Player Comments on The Labyrinth of Monyx

This is a good game. If you added plot, and some more description, you could probably get a commendation if you pester an admin enough. Gave you a higher rating because of the pictures, though.

this game is trash

Well... no plot, but I award you a point for the cute pictures.

"Congratulations!

Your score (i.e. the number of battles you have won) is 5.

1-5: You can't be serious!!"

No, never serious, but seriously, I have endless provisions that can be used again and again during battle so technically I can never die in battle. Is this an error? ;)

Randomness has a place in adventures/stories/RPGs etc. hit/miss, gambling, so on and so forth, it does NOT work effectively for vital life or death decisions, there needs to be strategy involved, test a reader's intelligence, guile, or willpower, not their patience.

This game is purely luck-based, has no actual story, and utilizes a boring combat system. I is nigh-impossible to beat on the first try due to the unpredictability of walking in random directions with no real hints.

This game has no plot whatsoever. I don't see any plot development (because there is no plot) and this game includes bunnies killing you. Not very realistic.

Well, I won. I didn't use a single item, I rarely got hit more than once (except towards the end), fighting monsters was a One Click Battle with no other options (you can't even run away or defend), and I just guessed all the combinations without earning any of them.

I don't mind that there's no plot. I don't mind that there's no characters. It's more like a dungeon crawl...kind of...and I can appreciate that. It just ended up as a frustrating maze after a while.

So, yeah. It could use some work.

The game ended but not bc of my choices. That's why I rated it so low. It felt like a cop out.

I just get stuck in a loop of fighting bunnys and jellyfishes

This. Game. Has. No. Plot.
Where is the character background/development? The point of the protagonist to fight these monsters? Descriptions of setting?

There was a very annoying bug, known as the cycle of bunnies and jellyfish in other comments. That was annoying and confusing. Also, perhaps once you have killed a monster, you can't encounter it again so it disappears? Or maybe you can name certain sections of the map as certain places for certain enemies (example: Pokemon routes).

RPGs may be mostly game, but they still have plot, purpose, and conflict. Flesh out the battle scenes, the routes, the plot' add a purpose—you don't have to completely destroy this. I see potential in it being a good RPG.

I can see how this would turn out to be a really great game but it comes across as unplanned. It needs some more content, to make it less boring as right now it's literally just "go this way, go that way". Also, when I go east, I just get stuck in a never ending cycle of bunnies and jellyfish, it's pretty annoying as I could find no way of escaping the cycle of mass murder. All of this aside, it's a good idea and has a lot of potential if you try to improve it.

I couldn't do anything except battle bunnies and jellyfishes. What the hell?

Got lost and finally quit eating. A bit depressing, needs more content.

A neat little game. Can't see how you could win if you went to the west though. I ended up letting a bunny kill me because I got frustrated and bored with it. One path's extremely easy to figure out, the other seems impossible. Might want to fix that.
It could also use some fleshing out, more story line, maybe a bit of background saying why you're there. Just something to hook the reader and make them really want to read it and play it again and again.

Way to hard.

I got stuck after killing 3 Monyc's and a giant blue cobra.

I can only say that this is HOPELESS. Someone who uses scripting should be able to write a better game than this. Everything was perfect--hey, did I mention that this is wayyyyyyy too hard with no hints whatsoever?

Well I was impressed with your scripting, considering you made this game when you were about 12, but there was this part where I got stuck in a loop and kept having to fight jellyfish and killer bunnies over and over and couldn't get out.

I was told to go west by a worm and ended up getting trapped somehow with nothing more than a dead end...I will have to come back to this one to try it again.

The minotaur is too easy compared to, say, the ice monster. But still, it's better than the shit I was writing when I was twelve.

Nothing is worse then 3J's maze...

what was the paper for?

Would be better if put in the puzzle section.

I 'died' by getting locked in a room. I had a sword which i randomly found in a dinosaur. I could whack down the door. Oh, wow, a piece of paper that says 75. Couldn't you add a link telling me ways to get out? I could think up millions.

at first i was like, hey im gonna like this game, then i played it, several times. got stuck in random loops and killed for no good reason. i like the games mechanics a bit, they are a little boring. it would be better if we werent in a maze... this is worse the 3J's oms maze.

Bo dissaproves, feel the shame wash over you

All I can say is that it is okay.

Good:
1. Pictures
Bad:
1. No backstory
Ugly:
1. Hard game to finish- once you get lost it's really hard to find your way out.
2. Lots of random choices

I just started and just died so I normally wouldn't but a comment. However, since it seems I'm the first to comment, I have to say this isn't usually my type of cyos but I'm liking it! The system and concept are well done, I haven't run into problems in combat yet. Also if those are your originals drawings, good work and great dedications. Ill comment later, I'm going to restart.