Player Comments on The Pandemic

Rather stock, bad zombie game, unfinished (as you noted, but it still doesn't make it look better), and seems amazingly similar to 'Survive the Zombies' just bad. Then again, this is just another Zombie Game.

And that's the problem, if you're going to make a game on a popular premise, make it in a different perspective. Make it original, funny etc.
This didn't stand out as a story. Also, grammar is important, bad punctuation makes you quit reading early. So 2/8 overall.

But, you put some effort to this, I think. So if you choose to write something else--more original and with more work put in, then I think you could make an okay decent story.