character and the love interest independently. It's understood that's it's a short story, but there's far too much emphasis on it being short.
on 10/16/2015 1:42:59 AM with a score of 0
Short and sweet, beautiful story
-- Georgia on 10/15/2015 11:48:38 PM with a score of 0
interesting and with good imagination perfect
-- Clucero on 10/15/2015 10:26:22 PM with a score of 0
THE FEELS OMG
-- Ramen on 10/13/2015 11:05:57 AM with a score of 0
I THOUGHT THIS WOULD HAVE A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- Hannah on 10/13/2015 9:17:17 AM with a score of 0
This is pretty awesome! I was saddened and heartwarmed by this.
-- Brax on 10/12/2015 1:07:09 PM with a score of 0
on 10/11/2015 6:19:50 PM with a score of 0
It's really peaceful at first, but then it gets inappropriate and depressing.
on 10/11/2015 10:52:51 AM with a score of 0
I think that it might have been a little strange and unusual, infact, i'd never thought something like this would be here...It was still very good and well thought out. Good job! Very good job!
on 10/10/2015 2:57:44 AM with a score of 0
Such a beautiful story ... I nearly cried . Extremely touching .
-- Dee on 10/7/2015 11:29:04 PM with a score of 0
Well...this was really quite inappropriate (and sad).
-- Kyle on 10/5/2015 5:45:44 PM with a score of 0
Oh the tears....why
-- Daniel on 9/30/2015 2:31:45 PM with a score of 0
Chillingly beautiful, poetically melancholy--perfect.
-- Sam on 9/30/2015 1:06:05 AM with a score of 0
Well It Was Good But Sad At The Same Time D:
-- Zoey on 9/29/2015 10:07:28 PM with a score of 0
so, so sad. oh my gosh, this story literally made me cry. it's beautiful, but so sad. lovely story.
-- olivia on 9/24/2015 8:59:10 PM with a score of 0
Truly a lovely story!
on 9/19/2015 8:07:37 PM with a score of 0
This inspired me. I wish there was more at the end...
-- Dark Snow on 9/19/2015 2:27:31 PM with a score of 0
It was a very good episode I loved it .
-- Kitty girl on 9/18/2015 3:34:18 AM with a score of 0
I cry every time...
on 9/17/2015 9:48:29 PM with a score of 0
-- Great read. on 9/17/2015 5:10:49 PM with a score of 0
From childhood to teen-age, I have to admit this is a beautiful tale of a young boy and a girl from their young age, chapters in memories.
-- So Adorable! on 9/17/2015 5:03:00 PM with a score of 0
If gold can be written with, this is a book made of diamonds with letters written in gold.
I hope I can make something as good as this someday.
on 9/16/2015 8:53:17 PM with a score of 0
This is written gold.
-- N. Z. K. on 9/15/2015 4:25:23 PM with a score of 0
-- omg on 9/14/2015 3:34:06 PM with a score of 0
It was very poetic and nice, but I must say that I does have this general sad, gloomy feeling to it. Much like winter, I suppose.
If that was the intention, I congratulate the author.
-- Erika on 9/12/2015 10:33:28 PM with a score of 0
(T_T)it's so sad.(T_T)
on 9/9/2015 9:14:23 PM with a score of 0
Sweet, and lovely
-- Cass on 9/8/2015 7:01:14 PM with a score of 0
It's so sad but beautifull.
-- Nous on 9/6/2015 11:07:57 AM with a score of 0
Amazing. Thanks for the tear drawing experience. :')
-- Syren_McCloud on 8/29/2015 11:45:31 AM with a score of 0
Hmm Nice story
-- Joe on 8/26/2015 5:31:10 PM with a score of 0
Wait - actually, I think I just came up with a reason why she died.
So, you know the bully that was beating you up and then she saved you? Well, I bet he was the one who followed her off the bus. When they were far enough into the woods, he planned to kill her. He attacked, and she snapped his neck, and as he died he crawled or stumbled off somewhere into the bushes in one direction. Then, once the girl realized she had committed murder, she wandered off in the other direction, eventually froze to death, and was never found.
-- Ryder on 8/24/2015 9:59:45 PM with a score of 0
I seem to be the only one that's actually interested in why the "girl" didn't have a name, and how she died/got lost. I guess you're just supposed to refer to her as "the girl" through the entire story to maybe make it seem more poetic or something.
I nearly drove myself insane trying to figure out how she died. I replayed it about seven times trying to get a secret ending that could possibly reveal more. It would be nice if you added in something like that or at least provided a link telling how she died.
Towards the end I actually shed a few tears. That's rare, because I hardly ever get that emotional about that sort of thing. Congratulations on that.
-- Ryder on 8/24/2015 9:44:28 PM with a score of 0
Im speechless. This is wonderful. I love the short and simple way the story goes. It was my first story, and well I love it.
on 8/23/2015 8:13:20 AM with a score of 0
-- Peter on 8/23/2015 6:45:48 AM with a score of 0
Totally didn't almost cry at work
on 8/19/2015 1:42:21 PM with a score of 0
This is amazing! It is so sweet!
-- Livgg on 8/18/2015 3:53:14 PM with a score of 0
quite short but the way it was put together was amazing, it set the tone very well and I felt sad at the end
-- bob on 8/17/2015 6:43:09 PM with a score of 0
Its a great story, but id be nice to have a happy ending once in awhile
-- Matt on 8/16/2015 6:30:29 AM with a score of 0
SOOOOO GOOOD but i wish she didnt have to die i wanted them to get married and live happily ever after
-- Leonna on 8/16/2015 4:10:49 AM with a score of 0
^u^ that was cute but then it got sad
7/8 applauds to you
-- Kitty on 8/16/2015 1:23:14 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful...She died... That almost made me cry...well almost cried.
-- EchoVoice on 8/15/2015 8:40:46 PM with a score of 0
It's a good choose your own adventure, but I find it quite sad as well.
-- Olivia on 8/15/2015 6:11:11 AM with a score of 0
Very good. Glad I stopped to read it
-- Solo on 8/15/2015 2:35:21 AM with a score of 0
It was beautiful, however I cannot stop my tears!
-- Jasmyne on 8/13/2015 11:54:33 AM with a score of 0
That was really cool and worth the effort- I thought she was going to kill him in the end lol
-- zara on 8/10/2015 10:22:15 PM with a score of 0
on 8/10/2015 11:02:10 AM with a score of 0
I can not put into words how amazing this is, the only thing I regret is that I was unable to see the "Shining Armor" part, but I will keep playing until I do.
on 8/7/2015 12:03:52 PM with a score of 0
so sad but so good
-- reese on 8/7/2015 1:22:29 AM with a score of 0
It was entertaining but too short--I wanted more! I'm going to play again to see what else could have happened!
-- user1 on 8/6/2015 2:44:28 PM with a score of 0
Wow! This has to be one of the best Story games that it didn't take an hour to complete! I like the style of writing that you have going on in this one. I would give this 10/10 pineapples(Pineapples are my rating system_
on 8/6/2015 12:20:16 PM with a score of 0
I loved this! It's been years since i've had the opportunity to "choose my own adventure", and this coincidentally was my first choice in over 15 years?? magically written.
-- Lauren C on 8/5/2015 11:03:04 AM with a score of 0
This was so moving, and so sweet.
-- Cindy on 8/4/2015 7:58:47 PM with a score of 0
It brought tears in my eyes. Very sad ending but great story :')
-- Pakistani on 7/30/2015 8:54:25 AM with a score of 0
Thanks! Our family enjoyed reading it together :)
-- The van Eedens on 7/30/2015 2:51:56 AM with a score of 0
that was awesome
on 7/29/2015 11:31:55 PM with a score of 0
on 7/28/2015 6:41:34 AM with a score of 0
Thats sad ;_;
-- Billy on 7/26/2015 9:53:09 PM with a score of 0
this was beautiful. a touching read. thank you for sharing, please keep on writing!
-- shannon on 7/24/2015 4:28:59 AM with a score of 0
this is the first Story of yours that i have commented on but I have loved every one even the high school romance
Good job and keep writing!
-- Charlieboy on 7/23/2015 6:38:06 PM with a score of 0
-- JEX_CC on 7/20/2015 5:39:08 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful and Depressing. I both love you and hate you for this, but it's almost like bittersweet dark chocolate. I used to hate it too, but it grew on me. Like this story, actually. Well done.
-- John on 7/16/2015 3:38:58 PM with a score of 0
It really touched me and i feel sad now its a really nice story tough
-- Tim on 7/12/2015 5:47:17 PM with a score of 0
I don't think I have any words that have not already been written about this piece. I would claim it to be beautiful, but it is so much more than that. It is very much alive, and breathing. It held me close to the last word, and I thank you for this.
It expresses a love that I only hope to have one day. A fairy story filled with heartache, it is perfect. I would offer to pay for a story of my own like this, but the price would be too grand. I could never afford something of this value, and maybe if I could it would exist meaningless.
-- Hannah on 7/12/2015 12:45:02 AM with a score of 0
It makes me cry every time.
on 7/11/2015 8:59:53 PM with a score of 0
As cold as the title :D
on 7/10/2015 2:10:46 AM with a score of 0
This was very potent. A lot of games struggle to convey anything meaningful into short sentences, but you executed this perfectly. Wonderful job.
on 7/7/2015 2:06:41 PM with a score of 0
It was so sad but so good, it made me feel something, thats how good it was.
-- Alexa on 7/6/2015 3:15:04 PM with a score of 0
It was cute... and sad :')
-- Oscar on 7/6/2015 12:02:08 AM with a score of 0
omg its so good but so emotionl i died at the end
-- leah on 7/4/2015 7:24:31 AM with a score of 0
I admit, I didn't really care to play this, but when I saw that she had died, I was like, "Bu- really. Such sadness, much failure. :(" Beautiful short story, I will keep replaying it until I get a good ending w/out her dying...?
-- Kid on 7/3/2015 4:11:37 AM with a score of 0
Very good, hard not to cry and also hard to do again, Very cathartic
-- Amanda on 6/30/2015 1:02:54 PM with a score of 0
sad, but beautiful
-- sky on 6/27/2015 8:12:34 PM with a score of 0
That was really cool, and I literally almost cried! I would love it if you made more!
on 6/25/2015 3:41:36 PM with a score of 0
I like the story. Good for boredom.
-- sea shell on 6/25/2015 3:23:22 AM with a score of 0
I loved this. It was sad, yet a really great story
on 6/21/2015 5:39:28 PM with a score of 0
so sad but good at the same time, pls make more
-- baron on 6/17/2015 9:17:42 AM with a score of 0
This was really sad, but I liked it. I should've brought a box of tissues x3
on 6/16/2015 11:09:01 PM with a score of 0
This was really cool I liked it a lot!
-- Maddie on 6/16/2015 10:57:22 PM with a score of 0
that was a good game
on 6/16/2015 6:34:58 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good but it could be a little longer
on 6/8/2015 12:23:45 PM with a score of 0
Poor, poor guy...
-- Link on 6/8/2015 7:40:18 AM with a score of 0
This was an amazing game. I liked the ending of the story.
on 6/3/2015 9:42:41 AM with a score of 0
Ow. My feels.
-- Potato on 6/3/2015 4:41:27 AM with a score of 0
Well that was an emotional roller coaster. A strange way to start on such a website, to say the least. Even so, invigorating and powerful!
-- Crackers on 5/31/2015 11:01:01 PM with a score of 0
Felt it was way to short with not enough deviations from the same ending. And with an ending like that, it definitely needed more buildup.
-- Tom on 5/29/2015 12:07:58 AM with a score of 0
not bad, but I don't really swallow the pulling open the shirt part.
-- Not a bad story by any stretch on 5/28/2015 3:30:40 PM with a score of 0
Too shot and sad
-- Hwon Yong on 5/26/2015 8:59:32 PM with a score of 0
Very... enjoyable :)
-- Haily on 5/26/2015 10:32:36 AM with a score of 0
It was very sad, but very good. A series of flashbacks is always nice. But why are all of em so saaaaad :'[
-- John *sob* Smithy on 5/25/2015 4:34:15 AM with a score of 0
I suppose I am a bit of an odd and selfish soul, but I chose all these paths that actually don't imply love much at all, so at the endgame it didn't connect very well. I chose that way because as much as I wish it were that simple, my world isn't a heteronormative one. So it's not your fault, but mine, that I didn't particularly enjoy your piece. It was thought-provoking, however.
-- Lily on 5/22/2015 11:15:28 PM with a score of 0
Sweet mother of all that is good this was so beautiful and simplistic
on 5/22/2015 10:18:25 AM with a score of 0
This was a amazing powerful story
on 5/22/2015 10:18:04 AM with a score of 0
-- Tom on 5/18/2015 9:46:58 PM with a score of 0
-- Kevin on 5/18/2015 10:25:47 AM with a score of 0
*sobbing* So beautifully written with the short, but yet simple sentences... Simply Beautiful.
on 5/17/2015 11:55:41 PM with a score of 0
Maybe it was just the sleep deprivation, but this moved me.. Hauntingly beautiful. I went through it multiple times and would again.
-- Étienne on 5/17/2015 11:24:26 PM with a score of 0
its a bit too short for me, not enough romance and a little too pornographic. very well written though. i liked it.
on 5/17/2015 12:56:56 PM with a score of 0
That was depressing.
-- 10/90000 on 5/16/2015 3:55:52 AM with a score of 0
Breath-taking. Perfectly written.
-- claudia on 5/15/2015 1:05:29 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, I don't know what I did wrong (I got the ending where she dies/is murdered/commits suicide?). Probably because there was no story orientation. Yeah, ok, childhood - she's faster, better, stronger, some kind of nice girl (cliche, yes) however there nothing more really. Not to mention the ending I got, like, omg you messed up once now she be dead?! I'm a girl and find this offending, very, and on the off chance that you're a girl too than I urge you to re-read your story and look at it with "fresh eyes". You were obviously planning for them to be "such close friends" and as soon as one stepped out of line the other got "scared that their friendship would be no more" or something along those lines. Then decided to take a shortcut for no obvious reason and BAM! you should have known BETTER based on nothing at all... <-- constructive criticism from FRESH eyes~
-- NotTelling on 5/10/2015 6:23:34 AM with a score of 0
on 5/9/2015 6:08:39 PM with a score of 0
-- Appananda on 5/9/2015 1:40:24 PM with a score of 0
i had fun doing this. i am going to do more. i think more people should do these. they are more fun than they seem.
-- makayla horton on 5/8/2015 1:06:48 PM with a score of 0
Just too good.
-- Kennedy, D. on 5/8/2015 9:42:22 AM with a score of 0
Great work, I really enjoyed it.
-- Maria on 5/8/2015 3:41:32 AM with a score of 0
Even though it's short, my heart is touched.....
on 5/8/2015 1:44:42 AM with a score of 0
It's more of a story for you to explore than a game, but when you look at it as a story, it's great!
on 5/7/2015 5:15:18 PM with a score of 0
Just wow! Despite the short sentences it felt captivating and that ending... Nothing short of a masterpiece! Good job!
on 5/6/2015 7:22:41 AM with a score of 0
Wow. This story.....Just...wow. It went deep in my soul and cleansed it. Just...wow...
