Player Comments on Survive or Conquer

Wow, this was an enjoyable and well written story, and in my opinion is a bit underrated. It was interesting enough to play all the paths and wish for more.

The characters in this story were pretty well developed. Even the secondary characters had decent backstory and were more than just one dimensional objects for the main character's interactions.

The narrative of the story was well presented. The dialogue seemed to flow naturally and the pacing of the story was good.

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There was a decent amount of choices in the story, and a variety of ways to get to the ending. However, several of these choices looped into going to speak with your father for help and followed that same end. I wish that the endings were different for each of the choices of how to go about preparing for the dragon. Also, since the story was good, I would have liked much more along each path.

Overall, a very entertaining story and a good game. My only major issue is that I wish there was more of this story for me to enjoy.

A very enjoyable story; well-written, interesting plot, and there was a strong grounding in research.

Like the amount of choices you get

Section 12 reached fairly soon... Good plot but really short. ;)

Wow...just wow! Fantastic writing. Short and satisfying story.

Enjoyable game. :)

This story was pretty good. The writing was quite impressive and any issues with grammar wasn't at all noticeable, as the writing hardly if ever stumbled. While this was your "slay the dragon" kind of tale, it was done well and it had enough choices to give this quite a bit of replay value.

I only wish that there was much more to read through, because this certainly had quite a way with words :)

This was a pretty cool and quick adventure, I'll probably play it again. It feels like it has multiple endings. I especially liked the crossbow part, that was really interesting.

Pretty good :) Well written and quite long paragraphs. Lots to read. So 5/8

Simple but nice story. A little short, but the writing was good.

This story had an interesting plot, near perfect grammar and spelling. The amount of detail used in this story really kept the words alive in my mind. Your writing style is also quite amazing and I see that you have great potential. A little short to my liking but otherwise, this was just great! Keep on writing!

if you think people appreciate what you wrote without making a pre read that helps us understand what you wrote here first...

don't ! cause no one does...

I didn't actually read it but it looks good 5/8