Player Comments on The Javan Rhinoceros

This was pretty interesting.

I liked some of the pictures that were in this, they certainly helped in providing some form of visual entertainment in this story. I do think that this would've been more enjoyable if the writing was expanded on, because this story was quite short and it really felt like there was so much missed potential in this. More details and actions in general would only have had a positive effect on this story.

It would've been nice if the items had more of a overall purpose in this storygame, but their inclusion feels somewhat uninspired at the end. For a game about wildlife there didn't seem to be much in terms of interaction with the animals in this storygame. Some more adventure in general would've made things more interesting and immersive in the long run, it is always good to flesh out a storygame like this.

Overall, this was an okay storygame, but it feels like there's something missing to truly make it a worthwhile experience.

I liked this story. Well written and informative. Only one item seemed to do anything, unfortunately. Still, I learned something I didn't know, which is great! Excellent job.

This is a pretty imaginative little story, I liked it.

Meh, I mean it wasn't terrible, but it seems kind of pointless to have an item related game where you only actually need to use one of the items.

short

It needs more pages, and a better explanation than just only one sentence.

Other than that, I liked it a lot. It was very interesting and intriguing, and all it needs is probably more pages.

It was an entertaining little game, but a little short. I liked the surprise that you had for the reader at the end, which I thought was clever.

lol.fun times

Good Lovely game!

Since I am familiar with Java and Indonesia, I know surprisingly a lot about rhinos. The facts were great, but only the fruits seemed to do something (besides the fact that the rhino book had facts). Anyway, great job on such a small story!

I'm sorry. The fact that "I am cat food. Meh." is a button you can click makes this worth a high rating.

Pretty good story, though I felt it was a bit abrupt, needed a little more description, and could use a few more options. Maybe you should have also made the camera able to take pictures of other animals.

I saw a tiger. The tiger saw me looking at him. Tiger ran away. lolwut.

This shows no branching paths and no real story.

I actually really liked this game! Only problem I had with it is that it's in Edutainment and I didn't actually learn anything about rhinos.

Not too bad, could do with more descriptions

I got chowed on

It was fun, but a bit too easy. And I wanted to take pictures of the other animals,lol.

Yay for rare rhino's, and like Bo, I acknowledge the existance of this story lol XD

Bo acknowledges the existence of the story

...Very odd. Very easy to die. Some cool animals, though. There really didn't seem to be much range of choice, however.

I liked the pictures. Especially the creek.

Running away is an instinct, Rommel.

'You fall off the cliff because you are scared and you die'? Choices, choices...

You fall and you die and you fall and you die!!!! This was wickedly awesomely bodaciously coolio dudio! That Rhino was seriously a mean face and so was that cliff where I....fell and I died and I fell and I died! Keep it real Primate you rock the stones of the pebbles some hard time yo!

In a few days, I'll unpublish this game and enhance it with a bigger version.

Great! I think learning about endangered species is very important!

Way to go - Iknow it's a little bit harder making an edutainment game but you did it, please do another one, that was awesome. I never really knew about the Javan Rhinoceros.

I love animal games!

Really short, but cool, if you are careful. The hill part confused me, though. Pretty cool.

Nice, I learned something about that Rhino. It'd be nice to take pictures of the other animals though.

Many death links.

Well done on being able to go advanced though.

Hey, pretty fun. I won, wasn't very hard but I had a nice time, thank you. 5/8

Traveling the jungle was fun! Awww, and that big cat (tiger) killed. AWWW! Great game!

(I'm obsessed with cute animals, though I think almost every animal is cute, the others are cool, 'cept for pesky bugs and *shudder* spiders...)

a unique style of gaming here. i didnt win, but it was fun.