-- Savanna on 5/3/2015 10:06:41 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the best games on here, I love the story but could you put a pic. on "art class prt.2 other than that I love it! :)
-- Icestar on 5/3/2015 12:32:01 PM with a score of 0
So beautiful... Damn it all ;-;
on 4/30/2015 3:27:22 PM with a score of 0
-- on 4/29/2015 2:22:17 PM with a score of 0
I really liked it, well written but only complaint is its too short! great job
on 4/29/2015 1:44:32 PM with a score of 0
Amazing story!! I love the mysterious ending!!!
on 4/28/2015 8:58:17 AM with a score of 0
on 4/28/2015 8:45:00 AM with a score of 0
I was a young man before this poem, lost in the great emptiness in the world. This poem transformed into the man I am today. Chuck Norris would cry at this poem. An angel would loose their wings at the mere mention of this masterpiece. Death is mainstream #money
on 4/27/2015 7:58:25 PM with a score of 0
This is a great story! I love it!
on 4/26/2015 6:53:38 PM with a score of 0
Sweet, beautiful, and yet a simple concept. Kudos to the author. Continue making vibrant and descriptive stories. This deserves and Oscar!
-- Book Reviewer on 4/25/2015 11:20:27 PM with a score of 0
Can I get an explanation for the man's skeleton in the forest?
on 4/25/2015 2:28:57 AM with a score of 0
This story was heartfelt and probably the best love story on the site. 6/8
on 4/24/2015 7:41:11 AM with a score of 0
Well, aside from looking at memories and chasing a ghost, you don't really do much
on 4/23/2015 4:09:45 PM with a score of 0
-- noneyobusiness on 4/23/2015 11:45:20 AM with a score of 0
I felt really connected to the female character, almost as if i really did know her. Doing this is little memories made me feel as if i really experienced this. It was great and now i actually feel as if i am missing her. Only the best of writing really does that lol. Good work.
-- takogreece on 4/22/2015 10:17:14 PM with a score of 0
its horrifying in the best way.
-- person on 4/22/2015 6:45:35 PM with a score of 0
It was a meaningful, detailed story to read.
on 4/22/2015 1:31:33 PM with a score of 0
its very sad i am still crying it is because i told her i would always save her but she died and i didn't save her i feel really bad no wonder it is called snow.
on 4/20/2015 12:50:49 AM with a score of 0
Very sad, and heartwarming. my favorite parts were when he said he will be her prince in armor and when she "poses" for him. :)
on 4/19/2015 6:44:34 PM with a score of 0
What happened to her?
-- Lilly on 4/19/2015 12:17:59 PM with a score of 0
The end was very sad, such a good story. Flawless, just flawless.
on 4/18/2015 9:07:14 PM with a score of 0
wow this is amazing I love it, the well just WOW
on 4/18/2015 12:15:51 PM with a score of 0
Amazing! It's like a work of art!
-- Enai on 4/18/2015 7:00:04 AM with a score of 0
great easy story with so many feels!
on 4/17/2015 8:48:15 PM with a score of 0
that was just sad and creepy but it had a good plot and the writing was magnificent I do not think I saw any typos.
on 4/17/2015 12:51:02 PM with a score of 0
I like art class pt 2
-- Spine tingling on 4/15/2015 12:12:10 PM with a score of 0
Wow. I've been trying out the top rated games, and this one DEFINITELY deserves that title!
on 4/15/2015 8:41:19 AM with a score of 0
Really lovely. The simplicity of the language lends itself beautifully to the story.
-- thewho on 4/15/2015 12:33:50 AM with a score of 0
I didn't want to be sad...
on 4/13/2015 12:58:44 PM with a score of 0
Sweet and simple. This was my first story on this site, and I absolutely love it. I'd definitely recommend it.
-- Violet on 4/11/2015 10:36:19 PM with a score of 0
Poetic. Lovely, fitting writing. Bittersweet. Could possibly have been a little longer... Although it's more like a slowly emerging piece of art than a CYOA storygame. 7/8
on 4/11/2015 9:59:20 PM with a score of 0
Not a very in depth game. No in depth interaction that truely made me care for the characters. Could have been much better if it had more detail
-- Victoria on 4/11/2015 3:44:43 PM with a score of 0
It's so sad and i loved it!Mostly when they took their love to another level.First,they sexed it out.Then,he died just to be with her.But i still wonder,how did she die?
-- Cole Sprouse on 4/11/2015 3:31:13 AM with a score of 0
It was so touching, it almost made me cry...
on 4/10/2015 4:23:46 PM with a score of 0
It was so touching I loved it
-- Jack on 4/10/2015 1:46:13 AM with a score of 0
at a lost for words
on 4/9/2015 9:42:41 AM with a score of 0
-- Neartd on 4/8/2015 11:29:07 PM with a score of 0
That was nice. Very atmospheric. Often with these kinds of stories you find it tends to be very full of itself, very up it's own arse. Not so, here. You've done this in such a way that it feels very real, like something that could easily happen in real life. But at the same time, it has an undeniable fairy-tale tone and mood. Overall, it's beautiful and heartbreaking.
-- Amadán Dubh on 4/7/2015 10:29:49 AM with a score of 0
I haven't done these in a litttle bit, I love this story, 8/8
-- Ginger on 4/6/2015 2:18:04 PM with a score of 0
this was kind of sad but i loved it very much
on 4/6/2015 1:38:29 PM with a score of 0
heart wrenching in its beautiful simplicity. I got teary eyed at the end. thank you.
-- j on 4/5/2015 9:38:02 PM with a score of 0
Close to tears
-- anonymous on 4/4/2015 8:04:40 PM with a score of 0
This was a very emotional story.I think it is well written and
Describes how people can have strong bonds together.
-- jelly on 4/3/2015 5:57:07 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story. This has given me a little bit of an idea for the introduction of my storygame. Without this story, I wouldn't be writing my current story. This is absolutely outstanding. 8/8
on 4/3/2015 3:18:48 PM with a score of 0
it was fun realy alot of fun
-- spikydoo on 4/1/2015 12:10:04 AM with a score of 0
on 3/31/2015 9:17:48 PM with a score of 0
This made my heart hurt. Wonderfully written.
-- Jasmine on 3/30/2015 7:50:28 PM with a score of 0
She is cruel and manipulative. She deserved to have died.
-- Irresponsible on 3/29/2015 8:01:43 PM with a score of 0
A beautiful short tale of the story of two lovers. Easily a 9/10 in my book.
-- Alan Hawke on 3/29/2015 1:16:03 PM with a score of 0
I thought it was great, but REALLY REALLY SAD, which was probably the point anyway.
-- Anonymous on 3/29/2015 1:14:22 PM with a score of 0
I don't quite get what happened to the girl, but i loved it even though it was quite short.
on 3/29/2015 2:38:26 AM with a score of 0
that was a sad ending
on 3/28/2015 3:05:27 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful and haunting
-- Apoohneicie on 3/28/2015 4:40:09 AM with a score of 0
The story is brief, precise, and direct to the point. The only thing I notice are the choices in the beginning. It doesn't clearly states what those choices are. Only when I'm moving through the storyline have I found out that those are the boy's memories. Maybe you can define it next time. But all in all, a great story. Keep it up!
-- Jacob on 3/27/2015 9:12:50 PM with a score of 0
Ahh... I'm not a hopeless romantic, but this one realy plays with my nerves.
-- Ginger on 3/27/2015 12:10:56 PM with a score of 0
A powerful story of genuine love, this one really strikes the heart. It was an amazing and heartfelt story.
So far, i could say that this was one of greatest stories in this website.
on 3/25/2015 5:39:22 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this story.Great work and I hope you continue wrting stuff like this.
-- Mike on 3/22/2015 12:31:24 AM with a score of 0
Well, it was kind of short and not that many choices.
However, it was really touching
-- A on 3/21/2015 7:52:43 PM with a score of 0
-- Thunder star on 3/21/2015 3:58:45 PM with a score of 0
I loved this. it made me think
-- TeenPunk on 3/21/2015 2:16:05 PM with a score of 0
I don't know if I got the good ending but no matter what she dies...sad but entertaining for a good short read
on 3/18/2015 7:30:40 PM with a score of 0
I thought this was a great short read. Even with the short sentances and short story you quickly become attached to the characters.
-- Zeapo on 3/15/2015 8:12:27 AM with a score of 0
I loved it. I usually only like the violent ones, and not the romance, but if one of them dies, i suddenly like it, don't ask me why. I loved how you made it short and sweet. I have seen many stories that are written well but then stretch the story line by extending it too far. Don't get me wrong, i like a long story, in fact I kind of prefer it, but somehow you managed to gracefully fit a whole story into a short amount of time. I do think you should have made there be a series of options that could make her be found,alive. And also, you could make a short story about what happens to her, and THEN have a way for her to live. Other than that, great story.
on 3/14/2015 12:24:58 PM with a score of 0
spoke to my heart
-- Horny 15 year olds on 3/13/2015 6:52:16 PM with a score of 0
I am in tears. . . it was amazing
-- Bree on 3/12/2015 3:43:08 PM with a score of 0
This is soo sad but sweet it almost made me cry??????
-- Shrdha Lalwani on 3/9/2015 5:04:52 PM with a score of 0
That was so sad
on 3/8/2015 11:44:52 PM with a score of 0
Subtle, yet emotional. The tone and the ending reminds me of an anime called "Mushi-Shi".
-- Mr_Ipkiss on 3/7/2015 7:20:27 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story, the best story on the entire site on my opinion. 8/8
on 3/7/2015 12:32:34 PM with a score of 0
OH MY GOD THUS BROUGHT ME TO TEARS IN A MATTER OF A COUPLE CLICKS!!! I LOVED IT!!
-- LA on 3/7/2015 1:10:08 AM with a score of 0
This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. The melancholic feel that envelops the narrative empowers the tragic, yet peaceful end to their undying love.
-- David on 3/6/2015 7:20:07 AM with a score of 0
I was slightly biased against this story because I prefer my adventures to have at least some difficulty, but the way the story was set made me forget my initial apprehension. What I especially enjoyed from the story was the way it allows you to feel an emotional connection to the characters, even without a name or a face. Kudos for allowing each and every one of us to put our own emotional spin on this story. 8/8.
on 3/5/2015 1:27:10 PM with a score of 0
Depressing honestly. It started cute but really got depressing.
-- Sir Tacoman on 3/4/2015 9:25:48 AM with a score of 0
Dude u pulled my heart strings in ways I thought never could be pulled, really recommend very one to read this one
on 3/2/2015 8:32:35 AM with a score of 0
I love it
on 2/28/2015 3:42:16 PM with a score of 0
on 2/27/2015 1:03:51 AM with a score of 0
It's all very good, and has this little feeling of nostalgicism that doesn't get away from the lines. It's indeed a really good story, and deserves a good grade according to me, even if the end sounds like a kind of lose.
-- DarthSkarn on 2/26/2015 7:30:48 PM with a score of 0
why did she have to dissaper
on 2/26/2015 2:38:51 PM with a score of 0
It was really well written and I enjoyed it - this has given me inspiration for mine as we are doing this as a new topic in my computing class!
-- Gabrielle on 2/25/2015 5:29:25 AM with a score of 0
Wow it was really good sad though.
on 2/24/2015 12:14:32 PM with a score of 0
I really love this. I've read it like 7 times. The best choose your own story book I've read in a long time.
-- calebcreeper7 on 2/23/2015 8:35:16 AM with a score of 0
Brilliant and sad, my heart melted.
on 2/22/2015 4:46:43 AM with a score of 0
i grabbed her tits and she died. tits = trap.
-- kappadon on 2/22/2015 4:20:40 AM with a score of 0
No, it was so sad. A great same though, I loved it.
on 2/21/2015 10:35:54 PM with a score of 0
wow, that was amazingly touching and well-written.
-- A reader on 2/21/2015 8:01:22 PM with a score of 0
Good narrative, a bit short. I cant deal with the ending :/
-- Kiko on 2/21/2015 4:59:34 AM with a score of 0
I... I'm at a loss for words. This is a beautiful story.
on 2/20/2015 5:29:02 PM with a score of 0
on 2/18/2015 3:50:00 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, Better Than Reeses Cups should be eight. This is AWESOME!!! I adored it! So... Awesome! Just the right amount of lemon so that it isn't overpowering, but enough to taste. I love it!
on 2/18/2015 10:18:06 AM with a score of 0
That was awesome!!! You should make a deviant art lemon out of it!!
-- Lovedove on 2/17/2015 1:14:12 PM with a score of 0
It was WONDERFULL
on 2/17/2015 12:10:50 PM with a score of 0
Please make this a real-life book. I would read it for the rest of my life. Thank you for your splendid gift to CYS.
on 2/16/2015 12:12:19 PM with a score of 0
You're story touched me, reminding me of a sad time when I'd lost my boyfriend. It was amazing! :)
-- Aislinn on 2/15/2015 8:35:02 PM with a score of 0
I'm trying to fight back tears.
on 2/14/2015 1:48:26 PM with a score of 0
This is the first story i've read on this website, and it was beautiful. I'm usually not too much into romantic stories, but this made my heart ache. There is so much emotion, despite the simplicity. Very, very, very well done. I'd give this a 9/8 if I could.
-- S on 2/14/2015 6:53:36 AM with a score of 0
-- Anonymous on 2/12/2015 3:15:05 PM with a score of 0
This made me cry, I got a sad ending :( Really good though! :D
-- Kat on 2/9/2015 2:54:00 PM with a score of 0
A story that enthralls you.
-- Liam on 2/8/2015 8:38:26 PM with a score of 0
O', here come the feels.
-- Lucius on 2/8/2015 3:52:42 PM with a score of 0
I feel sad now.
-- Sean on 2/8/2015 3:05:25 PM with a score of 0
This story is inappropriate and sad!
-- Margaret on 2/6/2015 7:41:37 PM with a score of 0
it was ok
-- no on 2/6/2015 9:49:52 AM with a score of 0
hi author! yor the best
-- Tiffanie on 2/5/2015 5:04:46 PM with a score of 0
it was very lovely
-- amber on 2/5/2015 2:03:51 PM with a score of 0
Who wrote this? I love reading reading good stories and you did GREAT!
on 2/4/2015 2:32:20 PM with a score of 0
My god...The girl in this kind of reminds me of my first girlfriend. A lot actually. Mine probably would have been even more aggressive against the bully. The ending was pretty much the same too. There one day, gone the next.
My first and only love.
I feel like a teenage girl reading Twilight writing that but still.
8/8 for memory tears
-- JadeRaven on 2/3/2015 8:17:06 PM with a score of 0
wow. that was beautiful but really sad. Great job.
-- bilguun on 2/3/2015 8:55:04 AM with a score of 0
beautiful and haunting
-- xedity on 2/2/2015 7:12:37 PM with a score of 0
my god I CRIED
But this was very, very good! I loved it! I will surely try out your other games!
-- A. L. Lane on 2/2/2015 4:46:53 PM with a score of 0
This is the prose equivalent of poetry. And it is beautiful. You bastard.
on 2/2/2015 10:21:19 AM with a score of 0
Weird at first, but it gets better as you go.
-- Zak on 2/1/2015 7:26:07 PM with a score of 0
I love the young love vibe
on 1/30/2015 2:11:34 PM with a score of 0
-- MG on 1/29/2015 10:24:55 PM with a score of 0
That is so sweet.
on 1/28/2015 9:49:17 PM with a score of 0
Just 1 question. Did she somehow know she was going to disappear? I get the sinking feeling stuff and whatnot kind of stuff but did she plan to actually run away that day and is why in the last bit of the story she is acting that way?
