Player Comments on Surviving The Black Plague
Ok game overrated in my opinion
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— David/EDP445 on 3/27/2024 2:08:50 PM with a score of 0
love people
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— people on 3/27/2024 2:07:25 PM with a score of 0
Great ending frl frl
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— Ian on 3/27/2024 1:47:31 PM with a score of 0
I liked the insight it gave me on how life was living during the black plague
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— Chidera on 2/20/2024 9:27:46 AM with a score of 0
It's unexpected and nice
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— Toluwani Olanrewaju on 2/20/2024 9:25:13 AM with a score of 0
Great, but a pity about the Australia inaccuracy. Europeans didn’t have contact with it in 1346.
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— Was going to share on 1/22/2024 12:50:05 PM with a score of 0
And they all died horrendously :)
Best ending, 10/10
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— Sawyer on 12/8/2023 11:08:10 PM with a score of 0
good
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— dude on 12/8/2023 10:52:13 AM with a score of 0
cool
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— me on 12/8/2023 9:56:54 AM with a score of 0
not great
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— bj on 11/3/2023 3:05:47 PM with a score of 0
awful I just died, how did I even get the plague, wtf
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— jack on 10/26/2023 10:26:21 PM with a score of 0
omg, hi ku rar k.
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— metallic man on 9/9/2021 9:20:14 AM with a score of 0
uh its ok i guess i strongly suggest not reading the epilogue its morbid.. anyways better than reguar homework.. i guess??
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— clark on 9/8/2021 3:11:33 PM with a score of 0
I have been forced to do this, send help -A rat from 1375
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— Alexandra on 9/8/2021 1:59:24 PM with a score of 0
I survived and i burned my house and clothes
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— Omer on 9/8/2021 1:59:23 PM with a score of 0
the shark said ¨yum yum!¨ as he ate my body and 1 millisecond passed and soon died and then his daughter ate his body and said ¨Yum Yum¨ and then died 1 second later and then the grandma lived a happy life for 1 second and then died 1 second later but i worked for the mafia and re-encarnated her even though im dead the end :)
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— javer (habenaro) on 9/8/2021 1:57:36 PM with a score of 0
Horrible ending though i did win
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— Yousif on 9/8/2021 1:51:47 PM with a score of 0
It was fun.
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— Shekeira on 9/8/2021 1:50:43 PM with a score of 0
best thing to do when there is a virus is stay inside and have hand sanitizer and lots of food
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— Nuh hajdari on 9/8/2021 1:49:31 PM with a score of 0
I really loved it
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— Riley on 9/8/2021 1:43:18 PM with a score of 0
eh not good but not bad forced to do in 7th grade social studies
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— Rubix Got Wap on 9/8/2021 12:10:24 PM with a score of 0
eh
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— Hazel on 9/8/2021 12:01:55 PM with a score of 0
This was a super fun! I loved this so much and it was a fun expirence but its still not better that reccee cups ;)
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— Konigin on 9/8/2021 9:24:39 AM with a score of 0
very disturbing don't read the epilogue
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— hello on 9/8/2021 9:24:18 AM with a score of 0
best game ever, made me not brocken
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— brovken on 9/8/2021 9:20:24 AM with a score of 0
my name is bubba
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— bubba on 9/8/2021 9:17:04 AM with a score of 0
jefffff
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— jeff on 9/8/2021 9:15:58 AM with a score of 0
Very VERY disturbing. Any choice... you will have nightmares.
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— Black Death Enthusiast on 9/8/2021 9:15:43 AM with a score of 0
I can win and you can't (:
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— nolan on 9/8/2021 9:15:41 AM with a score of 0
trash
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— mitchell on 9/8/2021 9:08:57 AM with a score of 0
i want black plague
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— yeetus on 9/8/2021 8:52:29 AM with a score of 0
I did not survive I thought it was really short and boring but it was ok
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— Eden on 3/5/2021 5:39:35 PM with a score of 0
this was ok not a lot of story to it tho so i did not like it.
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— justin on 3/5/2021 5:33:48 PM with a score of 0
It was fun. All my family died and I went through the torture of loneliness and I eventually died of old age.
Amazing love the pain suffering and torture almost like real life.
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— Brayden S on 3/4/2021 6:26:08 PM with a score of 0
My life was sad and I died young and was selfish I took the solution but it was fake so I and my loved one died.
