Player Comments on The Ballad of Anxiety

First of all, this was a reasonable length, and spelling was not an issue. The plot was also reasonably interesting.

However, the poetry itself was lacking. The meter (pattern of line-length) was all over the place, and there was no consistent rhyming pattern. Writing poetry can be difficult unless you have a knack for it: I recommend you read the other ballad submitted in the contest by Romulus to get a feel for what really good poetry sounds like.