-- CookieDoughBear on 1/27/2015 11:27:57 PM with a score of 0
that story!, that ending!, oh my god! perfect, congratulations for this beautiful piece of art using words
-- Eduardo Portugal on 1/27/2015 4:03:15 PM with a score of 0
wait what? i die in the woods?
-- voldemort on 1/26/2015 11:48:06 PM with a score of 0
A simple, but tenderly written, little tale that is equal parts beautiful and bittersweet. I love that you kept to just a few words, giving the viewer leave to take the initiative and use their imagination, while still giving enough description to paint a clear picture. The narrative is interesting -- laconic, but engaging. It would made a nice little film, this story would. Pure and straight: I loved it. Nice work! :)
on 1/25/2015 8:28:36 PM with a score of 0
-- azterior on 1/23/2015 9:47:07 PM with a score of 0
Very interesting pick your own story.
-- Mitchell on 1/20/2015 8:29:37 PM with a score of 0
This is an intriguing story, but sad, haunting even. If you're into sad or melancholy, then this is right up your alley!
on 1/20/2015 6:15:20 PM with a score of 0
This story is so romantic, sad and one of the best. A Must Read!
-- Christa on 1/20/2015 3:57:44 AM with a score of 0
I thought it was a intresting and well done story, the personal input really sell's it and makes you reflect on how many real life "Snow" stories there are
-- Lupus on 1/19/2015 10:23:38 AM with a score of 0
was this ur first cus it was ok for the first
-- Abby on 1/18/2015 10:06:33 AM with a score of 0
-- Paul on 1/17/2015 8:52:57 PM with a score of 0
-- katie on 1/16/2015 4:35:23 PM with a score of 0
touched boobs equals death.........
-- <3 on 1/16/2015 3:42:22 AM with a score of 0
It was very good, it did make me cry.
-- Eli on 1/13/2015 2:03:50 PM with a score of 0
Quite nice. This was actually the first addventure I've ever read besides a Choose Your Own Adventure book. I am thankful to have stumbled upon this site after seeing the phrase Interactive Fiction and seeing what search results that yielded. Behold! Thanks.
-- Mari Vega on 1/12/2015 11:38:49 PM with a score of 0
-- Kevin on 1/12/2015 12:51:51 PM with a score of 0
OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOUR STORY
-- Jennifer on 1/11/2015 6:11:41 PM with a score of 0
that took a strange turn half way through
-- Neb&Nad on 1/9/2015 6:25:43 AM with a score of 0
Just found this site at 2 AM. I loved this story. I was in his shoes, and I felt like it was me. This is really really good.
-- Jesse on 1/8/2015 2:31:49 AM with a score of 0
Great story! It was so beautiful!
-- Me on 1/7/2015 9:08:42 AM with a score of 0
Wonderful. I am not sure if I chose the right path though. I loved the girl. I wish she could've lasted longer. Keep writing.
-- Jovan on 1/6/2015 1:46:23 PM with a score of 0
on 1/4/2015 12:48:11 PM with a score of 0
Very beautiful but sad I enjoyed it a lot
on 1/2/2015 10:19:29 PM with a score of 0
That was really sad and at the same time in the end, creepy
-- Alana on 1/2/2015 9:30:28 PM with a score of 0
Such a sad story but well done.
-- Unknown on 1/2/2015 11:46:12 AM with a score of 0
on 12/29/2014 2:59:27 PM with a score of 0
This was really bad, and I don't hand out 2/8ths lightly
-- Julius on 12/28/2014 7:46:25 PM with a score of 0
yeah,i'm crying,god that was so beautiful
-- i am crying on 12/28/2014 7:34:01 PM with a score of 0
I loved it :D
on 12/26/2014 11:48:44 AM with a score of 0
It is so sad :(
-- Herpy on 12/23/2014 5:04:13 PM with a score of 0
loved it had me in tears at the end soo sentimental and real
-- chloe on 12/23/2014 1:33:37 PM with a score of 0
-- Negotiator on 12/22/2014 10:17:24 PM with a score of 0
It`s beautiful. Well done indeed.
on 12/22/2014 9:43:00 PM with a score of 0
So sad but so sweet. I loved it so much!
on 12/22/2014 12:32:33 PM with a score of 0
The story is nice and it's kind tragic.
-- Cloisterblack on 12/21/2014 12:29:03 AM with a score of 0
wow... just... this is amazing.
-- Anonymous on 12/18/2014 10:47:36 PM with a score of 0
I took it twice cause it was a beautiful story =)
-- DizzyWillow on 12/18/2014 1:09:21 AM with a score of 0
This is a great story. It is very touching. The memories are happy and sad, and they made me feel each emotion through the story. I really enjoy this one.
on 12/14/2014 1:23:54 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Despite my love for criticizing and talking, I'm currently speechless. A single tear was shed this day. This story shows how quickly something we love can just... Go away, and how far we'll go just to get it back. I'm sure everyone can relate. Im proud to have found this site a mere 4 minutes ago, and to have read this. Continue your amazing work, my friend.
-- Orion on 12/13/2014 11:59:22 PM with a score of 0
Touching. Sentimental. Nostalgic.
on 12/13/2014 4:32:43 PM with a score of 0
I didn't expect that ending.Concise but really beautiful. I wish I could be loved like that
-- c may on 12/9/2014 11:13:41 AM with a score of 0
i love the story it was awesome
-- denise on 12/8/2014 7:19:58 PM with a score of 0
This was a great story! I loved it so much! Please oh please make another one! This was simply amazing! Remarkable and alluring, this story game is fantastic for readers and guests! Just make more!
on 12/7/2014 10:33:14 AM with a score of 0
i thought i did something wrong, i replayed it and when the same result came up im just like, im done with this XD nice story tho
-- Silvia on 12/6/2014 9:34:51 PM with a score of 0
You should make a story like this again, but with a happy ending. That would be great. I think everyone would cry at the end of this story. It's just great. T.Y.
-- JC on 12/4/2014 10:34:47 PM with a score of 0
This is beyond beautiful
on 12/4/2014 4:08:19 PM with a score of 0
a sad story that's amazing sweet i loved it
-- not important on 12/1/2014 10:05:00 PM with a score of 0
This is so beautiful and awesome! :3
-- Willow on 11/30/2014 1:13:07 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful. At the same time, it was terrifyingly depressing. I gave it an 8.
on 11/30/2014 4:38:11 AM with a score of 0
8/8 would play again :'(
on 11/28/2014 6:04:58 AM with a score of 0
THIS WAS THE BEST LOVE STORY EVERY!!!!!!!! ITS NOT TO GRAPHIC NOT TO SEXUAL ITS PERFECT!!!!!!!!! MAKE MOREEE!!!!!!!!!
-- Ni on 11/27/2014 12:23:04 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely amazing. So simple, yet so beautiful... just like fresh snow
on 11/26/2014 10:22:18 PM with a score of 0
Whoa! This was amazing. The sad ending totally killed me... This was absolutely magnificent, all the shortness and coldness. Make more like this, please. ??
-- StarScience on 11/26/2014 4:18:26 PM with a score of 0
This was such a great story, even though it was sad that she died,it was the perfect climax of the story. *goes to corner & cries*
-- Sebastian L. on 11/24/2014 11:39:33 AM with a score of 0
its so sad. why she die????
-- pedro on 11/24/2014 11:37:07 AM with a score of 0
no real choice
-- new guy on 11/24/2014 1:29:48 AM with a score of 0
WAAAAHHAHAHHHHHH!! WHHHYYYY!?!? WWHWYYYY!?!?! *cries in the corner*
-- xXGrimmyXx on 11/22/2014 8:25:47 PM with a score of 0
it was so touching and sad at the end of the story, you should give this a try. wow so sad at the end of the story.
on 11/22/2014 12:23:39 AM with a score of 0
I don't want to kiss her cuz COOTIES (JK I'm Gay)
-- Jack on 11/21/2014 2:01:36 PM with a score of 0
I love all the choose your own ending books! All the times I read them I basically can't put them down!
Great books and also... GREAT JOB!!!
-- Erica Kicker on 11/20/2014 4:45:50 PM with a score of 0
So sad... :-( why oh why???
on 11/20/2014 12:17:25 AM with a score of 0
Too bad it's too short
on 11/18/2014 8:29:28 AM with a score of 0
Excellent... I don't show emotion often... but damn.
on 11/17/2014 5:35:44 PM with a score of 0
I enjoy love stories. I thought I would play this at work to pass the time and it almost had me in tears. I can't help but wonder if there are any other endings.
-- webailey95 on 11/17/2014 12:38:52 PM with a score of 0
I don't cry, I just discharge some tears once in a while....
on 11/14/2014 12:13:02 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful writing; the use of snow and the general progression of the story merge to make a seamless tale, presenting a series of memories or events in quick succession is one of the things that story-games are good for, in a novel (for some reason Dicken's A Christmas Carol comes to mind) the writing is necessarily much slower which can make the reader lose interest but with story games this style combined with good writing holds our attention throughout. You nailed it.
on 11/11/2014 11:26:38 PM with a score of 0
This was extremely good, so good it made my head explode :)
-- Ninjaxxsniper on 11/10/2014 7:52:35 PM with a score of 0
So sad, heart-wrenching. Beautifully written, surreal and honest. I adored this story.
-- Vi on 11/10/2014 3:01:07 AM with a score of 0
I loved it
-- karina on 11/10/2014 12:22:49 AM with a score of 0
dont worry, i usually rate everything like this, it was good.
-- Naommi Smith on 11/9/2014 9:17:50 AM with a score of 0
Wow, breathtaking and haunting. How did you even come up with this?
on 11/8/2014 3:54:31 AM with a score of 0
AWWWWWW. So sad.... I'm not sure of the entire premise though. How did she die? And did she kill the man? Or was it something else? Possibly the same thing that killed her? I understand the point though: He loved her, she loved him, she goes missing and dies in the snow, he meets her ghost, she can't be with him anymore, he cries, The End. So sad..... LOVED IT SO MUCH! It was so sweet and sad and ohhhhhh, so... I can't describe how I feel right now. I want to smile at the sweetness yet I also want to cry at the sadness. I think my heart is breaking... Nice Job! Brilliant work, buddy! :)
-- PurplePhoenixFTW on 11/7/2014 1:14:17 PM with a score of 0
It wasn't amazing, but I still liked it
-- Sdugukdfzubkfzdubkzdd on 11/5/2014 1:32:19 PM with a score of 0
So sad but so good!
-- Sparrowpool on 11/3/2014 8:21:07 AM with a score of 0
Just a little bit depressing, but otherwise very good!
-- Cantica on 11/2/2014 12:13:42 PM with a score of 0
Very well written. It is a beauitifully haunting game that really made me question my choices and struggle to understand what decisions to make next. Very well done.
on 10/29/2014 3:53:21 PM with a score of 0
on 10/28/2014 1:30:36 PM with a score of 0
A beautiful tragedy. As good as a real author would write it!
-- Flamepelt on 10/25/2014 9:31:28 AM with a score of 0
ya-ya-ya... I'm Lorde. Cool story.
-- Lorde on 10/23/2014 10:11:26 AM with a score of 0
So sad. I love how you don't have to many words on each slide.
on 10/22/2014 4:40:34 PM with a score of 0
-- Tannistha on 10/22/2014 6:38:04 AM with a score of 0
my first time making a story like is but my heart melted when i read it
-- Faith on 10/17/2014 6:26:12 PM with a score of 0
Perfect! I love how its just... How do i explain it? Extraordinary! Romantic!
on 10/17/2014 2:09:45 AM with a score of 0
Wait... did that Willow Tree thing end with him screwing her?
on 10/15/2014 1:21:23 PM with a score of 0
It's such a beautiful story, I'm glad I got to play it as I enjoyed it a lot.
on 10/13/2014 11:25:59 AM with a score of 0
I LOVE IT PLZ MAKE MORE
on 10/11/2014 1:51:18 PM with a score of 0
It was okay, but not special or anything. You just choose what happens in the memory. It's a bit short though. I give it an 4.
on 10/11/2014 1:47:07 PM with a score of 0
really interstrng story, very sad at the end.
-- gabi on 10/5/2014 7:25:01 PM with a score of 0
It was as boring as hell
-- CJ on 10/4/2014 6:57:23 PM with a score of 0
It brings a smile to your face, and it's not a waste of time. But it doesn't do much more.
-- Patrik on 10/4/2014 1:58:11 PM with a score of 0
Really good simple but amazing good for a quick read.
-- asj on 9/29/2014 12:55:35 PM with a score of 0
I really loved the feel this thing had. It's not something that you could replicate very well with traditional print. Very unique.
-- Anonymous on 9/27/2014 3:43:46 PM with a score of 0
-- alex on 9/27/2014 1:03:49 AM with a score of 0
so good, i cried.
i am crying right now.
-- Anna on 9/26/2014 6:48:21 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful, and had a nostalgic feel to the whole thing. It was a pretty linear game, however, and your choices wont affect the storyline too much. I would still recommend it though, because the storyline is very beautiful.
-- Jess on 9/21/2014 6:01:01 PM with a score of 0
-- Bacon on 9/21/2014 12:52:19 PM with a score of 0
Loved it. Simple but engrossing.
-- Will on 9/21/2014 6:53:04 AM with a score of 0
IT was a really weal written, but so so so so so sad!!!
on 9/19/2014 5:58:56 PM with a score of 0
Its such a good story, I love it.
on 9/16/2014 9:22:56 PM with a score of 0
*Tries not to cry* *Gets on the ground in a fetal position* *Cries a lot*
on 9/13/2014 10:46:41 PM with a score of 0
-- jfyj on 9/12/2014 2:30:18 PM with a score of 0
I wish I could leave a more intelligent comment. The writing style is unique and potent. The ending is moving even though I didn't read it very carefully. This author wrote a masterpiece.
on 9/11/2014 3:33:45 PM with a score of 0
Ah, bravo to you sir.
Just. . . .bravo, very well done.
on 9/9/2014 7:56:28 PM with a score of 0
So sad.... And yet so beautiful. I wish she wouldnt die...
-- Icestar of Mistclan on 9/8/2014 10:19:06 PM with a score of 0
Simple, beautiful, and heartbreaking. I don't know how you did it but you managed to instantly set the mood and attach us to the characters. One of the best pieces I've seen on this site, yet also one of the shortest. A brilliant example of how vivid and powerful well written words can be.
on 9/3/2014 7:53:14 AM with a score of 0
So beautifully sad. Well, very well done!
-- Michael on 9/2/2014 3:09:08 PM with a score of 0
wow. That's all i have to say. Just wow. Amazing story. Keep it up man.
-- kiljaz on 9/2/2014 7:36:50 AM with a score of 0
Hey, this has to be one of the best pieces I've have had the pleasure of reading on this site. I have a thing you tragic romances, and this... this hits the spot.
I hope you keep writing, because I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
-- TBFL on 8/30/2014 5:23:10 PM with a score of 0
Really good. Was hoping for the love story to last a little longer, but it's fine anyway. Flawless writing!
-- Adam on 8/25/2014 7:13:01 PM with a score of 0
Some what morbid at the end but a fantastic story. Very touching good job.
-- Zander on 8/25/2014 11:07:37 AM with a score of 0
It was good but I got too sad and had to stop.
-- Shania on 8/24/2014 12:19:16 AM with a score of 0
This was a bittersweet, poignant story... I am glad that I was able to experience his memories of her and as short as they were, I felt like I experienced something worthwhile. This story accurately portrays love and loss and it is definitely something I would recommend. It was far from time consuming, but gives me something to think about.
on 8/23/2014 11:14:52 PM with a score of 0
The story is proof that one does not need overly elaborate prose or plots to be compelling. All it needs is a bit of humanity. And at that, this is a story that will grab you by the heart and never let you go. Beautiful.
