Player Comments on The Party Awaits!

Why the heck did I click on this? Don't read this. It's short and very very easy.

— noname on 4/10/2020 3:00:01 PM with a score of 0

The font is terrible, and you should be ashamed. Also, the correct choices were way too obvious. 2/8

— Victim on 12/10/2018 12:13:01 AM with a score of 0

I grabbed the beer... but I still got busted.

— LuvLee on 11/4/2018 2:59:30 PM with a score of 0

I imagine this was written as a minigame to try the system out, and there aren't any evident mistakes in the grammar and style departments. I would use the standard font for the main text though, this one is less readable and would annoy me if the story was longer. I'm sure you know that you'll have to put in much more effort to create a well-developed storygame.

— undr on 10/6/2018 6:32:23 PM with a score of 0

Sure, this was short and has only one ending but I like it. Not gonna leave a rating though

— WritingStories on 10/6/2018 12:32:43 PM with a score of 0

Not bad for a first story, but there's room to grow here. The whole point of this story format is to have more than one ending, and I only found one. On the plus side, the items worked and I only found one spelling error.

— ultraoverlord on 10/5/2018 8:26:58 PM with a score of 0

This was a nice trial run of the editor. Make efforts to increase the number of possible outcomes other than premature failures. "Linear" CYS are frowned upon. You might be able to produce quality content one day soon.

— ugilick on 10/5/2018 1:08:22 PM with a score of 0