I did it again and it turns out that my wife? Shipped me to China so I could be researched? The worst part about it is the person that I loved murdered me by chopping off my legs and then sent them to china where the covid is like please my wife is a monster! And IDK why is says why I have a wife?
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— Annalee on 3/4/2021 5:45:03 PM with a score of 0
Its fun
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— Jaymie M. on 3/4/2021 5:32:18 PM with a score of 0
The writing is bland. The humor fails and comes across as pointless and blunt, especially for deaths since all too often, the logical choice is the wrong choice without warning. The font size isn't even consistent among pages. There is tense switching between you and I on some pages. If there's one featured story under any genre you haven't read yet, go read that instead.
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AnthonyScoffler
on 12/10/2020 11:56:09 PM with a score of 0
You did a terrible job not only with humour and all the anachronistic stuff. You just made the less accurate and more boring description of The Black Death. That is unforgivable. Medieval descriptions are some of the better written and gruesome depiction of a real plague in human history and you made it BORING
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poison_mara
on 12/10/2020 6:49:12 PM with a score of 0
This story is terrible, and yet for some reason it looks like a class is playing it. Did a teacher really read it and go 'yes, yes this looks like proper education'.
I'm sure there'd legitimately be writers on the site who could cobble together a more decent edutainment thing of about this size in an afternoon, and perfectly willing to if we only knew what subject was wanted.
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Mizal
on 12/10/2020 5:19:03 PM with a score of 0
has anyone survived this?
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— Jack W on 12/10/2020 4:32:38 PM with a score of 0
good, but not great, but I DIED CAUSE OF POISON SPILLING ALL OVER MY BODY//////////////?????
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— bazhozziewhathead on 12/10/2020 2:13:21 PM with a score of 0
I survived in the game!
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— Grace on 12/10/2020 2:08:09 PM with a score of 0
I beat the game but i still somehow die
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— BigMan on 12/10/2020 2:05:18 PM with a score of 0
i died cuz i was nice to a elderly man, ugh- (sarcasm)
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— Catherine on 12/10/2020 2:01:57 PM with a score of 0
Is there a possible way to not die
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— BigMan62 on 12/10/2020 2:01:14 PM with a score of 0
Yeah do not read the epiclog
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— Unknown on 12/10/2020 2:01:01 PM with a score of 0
My wife was apparently part of a mafia
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— BigMan on 12/10/2020 1:59:52 PM with a score of 0
I died then my family got rich without me!
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— Grace on 12/10/2020 1:59:16 PM with a score of 0
i am amazing i died YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!1
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— Tate on 12/10/2020 1:35:49 PM with a score of 0
I died because I fell to the ground LOL XD :b
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— Will on 12/10/2020 12:07:36 PM with a score of 0
Yayy I burned my house down burned my clothes and all of my family dies Horray
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— Will on 12/10/2020 12:03:42 PM with a score of 0
i did bad
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— lauren on 12/10/2020 12:01:54 PM with a score of 0
Dont die LOL XD
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— Will on 12/10/2020 12:00:59 PM with a score of 0
Dont do nothing
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— Will on 12/10/2020 11:59:59 AM with a score of 0
hi i liked it
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— Javyn Small on 12/10/2020 11:55:45 AM with a score of 0
i lived but my family died from the flu because they hadn't experienced any sicknesses :-p
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— yyyyy on 12/10/2020 11:31:09 AM with a score of 0
I won at the cost of a dead wife but who cares
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— dead wife on 12/10/2020 9:23:12 AM with a score of 0
i stunk my selfishness led to my wife's demise and mine to i highly recommend just letting yourself drop dead
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— benjamin leonardo on 12/10/2020 9:18:40 AM with a score of 0
I died after two decisions well I guess that means I would have sucked at living there
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— MY name on 12/10/2020 9:17:24 AM with a score of 0
10/10 nomi
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— Ameetee on 9/17/2018 9:10:31 PM with a score of 0
I guess it's a decent game, but I don't like how "I" ended up doing things that I could care less, and I'm not talking about the choices but what was IN those choice. So what if my wife died? I probably hated her anyways, especially with the reveal of her working for the mob; that second playthrough wouldn't exactly make me feel bad for her. This story would be better if it was second or third person, not first. Aside from that, there are some typos in there that needs fixing but they weren't too abundant so I'll let it pass.