-- Brendan on 8/23/2014 8:20:55 PM with a score of 0
A beautiful and heartfelt piece... The short and sweet memories were beautifully executed, I could see each scene in front of me. This is an amazing piece.
-- Lynn on 8/22/2014 6:56:23 PM with a score of 0
Great story. I find it very hard to get attached to characters in stories but I honestly felt attached to both in this story.
-- Archangel on 8/18/2014 11:22:43 PM with a score of 0
This story was amazing. It really touched me. I felt like I had watched their whole life, like a close friend. So, (spoiler alert), when the girl went missing, it packed a pretty hard punch. The author has really outdone him/herself!
-- Emma on 8/17/2014 9:57:24 AM with a score of 0
So sad and sweet :D
-- Meep on 8/16/2014 12:42:21 PM with a score of 0
Its beautiful.Now that i have played it twice its more sad.Now the melencholy is kicking in.Now whenever i look at the snow,I have a new perspective. Now i know that snow isn't just well snow! I feel like anyone can fall in love :'D
-- Coolcat123tiger AJ on 8/16/2014 9:37:54 AM with a score of 0
This is just... awesome. I cried a little.
on 8/15/2014 10:34:25 PM with a score of 0
Just to be clear- TFIOS was published in 2012, and this was published in 2007. If you liked them both, I'm glad, but don't say my story was inspired by that one :)
on 8/15/2014 10:58:03 AM with a score of 0
Wow. This is a TFIOS offspring! I loved it :)
on 8/15/2014 9:46:32 AM with a score of 0
That was so sad, I wanted to cry.
-- Britany on 8/13/2014 11:39:57 AM with a score of 0
Short and sweet. The short, fragmented snippets of memories give this story a melancholic feel. Very nicely done.
on 8/12/2014 10:05:04 PM with a score of 0
I'm a girl and t got weird at one moment o3o ehh i went on with it ~ coolcat123tiger AJ (animal jam)
-- Coolcat123tiger AJ on 8/12/2014 3:48:32 PM with a score of 0
This is so cool. I'm new to this site and this is the first one I've read. I'm now addicted, thank you very much.
-- Anna on 8/10/2014 11:07:33 PM with a score of 0
U went too far.. U didn't have to make feel so sad this is gonna stick with me for a while.. Amazing story though
-- Keiko on 8/7/2014 1:49:19 AM with a score of 0
Absolutely heart-wrenchingly beautiful.I loved it.
-- Soularis on 8/3/2014 2:54:12 AM with a score of 0
Words cannot begin to describe how this made me feel. It was absolutely fantastic. I only wish it had been longer.
-- Hameranth on 8/2/2014 1:38:59 AM with a score of 0
Hit me right in the feels.
on 7/31/2014 3:06:21 PM with a score of 0
Short, sweet, and flawless.
on 7/28/2014 8:11:37 PM with a score of 0
I love this so much.
-- Joshua on 7/26/2014 11:51:39 PM with a score of 0
Read it w/ a partner and we cried.
-- Sir Hunter Douglas III on 7/26/2014 1:29:46 AM with a score of 0
I just wish it was a little longer, also love how you made me want to keep reading so qiuickly.
-- Marc on 7/23/2014 11:55:08 PM with a score of 0
Goosebumps > this shit
-- Bryan Perkins on 7/23/2014 9:19:34 PM with a score of 0
Simply beautiful, really touches the heart. First love, first loss nothing else like it.
-- Awesome on 7/22/2014 3:48:27 PM with a score of 0
Wow...why would the guy run over to the girl and unbotton her shirt and touch her breasts
on 7/19/2014 5:31:01 AM with a score of 0
This was both, lovely and heart breaking.
-- Ozzy on 7/19/2014 1:25:58 AM with a score of 0
ITS SO SAD!But i love it!
-- CheetahPelt on 7/17/2014 8:56:12 PM with a score of 0
Meh. I remember this was my very first Choose Your own Story that I read actually a looong time ago. Between that looong time period, I actually vist this site a couple more times, replaying this story. Thanks seth. You have made a timeless legend.
-- Fazz on 7/14/2014 12:48:32 AM with a score of 0
What is wrong with you?!! The feels hit me super hard, dude! That was amazingly sad, I loved it.
-- Johann on 7/11/2014 6:41:18 PM with a score of 0
Not too hard to complete, which was sweet.
-- Brainz on 7/11/2014 5:28:52 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Absolutely magnificent.
-- Bexxie on 7/10/2014 7:47:06 AM with a score of 0
It was touching.
-- Adam on 7/9/2014 7:12:18 PM with a score of 0
Very short, but yet somehow still manages to strike a chord.
on 7/9/2014 4:24:58 PM with a score of 0
Amazing work! i've played this like 5 time now
on 7/7/2014 7:37:10 PM with a score of 0
nice just a little tweeking k but is really good
-- Ria on 7/5/2014 12:08:48 PM with a score of 0
~I just stand there stunned~
on 7/4/2014 6:06:59 PM with a score of 0
I agree with Rex. I'd give this a 7/8.
-- Hai on 7/3/2014 11:17:22 AM with a score of 0
Good, but sad.
-- CaptainRex5101 on 7/3/2014 11:14:16 AM with a score of 0
hey it was good but sad
-- cara on 7/2/2014 8:57:33 PM with a score of 0
This game is great! I've seen many games like this and this is by far one of the best! The only thing is I feel there should be more options in the story. But this is truly amazing!
-- Sophie on 6/30/2014 3:18:49 PM with a score of 0
Very touching. I liked it.
on 6/29/2014 8:41:18 PM with a score of 0
-- Cole on 6/29/2014 7:59:02 PM with a score of 0
It's really good. Made me cry, but really good.
-- Danni on 6/27/2014 12:58:38 PM with a score of 0
I loved it.
-- required on 6/25/2014 8:20:43 PM with a score of 0
it was ok but i didn't really understand it
-- Pebble on 6/25/2014 2:05:58 PM with a score of 0
It was beutiful it was sad to i loved it!
-- The Girl's Best Freind(not rel on 6/25/2014 12:03:51 PM with a score of 0
So sad. I really liked it! I don't usually go in for romance stories but this was very good. The writing caught me off guard with it's simplicity and poetry. Well done!
on 6/23/2014 2:43:01 PM with a score of 0
Having recently lost someone I loved very much, this story was very touching and nearly brought me to tears. Excellent work.
-- A. Taylor on 6/22/2014 10:06:18 PM with a score of 0
-- Misty on 6/15/2014 2:34:24 AM with a score of 0
I can't stop crying. So brilliant.
on 6/13/2014 4:14:43 AM with a score of 0
Very sweet and moving. I feel that it could have been a bit longer and more detailed, but still very good. Sort of feels like the decisions you make don't impact the story as much as they could, however they do make some differences. 7/8
on 6/12/2014 10:03:49 PM with a score of 0
on 6/12/2014 8:38:12 PM with a score of 0
it was sad but good
-- ripplestone on 6/8/2014 4:20:54 PM with a score of 0
Wow, this was really emotional and it gripped me up and swallowed me whole. I enjoyed it, thank you.
-- Celena on 6/7/2014 8:55:36 PM with a score of 0
Is there only one way for it to end? A very sad love story.
-- Reagan on 6/5/2014 2:11:39 PM with a score of 0
I loved the story and the writing was very intriguing! It was really sad though. My ending anyway. It would make a great book! :) keep writing!
-- Jordan on 6/4/2014 7:22:07 PM with a score of 0
-- Caity Berney on 6/3/2014 12:58:37 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful. I loved it so much. I don't know what to say.
-- Viv on 6/1/2014 10:02:02 AM with a score of 0
The ending was sad, but the game was alsome!
on 5/30/2014 6:53:17 PM with a score of 0
its so sad i acutely almost cried and i don't cry
-- steve on 5/29/2014 3:41:50 PM with a score of 0
Wow, that was so..emotional. It was amazingly written and ...just so emotional.
on 5/27/2014 12:17:55 PM with a score of 0
ehm, this story touched my heart. This was a really, really good story about love and loss...
-- Jacob on 5/27/2014 7:28:03 AM with a score of 0
This is my first story I've read like this, so I have nothing to compare it to. I enjoyed this short story. I will definitely read more. Glad I stumbled across this site. I wonder if I start over, make different choices, will the ending change. .. hmmm. One way to find out! Thank you for writing this. My first read.
-- karebear on 5/24/2014 2:45:39 PM with a score of 0
-- Ben on 5/24/2014 8:20:05 AM with a score of 0
Good and not to long
on 5/23/2014 5:16:47 PM with a score of 0
A very, very lovely story. A bit short, though.
-- Will on 5/18/2014 7:30:00 PM with a score of 0
At first I thought the story was divided up too vaguely, but I really started to like the tone when I got used to the "memory" style narrative. It was very beautiful.
on 5/18/2014 11:07:07 AM with a score of 0
Even though short, it was still a good story to be told. Itself is the embodiment of a good story of love and loss.
on 5/17/2014 7:56:06 PM with a score of 0
Great... probably the best... Such a sad and lovely ending but very fun to play with too. the options were good and I loved each and every short sentences!!! :)
-- soohaeng on 5/17/2014 1:59:12 PM with a score of 0
It was sad but had a happy feeling at the end. I was glad he got to see her again. But what I don't get I'm the story is when the guy gets off the bus at the same time as her... Did she kill him??? Anyways it was really good I rate it 8 stars!!!!
-- Linda on 5/17/2014 12:10:55 PM with a score of 0
Sad, but the kind of sadness that shows us we're still human. Beautiful. I give it an 8/8.
on 5/16/2014 6:37:50 PM with a score of 0
A touching short story, I love how it has such simple flashbacks, yet it makes you think so much, and it's lovely.
-- Sarah on 5/16/2014 1:22:59 AM with a score of 0
The story was beautiful I personally loved it a lot. Thank you for the story.
-- Rachel on 5/12/2014 11:18:04 PM with a score of 0
Didn't read it but scripts were good
on 5/11/2014 5:51:59 AM with a score of 0
That was great. Make another ;)
on 4/26/2014 3:15:34 PM with a score of 0
Hmmmmm... I liked it.
-- Yaz on 4/25/2014 9:42:08 PM with a score of 0
i like story
-- poopy on 4/22/2014 9:07:54 AM with a score of 0
it's pretty meh but meh... better than homework 4/10 not 4/8
-- hitori no hito on 4/17/2014 10:55:03 PM with a score of 0
This is so amazing I would love to read another one.
-- Angel on 4/17/2014 10:01:49 PM with a score of 0
That was beautiful. Just...beautiful. I usually leave long winded and detailed comments, but that's all that really needs to be said.
-- TwiliTetra on 4/14/2014 9:13:28 PM with a score of 0
That was so poetic. You're an amazing story writer, I really enjoyed it.
-- DeepMisery on 4/14/2014 7:15:22 AM with a score of 0
played it again i felt it ended slightly better a love that never dies.
-- Tristan on 4/9/2014 1:39:45 PM with a score of 0
very sad and depressing but a love story nonetheless i loved it i might plan it a few more times and.......
-- Tristan on 4/9/2014 1:36:53 PM with a score of 0
I didn't want to fall in love. Stop trying to force me into a storyline that I never wanted to go down. It seems no matter what I can do I can't change the fate of this story.
-- Andrew on 4/7/2014 5:24:41 PM with a score of 0
A beautiful tale. Thanks for the experience.
-- David on 4/5/2014 9:23:40 PM with a score of 0
It was beautifully sad. I love it. Thank you for making it
-- James on 4/2/2014 8:12:46 PM with a score of 0
I recamend you change rating
-- 24freddy on 4/2/2014 7:34:06 PM with a score of 0
Oh my gosh, it was so sweet, sad and wonderful.
-- Sb on 3/30/2014 3:47:16 AM with a score of 0
The feel of the game is fantastic, somber and pensive, but lovely.
on 3/29/2014 4:04:37 PM with a score of 0
a bit short
-- R on 3/24/2014 11:19:37 AM with a score of 0
Umm... All I can say is wow. That was amazing. Honestly. It was P e r f e c t.
-- Justin on 3/21/2014 9:43:55 PM with a score of 0
I loved it.
-- Michelle on 3/19/2014 1:04:12 PM with a score of 0
Such a strong and beautiful story with such great romance, this is almost like twilight: new moon all over again.
-- MATTHEW on 3/14/2014 1:08:33 PM with a score of 0
really good but i think there could be way to be with her on the bus
-- rexiuss on 3/14/2014 8:45:43 AM with a score of 0
<3 loved this story, exceptional ending, thank you <3
-- Leonin Anais on 3/9/2014 8:30:20 PM with a score of 0
Very entertaining and very good story for something that short, but I highly enjoyed it and it didn't waste my time being as long is it had. Although, I would say you need a bit more of a game and not so much a story because it seemed like there was no way to die, just memories of your exiting memories to be seen within the whiteness of computer screen. Didn't waste my time though.
-- Stevem on 3/7/2014 10:30:44 PM with a score of 0
I cried a long time, the beautiful pattern in this story collides so well.
on 2/27/2014 1:55:39 PM with a score of 0
Very surprised with how good this was, as it is not the type of story I gravitate to. But it is so beautifully simple and heart wrenching. 8/8.
-- Adam on 2/25/2014 6:36:06 PM with a score of 0
Good, but probably just a little too short.
-- Martin on 2/25/2014 6:23:19 PM with a score of 0
I liked the way it was written in bits of memories. But why isn't her skeleton found with the man's since it does state that she dies there should be a reason her death is certain.
-- Lena on 2/23/2014 11:59:38 PM with a score of 0
very nice. a first look at online interactive fiction. I'm interested! Very nice writing. I was suspended in the spaces between choice
-- yaved on 2/22/2014 10:39:32 PM with a score of 0
Why would you write something like this?! *sobs* (I meant that as a good thing)
on 2/12/2014 3:12:19 PM with a score of 0
-- Jason on 2/12/2014 12:20:46 PM with a score of 0
very touching and artsy game. Was a good quick story.
on 2/12/2014 11:07:15 AM with a score of 0
this was really beautiful. Short but eloquent, and it brought a tear to my eye.
-- max on 2/10/2014 10:06:53 AM with a score of 0
Wow, now that was beautiful work indeed, I would have liked a little more.
on 2/10/2014 12:57:41 AM with a score of 0
The story was beautiful, well written, and leaves a big impact deep in my heart. The ending reminds me of a particular ending you can get in the game "Anna" see if you can guess which one ;)
on 2/7/2014 5:40:05 AM with a score of 0
How do you get the shining armor
-- fxl on 2/6/2014 9:56:01 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic story! I'm glad I decided to play it, even though it's sad.
-- Kit on 2/3/2014 8:44:10 PM with a score of 0
This was a pretty awesome choose your own adventure and it's the very first one I've played on this site! :D
-- Brady T. on 2/1/2014 2:10:16 PM with a score of 0
i loved it for my first game
on 1/31/2014 2:36:49 PM with a score of 0
-- collins on 1/30/2014 7:55:16 PM with a score of 0
It was sad, but I liked it.
-- Grace on 1/28/2014 4:24:21 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed playing this. Seeing their love story evolve was lovely, even with the sad ending.
on 1/27/2014 8:09:38 PM with a score of 0
This story was very short but it really effected me in a way I wish I had the words the explain. It was really wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this
on 1/27/2014 1:22:36 AM with a score of 0
Eeeeeeeeyyyyyyyy its pretty good.
