"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played times (finished )
"walk in the park"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.
Geared for Children
There's a substitute teacher at school today. What are you going to do about it?
This is a great idea, but it could use some improvements.
First of all, I'd love to see more detail! Who am I? Who is my friend Monica? What is the school I am going to like?
Second of all, I was really disappointed in the endings. When I entered the portal and saw that I had three different options for adventures, I thought 'Great, now I can go on three different types of adventures! Maybe this is going to be a good storygame.'
Alas, I found out that all three led to endings. I think you could really do something with these three adventures! I would love it if you actually had each of the three options as an actual adventure. It would make it more entertaining and solve the problem of being linear!
on 1/10/2016 5:23:13 PM
Too short and linear, but it was okay.
on 6/5/2019 6:29:12 AM
Hmm it's pretty nice. They don't all have to be super long.
Just short and sweet.
on 6/25/2017 7:48:23 PM
on 6/17/2017 12:28:28 PM
You made a game with time travel in it and ended the game as soon as the time travel started? Why?
on 5/19/2017 6:20:47 AM
I thought this would be a very good story;
I thought, "Wow! Time travel adventures! Count me in!" but no; 2/3 of the links lead to death. Maybe you could add a little more story?
So, basically, what the featured comment said xD
on 1/12/2017 2:14:59 AM
that was short and boring
-- ilovedogs on 9/6/2016 6:35:23 PM
on 4/25/2016 10:19:44 AM
Really short. Very few choices.
-- Gamechannger78 on 3/24/2016 5:43:55 PM
Not many options
-- Critic on 11/15/2015 1:28:47 AM
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