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Dynamism
on 10/7/2015 8:22:12 PM with a score of 0
This isn't historically accurate at all.
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FazzTheMan
on 9/26/2015 1:15:02 AM with a score of 0
Pretty good. Kinda short though. 5/8
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TheBossWriter
on 9/25/2015 5:03:30 PM with a score of 0
Wife worked for the Mafia.... That was definitely a twist of events....
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MultipleMinds
on 9/14/2015 4:02:26 PM with a score of 0
I don't like unhappy endings, but I guess it is realistic. Maybe, make it a bit longer.
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bburger
on 9/11/2015 4:43:53 PM with a score of 0
Not one of the good ones. I must be playing as one of the most anxious OCD characters in history. And how do you "CAUTIOUSLY" burn your whole house down and build a new one? Also this isn't historically accurate because no one had a clue as to what caused the plague. Also my grandpa or someone died in the begining but since you gave him no personality nor reason for me to care about him dying.
So my advice, work on this and change some plot holes and add more realism into the story and add characters that feel things. I know it's a lot to choke down. But it will make the story go from a 3, to atleast a 6. But for me it is a 3/8.
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SonicTurboTurtle
on 9/10/2015 7:51:13 PM with a score of 0
This story was...interesting to say at least. I liked the historic references of the Bubonic Plague. The writing was decent enough to flow.
The choices in the story have a lot to be considered. Choices that I thought were good ones, ended the game abruptly.
I played the game twice and got the "good ending" on my second play through. I just wish there was more to explore, more morality of choices involved, more interaction with your wife. How did they leave the city? Be more descriptive!
Overall, it could be so much better! Don't rush this game out! Take the time to be more detailed and you will see your ratings improve.
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AppDude27
on 9/10/2015 3:23:11 PM with a score of 0
Not a bad idea but needs some editing.
Tips:
* Be consistent in your writing
* Do not make things so linear and predictable
* Try writing in different styles for different stories; Take a look a book like "Shakespeare Stealer"
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ShowMeTheCode
on 9/10/2015 10:22:39 AM with a score of 0
*SPOILER*
Wow that epilogue...
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Zake
on 9/5/2015 11:22:48 PM with a score of 0
Pretty good, but here were a lot of technical issue-
-My wife died of the plaugue, but she comes back later?
-Some links don't work
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CookieRage7
on 9/5/2015 9:21:14 PM with a score of 0
It was shit, that's all I have to say.
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— BluTarch on 9/5/2015 7:42:52 PM with a score of 0
Randomness with a story, it's a bit odd because the sentences suddenly stop. And then carry on. Talking sharks and a medieval mafia (I like the idea of ride-by shootings on horseback and assassins with crossbows) puts this in the teen fiction section and the story doesn't seem to know whether to take itself seriously or go for laughs, it's an interesting premise though and I'm sure your next one will be enjoyable reading too :)
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Will11
on 9/4/2015 4:23:30 AM with a score of 0
By the way I only called you Naomi because it is I_moan backwards, funny eh?
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— statue on 9/4/2015 2:54:45 AM with a score of 0
Naomi! on the first page you suddenly changed to 1st person, change it immediately
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— statue on 9/4/2015 2:51:28 AM with a score of 0
By the way, sharks don't like the taste of human flesh. Often when they bite a human it is because they are confused and think it's a fish. But once they taste it they realize it's not fish and they don't like it. They would hate the taste especially under the circumstances of this story. Still a good story though.
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corgi213
on 9/3/2015 7:48:31 PM with a score of 0
And they all died....
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corgi213
on 9/3/2015 7:41:20 PM with a score of 0
I like the premise, and your writing isn't bad. I don't see clusters of errors (though, it's spelled "mafia") and the formatting isn't terrible, though some pages feel rather bare. The wording is awkward in places and feels like it needs polishing, but not so badly that it's unreadable or funny.
My main complaint is that you switched from second person to first person POV half-way through the first page, with no warning to the reader whatsoever. That is -incredibly- jarring. Then you switched back for the last sentence, which is also jarring.
**Spoilers after this point**
I'd also contest the realism of the epilogue. Being out in the woods for a couple of generations, especially while presumably getting people from outside the family as brides / husbands as the first child did (though, if they were in-breeding, they're screwed for entirely different reasons) would not cause that. Nice try at a bittersweet end, though.
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Kiel_Farren
on 9/3/2015 11:52:34 AM with a score of 0
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