Ended like a creepypasta.
-- Stekkmen on 1/19/2014 12:02:17 PM with a score of 0
Still shivering from the cold
-- shervin on 1/10/2014 7:52:10 AM with a score of 0
on 1/9/2014 9:13:46 PM with a score of 0
That is a beautyful Game, but very sad!
-- Sashaharp on 1/7/2014 5:09:36 PM with a score of 0
I love this. I've been searching for a good choose your path story for ages. I love the way in this one, that different things will always happen. I've played it so many times. It a pity she always dies though...
-- Cecelia on 1/5/2014 8:47:48 PM with a score of 0
This brought out intense emotions, brilliant.
-- Lwis on 1/3/2014 1:35:06 AM with a score of 0
It was a very nice game i enjoyed it very much thank you.
-- Jonathan on 1/2/2014 2:32:41 PM with a score of 0
on 1/1/2014 5:24:33 PM with a score of 0
The bittersweet scattered thoughts of a life that once was. This makes me think of the famous quote "Tis better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all"
on 12/28/2013 8:08:29 PM with a score of 0
-- Amazing on 12/27/2013 8:21:36 PM with a score of 0
It was great but I just can't find a better ending, is that really how it ends? She dies? I don't want that ending but overall it was great, the plot, story was quite good except that it's not really a story of choice if the ending can't be changed, right? If it does have some other ending please tell me.
-- ZhaenGharn on 12/23/2013 8:49:30 AM with a score of 0
Great! It's very powerful and emotional! I loved it and it was totally worth reading! Although I didn't like how you kept repeating the last part of the story each time adding up.
-- TheMeep on 12/17/2013 9:17:04 PM with a score of 0
That was amazing
-- Jake Morris on 12/10/2013 5:23:33 PM with a score of 0
on 12/8/2013 6:19:03 PM with a score of 0
Great for the first story-game I've done! :)
on 12/4/2013 12:29:52 AM with a score of 0
Wonderful short story... not very long, no, but has a wonderful atmosphere. Only problem: it is from a very standard point of view, as a female it was somewhat odd to read but still sweet. Thumbs up.
-- Rosalina on 11/30/2013 10:26:00 PM with a score of 0
on 11/30/2013 8:28:26 PM with a score of 0
A beautiful romantic tragedy
on 11/14/2013 2:03:45 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful, thank you.
-- Sojiin on 11/12/2013 1:08:07 AM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed this story I thing that he/she should write more story's
-- Tyler on 11/10/2013 12:03:46 AM with a score of 0
Im kind of annoyed because both times the girl died...
-- Yeah no? on 11/9/2013 11:01:30 PM with a score of 0
It was fine. Not enthralling but not too much like " I want suicide by spoon". Could be better. So keep making stories, else how could you make one that will entrap.
-- Annie on 11/9/2013 5:18:01 PM with a score of 0
Wow. What a story. I really felt the sadness and your descriptive imagery was great.
on 11/8/2013 9:30:47 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful. Magnificent. I just cannot put what I think of this story into a sentence itself. Very touching.
-- Untalented on 11/4/2013 11:42:06 PM with a score of 0
Sooooooooooooooooooooooo Sad Man Too sad
on 11/3/2013 1:37:20 AM with a score of 0
Gripping emotion. The movie played nicely in my mind.
-- Antonio on 11/3/2013 12:05:17 AM with a score of 0
That was sad. I liked it though. I'm going to see if I can get the night in shinning armor.
on 10/26/2013 11:39:58 PM with a score of 0
The ending was... Not what I was expecting. It was sad, beautiful and intense all at the same time. Spectacular story.
-- Wilson on 10/26/2013 3:35:42 AM with a score of 0
This story was beautiful, clever, and funny. But mostly beautiful. 8/8! Thanks for making it!
on 10/23/2013 4:49:20 PM with a score of 0
I don't get the endings. So if you let her take the lead in the relationship, she wants to be with you in death? And if you take the lead, she doesn't want to be with you? And if you just want to be friends, then you move on?
So is this story about a girl who only wants to be with a guy who lets her take the lead? I don't get it.
-- CYBERPUNKER on 10/22/2013 12:37:57 AM with a score of 0
WHY DO YOU HAVE TO KILL HER EVERY TIME TRYED SO HARD NOT TO KILL HER AND IT MAD ME MAD THET SHE DIED EVEERY TIME NO MADER WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
-- anonimus on 10/20/2013 3:02:53 PM with a score of 0
Very romantic. I like the way you made the story up of different memories.
on 10/18/2013 6:25:53 PM with a score of 0
Dude nice, I give you an 8 on that one. I got goosebumps at the end.
on 10/15/2013 7:45:52 PM with a score of 0
An enjoyable attempt at a Niel gayman style story, childhood romance and a little ghostly ending. the problem is the dialogue and events are so generic, I think the author expected their photos to do the work of description for them.
A little sweet in places, but really not enough of it to care much about the ending or indeed the romance, indeed I'm disturbed by the fact that the most described passage was the love making.
Okay I suppose, with a couple of nice individual scenes and moments, but I don't believe I found this half as engaging as many site visitors.
on 10/7/2013 4:57:29 PM with a score of 0
That was one of the most shatteringly beautiful things I've ever read.
on 10/1/2013 5:58:21 AM with a score of 0
A beautiful melodrama.
-- MnF on 9/29/2013 10:12:36 PM with a score of 0
I loved it. Even though i'm a girl, I thought it was cute. :)
-- Ivy on 9/28/2013 9:43:11 PM with a score of 0
i am sobbing
-- toby on 9/24/2013 12:54:58 PM with a score of 0
I would sue you for shattering my heart into a million little pieces except the story was... awe-spiring.
The sadness makes the game so beautiful, and as a fan fiction writer, I thank you for teaching me so much through a little game like this
-- BillDong on 9/23/2013 3:29:40 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful Story. Got both the happy and sad endings. Simply Magical.
on 9/22/2013 5:50:39 AM with a score of 0
on 9/17/2013 11:04:46 PM with a score of 0
I very much enjoyed your story. The development and layers were rich though the story was brief. It seems the lesson it has taught will continue on fully put to use. Thank you kindly for taking time to create this. Do not forsake your gift! Nurture that talent!
-- Samuel Brown on 9/17/2013 3:38:38 PM with a score of 0
Nice, a worthwhile read.
on 9/15/2013 8:00:07 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful short story. Sad as is, and linear, not really interactive. Still, very worthy of reading.
-- Sagaz on 9/12/2013 4:37:56 PM with a score of 0
Spectacular, nice ending about the boy following girl's lead.
-- Art on 9/6/2013 4:18:12 PM with a score of 0
So touching! Nothing can equal this! My god, I cried! And it takes quite a lot to make me cry! Sethaniel, you are amazing. This is so far the best game I have played in this website! :') 8/8
on 9/5/2013 12:21:08 PM with a score of 0
very well written, and smart use of the site's layout!
-- verynicework on 9/4/2013 5:31:26 AM with a score of 0
-- Sadness on 8/30/2013 4:01:04 AM with a score of 0
on 8/29/2013 11:36:45 PM with a score of 0
Can you win?
-- Dylan on 8/23/2013 7:22:11 PM with a score of 0
I just loved it it was so sweet and nice, wish someone made a sequel or even a VN
-- Ethan on 8/16/2013 11:43:02 PM with a score of 0
Tragically sad abs wonderful :( well written.
on 8/12/2013 3:45:36 PM with a score of 0
i loved it!
together in death and life. what an amazing story!!
I don't know what to say... Well Done!!
I wish to see more amazing work from you!!
-- lindsey on 8/12/2013 5:24:56 AM with a score of 0
I think I chose the wrong ending. I don't like sad endings. bummer!
-- angelgirl76 on 8/8/2013 2:36:41 PM with a score of 0
I don't think I can even find words to summon up how much I adore this story...
on 8/6/2013 3:11:38 PM with a score of 0
This is beautiful.
-- Ali on 8/3/2013 9:41:23 PM with a score of 0
So so so so sad
on 7/31/2013 8:14:29 PM with a score of 0
I really think you should make more love stories like snow maybe each one in a different time of year?
on 7/31/2013 11:08:07 AM with a score of 0
I can only uncover 1 ending through multiple runs however, the story is still sublime and touching.
on 7/29/2013 11:30:44 AM with a score of 0
It was sad, but good, I like how the memories change depending on the choices.
on 7/29/2013 12:25:55 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful ...but so sad...
-- Darrell on 7/26/2013 1:22:55 PM with a score of 0
Ok.... this was just... wow. I hate you and love you at the same time for making this, which means you did a good job :(
on 7/26/2013 11:44:40 AM with a score of 0
i thought this was going to be a sad story with a sad ending but the end was beautiful
on 7/24/2013 8:35:37 PM with a score of 0
It was so beautiful and thoughtful. This is one you need to play. I felt as though i was the boy and it was my life which made it all the better.
on 7/23/2013 8:31:01 PM with a score of 0
Loved it. I felt like i was the one telling the story. Even made me cry. It was a beautiful story.
-- BillyM on 7/23/2013 10:02:23 AM with a score of 0
Oh my goodness.. this is so sad. *wipes away a tear* This is proof you don't need thousands of words to give a story emotion. 8/8
on 7/21/2013 11:53:37 PM with a score of 0
good i like the story
-- bobkies on 7/16/2013 9:00:11 AM with a score of 0
Ok to try playing again and again;)
on 7/15/2013 5:12:36 AM with a score of 0
Now most of these stories are really fucked up but this one was really good. Like REALLY good
-- Alex on 7/14/2013 2:38:56 PM with a score of 0
-- strawhat on 7/14/2013 3:13:06 AM with a score of 0
Really short and weird ending
-- Ellen on 7/13/2013 3:30:20 AM with a score of 0
Wonderfully written, It felt so sad, I wish I knew what happened. How that man's body was found and what happened to her. Maybe I dont want to know. Wow! Nicely written indeed. I wonder if the ending differs in any way if I reply. Will try it!
-- RJman on 7/11/2013 1:40:10 PM with a score of 0
Heartbreaking. ...Heartbreaking and beautiful...
-- Lisa on 7/2/2013 12:43:02 PM with a score of 0
I just reread this, and it is the best story on the site. Succinct, powerful, passionate. Well written and both disturbing and elevating. Good, strong work.
on 7/1/2013 3:41:30 AM with a score of 0
UGH. It makes me want to CRY. STUPID DUMMY IS GONNA DIE IN THE SNOW WITH HIS DEAD GIRLFRIENDDDDD. DHDSIGDHDDJJFJF
-- ConflictingApple on 7/1/2013 2:38:37 AM with a score of 0
It was beautiful.
-- Gabrielle on 6/26/2013 12:34:46 AM with a score of 0
A poetic and Zen experience. This is the first story I've read on the site and it has inspired me to what could be possible with the medium.
on 6/25/2013 8:33:27 PM with a score of 0
Nice solid story. Good work.
-- dan on 6/24/2013 10:19:21 PM with a score of 0
This touched something deep inside me... I have yet to learn what it was.
-- Human on 6/20/2013 11:56:45 PM with a score of 0
This was the first story I read upon stumbling on ChooseYourStory. It remains my favorite. A hauntingly beautiful piece that I wish I could read for the first time again.
on 6/19/2013 8:44:40 AM with a score of 0
I can only smile. Both a sad and happy smile. A jealous smile.
on 6/16/2013 5:33:11 AM with a score of 0
It was sad, yet, it kept me reading. . .
-- Markle on 6/15/2013 5:52:17 PM with a score of 0
on 6/9/2013 11:09:06 PM with a score of 0
A nice game, could stand to be more fleshed out.
on 6/7/2013 4:10:06 PM with a score of 0
A short but amazing game, the effort put into this is just right. And the way you write down the emotions of the characters made my heart melt.
on 6/5/2013 2:37:50 PM with a score of 0
-- emmanuel delgado on 6/4/2013 1:40:27 PM with a score of 0
Short but memorable.
-- Sean on 6/3/2013 12:21:22 AM with a score of 0
-- ASSF on 6/1/2013 3:59:50 AM with a score of 0
That was powerful.
-- Michael on 5/27/2013 9:09:41 PM with a score of 0
Wow, that was great. Sad but really touching. Kinda makes you think of growing up and having a lost love. Maybe not the same way but the same emotional emptyness. Thank you for this.
on 5/26/2013 11:30:47 PM with a score of 0
-- Buddha on 5/21/2013 10:37:34 PM with a score of 0
This story is the best one on this site, by far. Love is so cliché, but this manages to deal with the topic in a thought-provoking and beautiful way. I feel so sad after playing this...especially after finding the 'true' ending.
on 5/21/2013 8:36:20 PM with a score of 0
Really sad ending. She died like Sirius (from Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix.)
on 5/20/2013 9:48:10 PM with a score of 0
-- Topoyozada on 5/15/2013 7:59:46 AM with a score of 0
I thought it was well written, and cute, just a little short :)
-- Ellie on 5/8/2013 5:53:02 PM with a score of 0
I'm impressed. I don't read much in the genre, but you had an impact in a very short time.
-- Androgeny on 5/8/2013 1:46:38 PM with a score of 0
OMG, why did i read this? worst book ever. Dont waste yer time readinh this garbage. Im an aspiring writer and this was embarassing.
-- J0ey Rock1t on 5/3/2013 2:59:09 PM with a score of 0
;.; So sad!!! I feel so sorry for them! I wish she ahdn't taken that shortcut...
on 5/2/2013 11:18:20 AM with a score of 0
this is a good game
-- nisha on 5/1/2013 12:06:51 PM with a score of 0
Touching in some parts literally but none the less satisfactory
-- TACOSQUIRREL66 on 4/30/2013 2:20:33 AM with a score of 0
thanks for the experience. i enjoyed it. ??
on 4/28/2013 7:24:18 PM with a score of 0
I like it, but I am very, very weary of love stories with sad endings.
-- Some Guy on 4/26/2013 3:30:18 AM with a score of 0
This was haunting, daring, and spiritual. I've only read through once so far, and found myself drawn on by the melancholy... With such a strong female character, I found myself hoping to be strong enough to be her equal! You meted out just enough mood and detail to draw us into the dark wood, like a will'o'wisp. Enchanting! Evocative! Complex! I'd like to read more from this writer. The structure was innovative!
on 4/23/2013 8:23:21 PM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful tale told in short, but interesting snippets. It is amazing for a player that only has a few minutes to spare and can't get involved in a long storygame.
on 4/23/2013 3:37:22 PM with a score of 0
omg im crying omg omg nooooooo! :(
-- caroline on 4/23/2013 12:54:10 PM with a score of 0
This is the first story I'm reading on this site and if they are all as good as this one, I'll be reading for a long time. Very sweet story.
-- Amythist7 on 4/23/2013 12:13:43 AM with a score of 0
it was good but I would expect a longer story
on 4/21/2013 1:07:03 AM with a score of 0
I felt this adventure is more of a sexy sad sweet adventure that leads you breathless and in the moment and if it doesnt than you have no soul ginger?
-- Coolio on 4/21/2013 12:31:38 AM with a score of 0
A wonderful story from the beginning to the end. I just love it.
-- Amy on 4/16/2013 3:43:24 PM with a score of 0
awwww i love this one
-- kayla on 4/14/2013 11:16:07 PM with a score of 0
loved it :)
-- kayla on 4/14/2013 10:39:34 PM with a score of 0
Pretty Good. A little vague though.
on 4/14/2013 8:55:34 PM with a score of 0
That was excellent. The ending was extrememely sad.
-- CathyAnne on 4/12/2013 3:46:06 PM with a score of 0
Beautifully written. I'm usually more of a fan of 'game-based' type CYOA things, but this was simple and haunting.
on 4/11/2013 4:43:29 PM with a score of 0
-- nelly on 4/11/2013 7:43:01 AM with a score of 0
Awwww why would you end it like that?! Still entertaining though.
-- Lualadu on 4/6/2013 7:48:00 PM with a score of 0
"Snow" was amazing i like how the choices you make as a child and young adult affect the game later. I hope to see more works such as these. Well done.
on 4/4/2013 4:45:09 PM with a score of 0
It's absolutely beautiful
-- Anonymous on 4/4/2013 3:36:54 AM with a score of 0
Its really good! I got the "I live in a city without snow" ending though.
Make something else like this!
-- Victoria on 4/1/2013 8:29:18 PM with a score of 0
This really moved me
-- Leah on 3/24/2013 5:03:14 PM with a score of 0
It's a rather good story line. I would read and play it again. Nice job. ;P
on 3/21/2013 1:05:02 AM with a score of 0
simply beautiful :)
-- Stara on 3/15/2013 7:43:33 AM with a score of 0
Really great. Even teared up a bit (:
-- D on 3/14/2013 9:51:12 PM with a score of 0
It was a lovely short story:)
-- Marissa on 3/14/2013 12:50:51 AM with a score of 0
Very concise and poignant. Could have been a bit longer - maybe one more stage of options between the two existing ones, to further characterize the girl - but most enjoyable all the same.
on 3/13/2013 9:06:00 AM with a score of 0
super just read it
-- jamie on 3/9/2013 5:52:49 PM with a score of 0
Very nice and sensitive game! I almost cryied! You should create another one!
-- Patrick on 3/9/2013 2:06:23 AM with a score of 0
good but weird ending
-- RR on 3/8/2013 2:47:03 AM with a score of 0
oh my GOD i cant believe she had to go missing and probably die and uhggg I WANTED THEM TO BE TOGETHER FOREVER
-- rose on 3/7/2013 9:30:41 AM with a score of 0
It was pretty good. Just know its not better than Survive the Zombies.
on 3/5/2013 7:27:48 PM with a score of 0
Depressing story, sure. I can honestly say though that the story was simply amazing. Leaves you with this feeling as if you just went through the relationship yourself.
on 3/4/2013 6:36:39 PM with a score of 0
it was kind of depressing... i wasnt really expecting a sad love story....
-- annie on 3/1/2013 11:23:11 PM with a score of 0
THIS IS VERY GOOD MATERIAL!
-- REY ANTHONY BORRA on 2/26/2013 3:19:28 AM with a score of 0
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-- kirk on 2/12/2013 1:26:00 PM with a score of 0
There was something whimsical and beautiful about this, even though it was rather simplistic on the surface. This is the first game I've played on this site, and it's giving me a good vibe for the whole site. :D
on 2/10/2013 3:00:13 PM with a score of 0
That was really sad...
on 2/10/2013 5:12:06 AM with a score of 0
This was a powerful story. It was incredibly sad when she died and the story had a great ending.
-- RandomWriterGuy on 2/5/2013 12:27:42 PM with a score of 0
Sad, but hauntingly and achingly beautiful! makes me wish that I had sight so I could have seen the graphics that go with the story. Wonderful!
-- Destra on 2/4/2013 1:17:32 AM with a score of 0
it was very sad.... i didnt like art class2
-- heyyyyy on 2/3/2013 1:38:16 AM with a score of 0
on 1/31/2013 11:13:27 AM with a score of 0
Thank you that hurt but in a good way
-- Jaan on 1/30/2013 6:09:39 PM with a score of 0
on 1/30/2013 2:14:42 PM with a score of 0
Very beautiful piece, the way the memory format and how the memories were connected made the story so realistic!
-- Mirage on 1/22/2013 10:49:50 AM with a score of 0
An overall surreal experience, not one I would mind revisiting.
-- Redthegamr on 1/21/2013 2:37:27 AM with a score of 0
This was my second game to play on this website. It's very moving the moments between you and the girl hooks you and then the described feelings afterwards is almost like you can feel what the character feels. Very sad and yet very beautiful
on 1/20/2013 6:42:13 PM with a score of 0
-- Strange...no, Sad man on 1/20/2013 9:46:30 AM with a score of 0
this game was pretty cool:)
-- Olivia on 1/19/2013 9:45:28 AM with a score of 0
A rather emotional tale.. a must take.
on 1/16/2013 11:32:18 AM with a score of 0
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-- Aly on 1/13/2013 2:06:28 AM with a score of 0
on 1/12/2013 3:46:17 PM with a score of 0
You need a warning somewhere that this is inappropriate for children.
-- person on 1/10/2013 3:51:20 PM with a score of 0
What a hauntingly beautiful story... wonderfully written, sad yet lovely. 8/8
on 1/10/2013 11:35:38 AM with a score of 0
I, I don't know what to say. I was touched.
on 1/1/2013 6:41:59 PM with a score of 0
This was beautiful :)
on 12/30/2012 10:22:33 PM with a score of 0
-- Sharon on 12/30/2012 2:09:54 AM with a score of 0
Saddest ending ever!
-- Xanderx on 12/29/2012 5:21:10 PM with a score of 0
Hi! I write sometimes a storry. I would like to be a writer after finishing study of conservatoire. It inspirating me to wrote one storry about empire of dreams and secrets. But, this storry is in My language, in Slovak.
This story is very great.
-- Marco Oros on 12/29/2012 3:02:13 PM with a score of 0
I just read this again after 2 years, and still love it. Really great story.
on 12/28/2012 6:18:24 AM with a score of 0
A very touching tale. The shortness of it just adds to the sadness and the feeling of loss. I also liked the idea of 'snow' and its links to the cold uncertainty (and possibly evil) of winter. Thanks, I really enjoyed this and I look forward to more of your stories. :)
on 12/28/2012 2:52:11 AM with a score of 0
started out quite well, but i kind of disliked the mystery part in the end
overall a really good game, though :)
-- Mister F on 12/26/2012 8:13:50 PM with a score of 0
This story was so well done, and well put together, that it rang real amotion from me. Very excellent job for such a shortstory!
-- MikeFont on 12/26/2012 4:27:12 AM with a score of 0
really beautiful and well written
i look forward to more of your stories
-- Nick on 12/24/2012 9:53:36 PM with a score of 0
-- Sen on 12/24/2012 9:35:35 PM with a score of 0
-- Madhu on 12/21/2012 1:07:39 PM with a score of 0
Wow. That story took a really dark and sharp turn, but that just makes it so much better!!
-- Bart on 12/2/2012 10:37:34 PM with a score of 0
It is a sad story.. It feels like it happened for real.
I've lost alot of people close to it. The longingn for them is very well described.. it is an emptyness...
-- Suti on 11/30/2012 6:05:59 PM with a score of 0
Deep man. Just deep.
-- alec on 11/28/2012 3:30:09 PM with a score of 0
It was beautiful and made me cry. I loved it.
on 11/27/2012 11:17:25 PM with a score of 0
Truly magnificent literature. I loved the imagery and rhythm.
-- Ian on 11/19/2012 11:43:56 PM with a score of 0
on 11/9/2012 12:31:58 AM with a score of 0
I never cry but this had me close to tears this is somewhat like my life a life long love destroyed by death and in colorado in the middle of winter no less. Please if you don't think you want to read this story read it it'll pull on your heart strings.
-- observer22 on 11/8/2012 10:04:53 AM with a score of 0
Do all the endings end in her death?
-- Tfree on 11/6/2012 10:56:25 AM with a score of 0
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-- Scott Todd on 11/3/2012 7:56:33 AM with a score of 0
This is my favorite story I've read on the site so far! ... It makes me sad! :(
on 11/2/2012 8:54:44 PM with a score of 0
Lovely to read. Sad ending :(
-- Sonja Hilpert on 10/29/2012 9:00:35 PM with a score of 0
Excellently written. Well done.
on 10/29/2012 12:33:24 AM with a score of 0
you would never think such a short story could suck you in the way this one does.
on 10/24/2012 9:58:55 PM with a score of 0
Wow. I cannot explain the ammount of emotion I am feeling right now. This piece of art is truely remarkable. I actually cared about the characters and what happened to them which is really rare. Thank you for this extraordinary story, I hope more games on this site will continue to show as much potential as this one has.
on 10/24/2012 4:58:04 AM with a score of 0
Verry good made me feel a little sad
-- cat on 10/21/2012 8:32:04 PM with a score of 0
This was excellent! The short sentences really leaves some time for the reader to ponder every word and detail. I think you should really consider writing poems or stories. I really love this, its very lovely!
-- Echo Ann Bleu on 10/17/2012 10:25:58 PM with a score of 0
on 10/5/2012 12:01:54 PM with a score of 0
One of the most touching games I have ever played.
-- Marcus Edholm on 10/3/2012 10:42:20 PM with a score of 0
very beautiful and sad story.
-- owen on 10/2/2012 2:37:44 PM with a score of 0
Great :). I'd like to see your code for the entire story it looked amazing to me.
on 9/30/2012 3:51:49 PM with a score of 0
A really good story!
-- kantuno on 9/30/2012 9:06:49 AM with a score of 0
I enjoy the passion, a love gone not of hate or such but gone. A true love story to the bone, and does not leave a tinge of hate or outrage when it comes to a close.
-- Harris on 9/27/2012 8:27:21 PM with a score of 0
This was a great Story actchully
i liked it
on 9/25/2012 7:30:24 PM with a score of 0
even for a girl this game was epic
-- nikki on 9/15/2012 3:09:54 PM with a score of 0
;( i crying
-- devon on 9/14/2012 9:06:25 PM with a score of 0
on 9/11/2012 12:27:21 AM with a score of 0
I loved this so much... It wasn't much of a choose your own adventure, but I'm a sucker for tragic romance nonetheless.
-- Cjoll4 on 9/4/2012 12:40:12 AM with a score of 0
OMG its so sad :( I nearly cried... Poor guy in the story...
-- Skylar on 9/3/2012 11:09:05 AM with a score of 0
Great poetic story, I love how you learn the story through little pieces.
-- Teresa on 9/3/2012 1:32:45 AM with a score of 0
-- Gustav on 9/1/2012 11:09:15 PM with a score of 0
Its is a really awesome game. A heart breaker. Imma play again.
-- Kerry on 9/1/2012 1:28:35 PM with a score of 0
really nice and sweet.
-- mm on 9/1/2012 5:53:25 AM with a score of 0
Wow! please create a sequel
on 8/28/2012 10:09:59 AM with a score of 0
-- Ben0 on 8/18/2012 3:47:32 PM with a score of 0
d'awwww! So sad! He died to be with her, how sweet! I really enjoyed this, it was so cute.^_^ I just wish it were longer...with more memories. Great job!
on 8/15/2012 3:19:48 AM with a score of 0
A beautiful story! Very sad, very romantic. Also short but not too short so if you only have a few minutes this is perfect!
-- Shawn on 8/12/2012 10:47:56 AM with a score of 0
Very nice... Sad :(
on 8/4/2012 8:10:53 PM with a score of 0
NOOO my love :'(
on 7/30/2012 11:41:55 PM with a score of 0
This is my first choose-a-adventure, and I really loved it. It was heartfelt and crazy, and really told the love story really well. I like how you could relive each memory, and the decisions you made in the last phase would affect the next era. I just wish there were more eras, like growing old together and stuff. But I guess the point of the story is that she got lost, which was tragic. I gasped inside myself when she got taken. I guess that's what real stories do, affect you right here. *points to heart*
-- Benny on 7/30/2012 5:17:05 PM with a score of 0
It was alright, kinda boring.
-- Courtney on 7/27/2012 2:48:07 AM with a score of 0
I love it.
-- Codii on 7/22/2012 4:10:26 PM with a score of 0
warning this game is very depressing and sad at the end it made me feel really sad when I finished the game
-- luv this game on 7/21/2012 5:57:56 PM with a score of 0
-- Gina on 7/20/2012 7:13:12 PM with a score of 0
Very nice, a bit sad, cute, time well spent.
-- Rating on 7/10/2012 11:32:50 PM with a score of 0
Simple, satisfying. . .I liked it. I felt like I had room to breath, let my feelings grasp the language of what I was reading, and consume the story with my heart and not my eyes.
-- ThatGirl on 7/7/2012 4:00:11 AM with a score of 0
While it seemed to be a bit short and linear, the story was quite touching and fulfilling.
on 7/3/2012 5:57:49 AM with a score of 0
Only problem was that Art Class was never like that with me... Good that!
on 6/27/2012 1:09:24 PM with a score of 0
on 6/25/2012 11:26:48 PM with a score of 0
amazing. i wish there was more...
-- clare on 6/24/2012 10:28:34 PM with a score of 0
Touching story, good writing
on 6/20/2012 11:35:13 AM with a score of 0
It was excellent in the beginning, but then everything just became confusing. Bad ending, lack of plot, and brief explanations made me give this a three out of eight.
-- Alia12321 on 6/19/2012 4:09:51 AM with a score of 0
i loved it! :D
-- Aaron on 6/18/2012 2:57:29 AM with a score of 0
So far I've only tried one possible path and I've already reading this story to one completion. Thank you for writing this. I did not like the ending though, not because it was not well written but simply because I was hoping for the couple to get to be together longer while still alive.
-- KGG on 6/4/2012 1:37:09 AM with a score of 0
You've provided a deep connection to your character without adding volumes of details. This is an amazing story and certainly one of my favorites.
on 6/2/2012 7:59:19 PM with a score of 0
Usually when I tick the "it will bring enlightenment box" and I don't do it often, I mean it is really really good but this time, it did. This story was beautifully written, romantic and touching.
on 6/2/2012 3:58:39 AM with a score of 0
Your game is amazing. Text isn't paragraphs to read, yet the connection to the story is strong. Thanks for making this!
-- Anonymous on 5/29/2012 4:11:30 PM with a score of 0
it should have u look for her or let one of the choseis save her
-- oilking on 5/26/2012 1:08:52 AM with a score of 0
-- K on 5/24/2012 12:17:38 AM with a score of 0
wow keep making more like this
-- pheng on 5/23/2012 1:26:07 AM with a score of 0
That's got to be the deepest story, of any type, in any format, that ive ever read. I'm a teen and I read a lot if that matters. I love this! 9/8
-- Princessfrickinbride on 5/16/2012 9:59:09 PM with a score of 0
It leaves me curious about what would have happened had I taken another path.
on 5/8/2012 2:43:07 PM with a score of 0
Sad....Awesome Approves! 8/8!
on 5/5/2012 8:03:09 PM with a score of 0
Well written! I can't wait to go back and make different choices.
-- Ian on 5/4/2012 11:29:51 AM with a score of 0
I know this was meant to be sad for all those people who have had their heart broken, and honestly it wasn't that bad of a game, but I felt it to be a little over dramatic. For one, I don't even really know what happened to the girl. Secondly, a lot of stuff could have been avoided had someone of authority(whether it be parents, teachers, police officers, etc.) just sat down and talked with the kids. Finally, it just felt dramatic for dramatic sake. In reality, I doubt a lot of kids go through this and if they do I mostly think it's just so that people can feel sorry for them or so that they an get attention.
I'm not trying to bash your story, I just feel that a lot of people here are just trying to feel sorry for themselves with this game.
But, it was good nonetheless. Nice amount of options, choices that actually influenced the ending, and a good plot. I can see why this game is fea
on 5/4/2012 9:21:38 AM with a score of 0
-- BRO on 4/29/2012 9:37:37 PM with a score of 0
-- Dean on 4/29/2012 2:07:38 PM with a score of 0
Thank you so much. I enjoyed the beautiful melancholy of this game. The short sentences hit me like a gust of winter wind. The sad ending reminds me of how winter looks to someone inside a warm house waiting for spring. I enjoyed this very much.
-- Ariel on 4/28/2012 2:39:36 AM with a score of 0
*Sniffs* That was such a bittersweet story <3. I really feel bad for the poor boy. It was a beautiful story though :)
-- Angelie on 4/22/2012 8:06:16 PM with a score of 0
Very pretty. Great story.
-- Michelle on 4/20/2012 1:44:54 PM with a score of 0
Just don't play this. It's for your own good
on 4/19/2012 11:11:23 PM with a score of 0
Truly, I don't know why this is in the Top 5 Newbie Stories. I can think of a thousand different ways to cover a romance story with literally no gaming elements in it. That's all this is. A short, adequately well-written story which gives you no choice in the ways of play.
I think I'm going to write a story like this, but way better, and see what happens. Be back in a half hour.
on 4/19/2012 10:23:01 PM with a score of 0
That was so sad...it made me cry!! Go ahead...read it...see how you feel
-- SMILEYFACE on 4/19/2012 8:42:55 PM with a score of 0
Don't like romance
on 4/14/2012 2:39:04 PM with a score of 0
Wow, that was incredibly emotional. I'm stunned, I've never encountered a story so beautiful on the internet. I hope you keep writing like this.
-- drkgmr333 on 4/12/2012 5:50:30 PM with a score of 0
Is there any happy ending? That's horrible
-- kjkjh on 4/11/2012 10:58:35 PM with a score of 0
art class pt. 2 is gross, there's no good options
-- dkfj on 4/11/2012 10:54:44 PM with a score of 0
pretty good, though dying sucks
-- Kai on 3/21/2012 3:40:36 AM with a score of 0
Loved it sad somewhat short but very good and sad
-- steve on 3/16/2012 12:03:41 AM with a score of 0
Aw, I love this bittersweet story. I've ran through it several times, and its always more beautiful than the last. Is there anyway you can make, like, an opt sequel where they are reunited or reincarnated (if but for a time)? Ahh, it was so good- I don't want to be over ..
on 3/6/2012 1:35:27 AM with a score of 0
it was ok but not very thrilling..
-- addi on 2/27/2012 9:22:33 PM with a score of 0
You made us feel as she was our best friend and then... bam.. I almost cried! Amazing
-- WhiteAxe on 2/26/2012 12:28:18 PM with a score of 0
:) Except in my case she died! :( Other than that it was really good
-- Leah on 2/26/2012 12:26:41 PM with a score of 0
A sad a beautiful story.
-- Alexis on 2/24/2012 10:39:42 PM with a score of 0
Such a good game. Very touching. Loved it. :)
-- Armorath on 2/20/2012 1:37:32 AM with a score of 0
-- jj on 2/11/2012 8:45:35 AM with a score of 0
-- zeke86198 on 2/8/2012 9:17:54 PM with a score of 0
-No comment from me.
-No comment from me either.
-My favorite story!!
-- WritingClub on 2/8/2012 6:01:17 PM with a score of 0
Real Haunting. Well Written, and filled with nostalgia and passion.
on 2/8/2012 2:21:24 AM with a score of 0
it's a good one for beginners.
on 2/5/2012 3:19:14 PM with a score of 0
Gave me chills.
on 1/31/2012 10:18:24 PM with a score of 0
-- magcos on 1/27/2012 4:23:55 PM with a score of 0
Really sad, who was the guy that followed her and why did he? How come he died too? Why was she so sad???? So many more questions!!!
-- HHS on 1/21/2012 9:16:20 PM with a score of 0
SO SAD! but amazing <3
on 1/20/2012 11:56:35 PM with a score of 0
WHY CAN'T I HOLD ALL THESE TEARS?
on 1/15/2012 4:33:26 PM with a score of 0
-- Person on 1/14/2012 7:01:30 PM with a score of 0
lovely touch of every page
-- z on 1/13/2012 12:01:14 PM with a score of 0
I loved this gave so much I played it twice and I love how you get a totally different ending if you make different choices during childhood and you even get different options for memories. Great job!
on 1/7/2012 7:03:12 AM with a score of 0
-- UNKNOWN on 1/2/2012 12:39:06 PM with a score of 0
It was devestating and so beautiful. I feltthe snow
-- Kay on 12/16/2011 1:46:05 PM with a score of 0
It was a beautiful story, but it was so sad! T^T I loved it.
-- Mia Cooper on 12/13/2011 12:17:39 PM with a score of 0
-- tess on 12/12/2011 8:20:19 PM with a score of 0
This, is actually a deccent love story that brought up a couple emotions. Well made!
on 12/11/2011 4:58:20 PM with a score of 0
It was good. Sad but good. Just the thing I was looking to read, I'll make sure to check out anything else you've written.
-- John Mountain Lion McLean on 12/6/2011 4:10:26 PM with a score of 0
I hate to run with the rest of the crowd and say this was a sad story and that it got to me, but it was a great story that didn't need much in the way of physical description to gets its beautiful point across.
on 12/5/2011 10:06:01 PM with a score of 0
i thank this is really good and really sweet, im not usually all emotional but this got to me.
-- Amber on 11/24/2011 11:03:32 PM with a score of 0
I loved the story. It was so beautiful and inspiring I almost cried. Kudos.
-- Daniel on 11/19/2011 4:01:13 PM with a score of 0
Most of the story made me smile, and made my heart warm, but the ending was really sad. It's a "choose your own adventure" kind of story, so there should be some way to get to a different, happier ending.
-- Kiki on 11/9/2011 1:29:50 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful little haiku-style vignettes.
-- Cursory on 10/23/2011 10:33:05 AM with a score of 0
Beautiful story. It is so sad.
on 10/18/2011 10:42:56 AM with a score of 0
on 10/10/2011 1:06:10 PM with a score of 0
I got the ending when I have sex with her, She gets killed but I get with her at the end of it.
-- Maryritai on 10/7/2011 5:13:16 PM with a score of 0
This is very beautifully written. Loved it.
-- AC on 10/6/2011 10:19:55 PM with a score of 0
this is an incredible story. i almost cried after reading it when i finished it my first time. i ended where the hero is crying after she gives him a touch to his face.great story/ very sad at the end but great
-- silverwolf on 10/2/2011 12:54:50 AM with a score of 0
loved it. So sad :'-)
-- Nick Scott on 9/26/2011 7:03:59 AM with a score of 0
so sad!!! I want to know more,what's happened with her
-- Watsana on 9/26/2011 2:14:26 AM with a score of 0
I thought this was such a good story, or choose your own adventure! It's really sad the girl died though...or if she lives, I haven't found that out yet.
-- Lilly on 9/25/2011 3:46:26 AM with a score of 0
I associated the one of my feeling in my heart that I miss my somebody by the ending of story . I feel that the story had been developing with lyric. I like this kind of story which can be reminded some memories.
-- keiichi on 9/25/2011 1:55:29 AM with a score of 0
um, i want to know what has happened to the girl.i like the suspense at the end but would still like an ending. but other than that it was ok:/
-- heather higglebotom on 9/14/2011 10:19:36 AM with a score of 0
WHAAAAAA? YOU KILLED HER OFF? Dude, make a revised edition where she gets found and they get married or something...
That was depressing...
-- A guy named Stan(ovich) on 9/5/2011 1:26:31 PM with a score of 0
-- sil on 9/4/2011 1:01:19 PM with a score of 0
-- Max on 9/2/2011 3:24:41 PM with a score of 0
it was cute and sad! a perfect story for a love storygame. but i wish you could change the last part just to make it happier.
on 9/2/2011 6:58:38 AM with a score of 0
I have already play this about 10 times, and I cry every time... I just love the ending. Sad, but impowering and full of love =D
Good job! I want to see more stories from you!!!
-- Kayy on 8/27/2011 2:34:17 PM with a score of 0
the best game i've ever played...
on 8/26/2011 9:55:50 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the best stories on here! I can't believe it affects me the way it does... It's sad, yet still happy... It's hard to describe. You need to make another story!
on 8/26/2011 12:18:08 AM with a score of 0
Is it possibly longer? Maybe a version of how he tries to find the killer. This actually made me tear up a little. It's AMAZING, it reminds me of my favorite author, Robert Jordan. But please do make more of "Snow"
-- Audie on 8/18/2011 6:05:37 AM with a score of 0
Needs to be longer and choices to have more impact. Otger than that, this was fantastic although the plot is rather generic. It was worth the read.
on 8/17/2011 10:04:45 AM with a score of 0
Work of art, ive read this multiple times and everytime it has the same effect on me.
on 8/9/2011 3:33:36 AM with a score of 0
Snow is such a great scenery for touching story. Keep going your path. Your work is worth reading and considering.
-- Erromantikoa on 7/30/2011 3:49:45 AM with a score of 0
on 7/29/2011 1:28:38 AM with a score of 0
awwww sad but very good
on 7/25/2011 9:34:59 AM with a score of 0
Awww! I loved all of it. It's the best one I've ever seen
-- Kate on 7/23/2011 8:30:09 AM with a score of 0
it almost made me cry.
-- Danielle on 7/22/2011 3:00:23 PM with a score of 0
Okay, I have to admit that I thought this would simply be fun. No idea why I did this, or why I clicked on this story. Maybe it was fate, but I'm thanking god, my lucky stars, and everyone else--including the author!
I want to play again! This is such a brilliant idea, and I loved how well thought out this story was! Everything about it is at a diffrent level. I could say this is a kind of masterpiece. Well done. I mean really.
-- Anonymous Admirer on 6/30/2011 5:30:43 AM with a score of 0
It was nice, though i didn't really like the ending
on 6/27/2011 4:41:32 PM with a score of 0
Very nice. And congrats for writing a love story that didn't seem like a soap opera.
on 6/17/2011 1:13:44 PM with a score of 0
Creative. Sappy. Good job.
-- Mimi on 6/15/2011 1:22:32 PM with a score of 0
I thought that this was quite intresting though you got the feeling that your choices wern't making a difrence to the story.
-- Bobby on 6/12/2011 5:27:31 PM with a score of 0
I will have to play again... I'm curoius about how much impact your choices have. Wonder writing
-- Loki on 6/10/2011 12:43:27 AM with a score of 0
Still my favorite game. Keep making more!
on 5/29/2011 5:12:44 PM with a score of 0
Rather touching, thanks for making it
-- Tom on 5/28/2011 6:06:17 PM with a score of 0
A touching, bittersweet experience. Highly recommended, it revels in artful simplicity.
-- Dejanus on 5/26/2011 10:23:34 PM with a score of 0
It's really suspenseful making you think you got the girl and poof you lose her. really good.
-- Tom on 5/19/2011 9:02:20 AM with a score of 0
bo approves, great story
on 5/16/2011 5:56:26 PM with a score of 0
Oh, I forgot to mention, watch your tenses.
on 5/11/2011 6:40:23 PM with a score of 0
Very short but I like the way how powerful it is. Truly sad...
-- Kory on 5/9/2011 12:02:42 PM with a score of 0
I almost cried!! :(
-- Olivia on 5/7/2011 11:08:58 PM with a score of 0
this is so sad... but I loved it.
-- haffa on 5/7/2011 11:19:01 AM with a score of 0
Wow... This story is truly amazing. I love it man.. but why so short? So much potential.. write a book about this and ill buy for 9.95$ to 14.95$
-- Justin on 5/7/2011 3:01:32 AM with a score of 0
Very very good. An extremely sad story - it did make me upset. Very well-written and I liked it
on 5/4/2011 6:20:45 PM with a score of 0
I was just wondering, how many endings are there?
on 5/1/2011 6:58:59 AM with a score of 0
It was so sad and beautiful!!!
on 4/30/2011 4:46:41 PM with a score of 0
I never cry when I read these sorts of stories but this time well lets just say I had to buy a new keyboard.
on 4/27/2011 10:29:51 PM with a score of 0
why so sad make anouther please and maybe learn more
on 4/27/2011 7:34:11 PM with a score of 0
Good story, definitely worth it.
-- Stephen on 4/27/2011 3:19:22 AM with a score of 0
This story was beautiful... and terribly sad. I cannot help but wonder why she left so suddenly at that point the boy last saw her. I rathar not know. The story seems more magical that way.
on 4/22/2011 9:17:37 PM with a score of 0
omg.. that was so depressing. good story though. really captivated me. I truly felt for her
-- eddie on 4/22/2011 12:40:13 AM with a score of 0
Sorry im not Gammlernoob accidently still locked in under his name
Yes 1i gave 8 i think you earned it, your story is great told.
Gave me gosebums.
on 4/18/2011 8:29:56 AM with a score of 0
Im not gonna cry, Im not gonna cry
on 4/17/2011 11:59:53 AM with a score of 0
It seems everyone felt sad, I feel a little scared right now... cool story
on 4/6/2011 3:40:40 AM with a score of 0
A story with extreme sadness. Well writen Sethaniel.
on 3/20/2011 4:49:30 PM with a score of 0
Gosh, its just so sad. But it fits this girl to die in such a mysterious way.
-- Tina on 3/16/2011 12:45:24 AM with a score of 0
i liked it alot i apretiated the whole tie together of the two main charecters with a twisted yet happy ending very creative love story alltogether
-- brae on 3/15/2011 4:45:01 AM with a score of 0
I really liked it but the ending was sad...did anyone get the girl? Or did she just die?
-- Rose on 2/27/2011 4:36:48 PM with a score of 0
Wow. tottaly speechless. so sad at the ending. i mean, she shows her breast to you and then you lose her?
on 2/25/2011 9:49:38 PM with a score of 0
oh this is sooo sad, but good!
on 2/18/2011 10:16:40 AM with a score of 0
This is the best story I have ever read. If you ever make another email me a link. You should write a book.
-- Connor on 2/15/2011 7:22:53 PM with a score of 0
My husband made me read this story. I thought it was beautiful and sad. 7 out of 8 =)
on 2/1/2011 4:41:50 PM with a score of 0
Defiantly worth reading.
on 1/30/2011 6:07:19 AM with a score of 0
I thought it would be a sappy love game. It was better much better.
on 1/29/2011 4:55:20 PM with a score of 0
It was very. . . short. And yet, that only made tihngs better.
It wasn't brilliant, but I really felt for the couple, every sentence along the way. Great read. :)
-- Waldy on 1/26/2011 3:05:29 PM with a score of 0
Unexpected and beautiful. Loved it.
-- Patricia on 1/23/2011 3:01:04 PM with a score of 0
It was very deep and simply meaningful
-- Jake on 1/11/2011 11:02:59 PM with a score of 0
Excellent. Wasn't sure if I'd be into this sort of story but I thoroughly enjoyed it.
on 1/8/2011 8:18:05 PM with a score of 0
This is a well-crafted story that evokes authentic human emotion at every turn. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
on 12/18/2010 2:22:42 AM with a score of 0
-- a on 12/18/2010 12:03:32 AM with a score of 0
wow, i love it....
-- michael on 12/16/2010 5:05:26 PM with a score of 0
I really liked this story, and even if I expected the ending to be somwhere like that.. I could not help but feel sorry for this man.
-- Varen on 11/24/2010 11:11:56 AM with a score of 0
Wonderfull story..it made me think..think much.
-- Stronglime on 11/23/2010 3:22:51 PM with a score of 0
on 11/14/2010 2:44:27 PM with a score of 0
An amazing piece of art.
on 11/12/2010 9:58:33 PM with a score of 0
Sad... but good...
-- Bean on 11/10/2010 9:23:58 PM with a score of 0
I think this is the best story here. if you're looking for a sweet sad story, try this. i love this.
on 11/6/2010 4:17:37 PM with a score of 0
This is my first story here and it's actually a very beautiful and sad story, and it partially succeeds in bringing across the loss of the boy. But it could definitely be better. Alot of the selection choices were repetitive and much too brisk, therefore it doesnt draw the reader in beyond a shallow understanding. So more details and imagination would be good. =)
-- The Crackpot on 11/5/2010 3:05:11 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful and emotional piece of art. :]
-- Laura on 11/1/2010 1:04:38 AM with a score of 0
But also sad... poor girl.
-- Kate on 10/29/2010 3:23:40 PM with a score of 0
-- Ed on 10/23/2010 3:34:40 PM with a score of 0
The story itself was written beautifully and captured emotions that made it wonderful to read. But the format isn't really what I'd call a CYOA story. But still beautiful nonetheless.
-- Cae on 10/17/2010 12:48:44 PM with a score of 0
Wow! So full of emotion, it makes the heart weep. Very good!
on 10/17/2010 12:50:56 AM with a score of 0
Words cannot describe how creative and beautiful this story is.
on 10/9/2010 3:47:07 PM with a score of 0
very creative, beautiful... yet so sad..
-- anonymous on 10/7/2010 6:13:21 AM with a score of 0
Lovely use of this medium. I liked that you broke with the "you" convention and wrote it in third-person. I craved more of a plot, but this is a nice CYO poem. Only other improvement would be not to repeat text after a link.
on 10/6/2010 11:43:48 AM with a score of 0
Beautifully written, and nicely paced. Felt bad for the narrator, though. I wonder if there's a positive ending for this? :-)
-- MadPanda on 9/25/2010 9:34:20 PM with a score of 0
aww...made me cry.
-- janine on 9/21/2010 7:51:48 PM with a score of 0
This was pretty...It made me wanna cry
-- Dei on 9/16/2010 2:20:35 AM with a score of 0
on 9/5/2010 8:08:01 AM with a score of 0
It was really good! You have a way with words to bring emotion out of you; not only that but I really like the mixture of endings.
on 9/1/2010 1:09:26 AM with a score of 0
Wow. This was simply amazing. It was like you took a great poem and turned it into a CYOA. Job well done.
on 8/31/2010 9:13:40 PM with a score of 0
Amazing! I got the Snow Maiden ending. Well done without being too wordy. 8/8
on 8/29/2010 12:23:11 AM with a score of 0
The admins need to implement a new rating: 9 - Snow. Amazing. I got Snow and Snow Maiden, I'm going to try to get the third one. I don't remember what it was.
on 8/27/2010 2:02:19 PM with a score of 0
i like this so much! i was well thought out and it was really touching. It was creative and it was a adventure with mixed feellings - Happy, thriling, exciting, mystery, and sadness. the ending i give a thumbs up - for emotion at least. This was one of the best storys i have read.
-- Unedentiefied :D on 8/8/2010 5:13:36 PM with a score of 0
i loved it! it mixes with my own sadness in my life and my liking of ghosts. i always know that ghosts are out there. Mostly looking for something that they never got in their lives. like how she never got the boy...
on 8/6/2010 3:43:47 PM with a score of 0
It was great and touching even though it ended with sad ending it was perfectly set as if it had been a tv program or a really catching anime. :D
-- Conor on 7/13/2010 11:57:22 AM with a score of 0
-- jj on 6/15/2010 1:14:03 AM with a score of 0
This my sir, is a work of art. Absolutely beautiful.
on 6/10/2010 9:28:22 AM with a score of 0
awww it was sad but i liked it
-- cassi on 5/23/2010 5:30:50 PM with a score of 0
Amy, I don't know where you think it says that this story is for kids. It's not. The Maturity Level is set to 6 out of 7 and it deals with adult concepts. The only thing this story has to do with kids is the age of the characters.
on 5/21/2010 9:05:47 PM with a score of 0
i found it good, very good, but It said it was for kids. Why the boob-touching then?
-- Amy on 5/21/2010 9:00:08 AM with a score of 0
very pretty. made me cry.
on 2/23/2010 4:14:20 AM with a score of 0
Not bad, but a bit of a depart from the usaully gamebook, so might turn of a newbie if it was the first game they played on this site.
Regarding the work itself-intersting, a bit dark. I'd give it a second go but not a thrid.
-- first timer on 2/21/2010 5:44:06 AM with a score of 0
Lovely storygame and a nice way for a newb to find their way into this site. I liked the way the memories fit together, and how her request at the beginning fit in with the narrator's experience at the end. Thanks for the experience. :)
on 1/18/2010 1:26:23 PM with a score of 0
Rather surreal, but very good in an artistic-seeming manner. Short, but this is one that should be like that. It keeps the very atmospheric, almost surreal (as I said) quality about it. I'm usually not one for a love story, but this does it well. Nice work!
on 12/24/2009 11:01:00 PM with a score of 0
Wow that was really sweet and sad. I loved it!
-- Brie on 12/9/2009 4:16:42 PM with a score of 0
Completely and utterly amazing....... this is what a love story is all about, in death, you still love that one girl from childhood 8/8
Walkthrough: Snow ending: be completely nice to her, do not stop, and you will get this ending.
Snow Maiden ending: be nice and mean to her and you should get this ending
Frozen ending: Be nothing but a cold, heartless bastard and you will get this ending.
on 10/28/2009 12:27:25 PM with a score of 0
it was awsome but i would like happy ending
on 8/3/2009 7:14:20 AM with a score of 0
...how are you still surprised... You've beaten it 24 times.
on 5/24/2009 5:37:53 PM with a score of 0
damn! done it 24 times straight and still aurprised by end!
-- fobose2 on 5/24/2009 6:43:42 AM with a score of 0
love it... if She died i would have followed her to death, through hell, and to heaven, through every obstacle and every pain, to be with her
-- John on 5/9/2009 7:01:01 PM with a score of 0
Snow Maiden. This is the best story I've ever read on this site. 8/8 hands down. Slightly depressing at the end, but hey.
on 4/10/2009 7:21:30 PM with a score of 0
Still one of my favs. I wish i could write something that touching.
-- buttons on 4/8/2009 8:09:03 AM with a score of 0
Really nice job. It's a nice story.
-- Badguy on 3/30/2009 7:39:31 PM with a score of 0
awesome, just awesome
on 3/29/2009 3:13:04 PM with a score of 0
Awww, the story was sweet. Nice job, reminds me of my girlfriend except without the getting killed part
-- John on 1/21/2009 6:46:03 AM with a score of 0
It's a cute, simple and short story. But it's well written. I wish it could have been longer though.
on 1/8/2009 7:00:20 AM with a score of 0
Left shivers up and down my spine. Well done!
-- Mina on 12/6/2008 3:51:44 PM with a score of 0
It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.
on 10/8/2008 6:14:29 PM with a score of 0
-- fobose2 on 8/22/2008 5:13:22 AM with a score of 0
I hate you you fucking ass hole You melted my Heart of ice and made me cry... Damn your good :P
on 8/5/2008 10:54:23 PM with a score of 0
awww! that was so sweet but why'd it have to end with a loss! it just wasn't fair but it was still a good game! i loved at and i gave it a 8!
on 7/26/2008 1:46:27 AM with a score of 0
Best story EVER!
on 7/19/2008 7:11:39 PM with a score of 0
Um, okay, I was on rails as soon as I stopped sketching. The ending where she was taken and I ran into the woods seemed arbitrary and forced, and did not flow from the beginning.
-- JC on 7/11/2008 12:04:27 PM with a score of 0
I got snow this time. Im going to place a link to this on my Writing site, I hope it will bring more people to read it...
on 5/26/2008 12:32:24 AM with a score of 0
Thats the first thing i have read here.. are they all that good?IM going to play it again to see if their is a happy ending. i just picked what i would do, and it ended with snow maiden. i wonder, do they all end like that?..
I gave it an 8.. something about enlightenment
on 5/26/2008 12:28:16 AM with a score of 0
AWWWWWW!!!!! I've played this story before but ut still makes me cry!!! It is soooo cute but yet so sad!!!! AWWWWWW!!!!!
on 5/19/2008 3:53:46 PM with a score of 0
Nice game. Very touching and gets me thinking.
on 5/7/2008 9:50:13 PM with a score of 0
Beautiful story. Its obvious you're very passionate about this one.
on 4/25/2008 2:13:16 AM with a score of 0
Very beautiful. I wish I could appreciate this more, but I guess I don't have much taste in this sort of thing. This makes up for all the shallow and poorly written love/dating games on the site...all six of them
on 4/5/2008 5:21:38 PM with a score of 0
ohh my im crying iv played that so many times but i always cry!! i love the ending were it says that he knows hes dying!! that one especialy gets me!! ;) but right now im :(!
SOOOO FREAKING AWESOME!!!
on 3/17/2008 6:10:15 PM with a score of 0
not the best it didnt have an ending and he loved her that hole time and it doesnt really go enywere
-- abby on 2/5/2008 4:15:22 PM with a score of 0
on 2/1/2008 11:24:47 AM with a score of 0
Not to shabby.
on 1/31/2008 5:41:47 PM with a score of 0
I got Snow, then Snow Maiden. I JUST NEED THE FROZEN ONE.
on 1/29/2008 7:23:51 PM with a score of 0
It made want to start writing again.
-- BlueN on 12/26/2007 11:43:37 PM with a score of 0
tragically beautiful. not at all what i expected, in fact it was much better.
-- joshua on 12/26/2007 9:12:08 PM with a score of 0
awesome game the best.
-- michigez on 12/15/2007 2:55:58 PM with a score of 0
8/8 great game amazing my ending was snow
on 12/10/2007 6:16:57 PM with a score of 0
I really haven't heard of a better story in the internet.
on 11/23/2007 12:30:12 PM with a score of 0
on 11/23/2007 12:24:44 PM with a score of 0
You should seriously write more stories like this. This was a great work of a love between two and a tragic loss.
on 11/17/2007 7:32:37 AM with a score of 0
8/8 nevermind about the what happend to her I didn't really read everything the first time and still the best game i've played yet.
on 11/13/2007 10:28:53 PM with a score of 0
filled my heart with passion
-- stephanie on 11/13/2007 7:37:13 PM with a score of 0
8/8 great story. your a really good writer. that would make a great movie. so emotional.
on 11/9/2007 2:02:00 PM with a score of 0
this is such the best game,i love the use of word and vocabulary
on 11/5/2007 7:05:55 PM with a score of 0
THAT was the best evry time i read it it gets BETTER!!!!
on 10/26/2007 8:32:03 PM with a score of 0
8/8 one of my favorite games but what happend to her.
on 10/20/2007 8:32:44 PM with a score of 0
That was really beautiful.
on 10/17/2007 9:54:52 PM with a score of 0
This was an awesome story
I gave an 8/8
I liked how when you clicked on a link
later on it actually mattered witch one you chose
it was very interesting.
on 10/5/2007 5:29:08 PM with a score of 0
wow, great game
on 9/5/2007 10:55:13 PM with a score of 0
The collection of small, poignant vignettes bring a bittersweet feeling, well done with excellent flow.
-- Whit on 8/24/2007 1:00:43 PM with a score of 0
-- yo on 8/4/2007 7:31:44 PM with a score of 0
Great, wonderful story. We need more love stories like this
-- Lee on 7/21/2007 3:01:46 AM with a score of 0
that touched me so much best game on the site it was amazing.
on 7/13/2007 11:09:25 AM with a score of 0
touching, just, you know, its just so GOOD!!!!
its worth a million $$$
on 7/9/2007 2:57:41 PM with a score of 0
Honestly, I'm breathless from the magnitude of emotion. Sniff.
Anyway, the game was a little short. But the fact that you could continue with the "wrong" path was cool. Nice job. In fact, INCREDIBLE, but just a little too short.
on 7/9/2007 12:15:58 AM with a score of 0
very touching, but kind of odd!
on 7/8/2007 11:29:26 PM with a score of 0
My favorite love story, period. It touched my very soul in a way others couldn't. I hadn't read anthing like this...in too long. Thank you for making this story. There was once a girl I knew and cared about that I grew up with. It reminded me of her. I haven't seen her since.
on 7/5/2007 4:32:47 PM with a score of 0
I love it.Defintely one of th ebest love stories I've read
on 6/30/2007 9:00:05 PM with a score of 0
Wow...This is an amazing story. Great job seth. As people have said, it wasn't forced or cheesy with the romance. 8/8.
on 6/28/2007 11:32:47 PM with a score of 0
Dude.... that's... that's sad, your just building me up right - your making it for another game where I set every thing right. Tell me who do I have to kill to get to the time machine. I'm kidding, don't cheese it up for me, that was classic. I gonna go cry alone by myself and eat that last piece of cake in the fridge.
on 6/28/2007 10:37:06 PM with a score of 0
Good, I'm not sure if its that replayable, I'll have to try it again. I like it how you make decisions but it's still in past tense.
on 6/28/2007 12:04:17 AM with a score of 0
amazing. this would make a good movie. i didnt have a favorite part because most of the game was pretty well thought out. if we could have music on games, Vermillion Pt2 by slipknot would a definite for this game.
on 6/27/2007 4:41:01 PM with a score of 0
This is a beautiful story, you did a great job making the romance real and not cheesy or forced, it even made me cry which no other story on here has made me feel such emotion's, this is a classic congrats seth.
on 6/27/2007 3:06:35 PM with a score of 0
Snow and Frozen (though I had to work for Snow). Congrats Seth, another fantastic game. You are the king of love and dating at this point.
on 6/26/2007 1:17:07 PM with a score of 0
Snow Maiden: VERY good
on 6/26/2007 1:09:17 PM with a score of 0
i had to play this again after everyone's comments. the story is very strong.
on 6/26/2007 11:54:08 AM with a score of 0
Wow, this was an awesome game!! Damn, intense story and keep writing storygames like this one!
on 6/26/2007 11:53:09 AM with a score of 0
WHAT AN ABSOLUTELY PHENOMENAL GAME. WONDERFULLY DONE!
on 6/26/2007 9:11:33 AM with a score of 0
... (I'm speechless). My new favourite. The best on this website. Thanks for bringing this story to the site. You, sir, are a genius and a legend rolled into one.
on 6/26/2007 4:35:19 AM with a score of 0
I was really impressed with this! A very poetic, artistic work! Great stuff!
on 6/25/2007 7:14:15 PM with a score of 0
Great, definetly Love and Dating
on 6/25/2007 5:22:36 PM with a score of 0
it starts off very short sentences. but it eventually grows into deeper plots and thoughts. im very pleased. not your best, but good.
on 6/25/2007 2:31:26 PM with a score of 0
Here- since some people don't think Haunted belongs in L&D. This one's definitely a love story. It's very short, also- only three endings.
on 6/25/2007 2:27:08 PM with a score of 0