Player Comments on Vanvid

What an interesting story! Although I've only completed one storyline, the one with Mary the wolf, I look forward to finding all the endings. You guys did a fine job on it!
Now, a little constructive criticism if you may... I suggest going back and checking for spelling errors. There were few as I played, but I believe it will help your story greatly!
Also, I'd suggest breaks in the paragraphs. One large block o' text is a bit tedious to get through, and as a person who often accidentally skips lines, or re-reads lines, it would be a nice relief to have these.
All in all, the story was cool! I'd love to see more like it! :)

I rather enjoyed playing this game! It was well worth the time to explore the different endings.

This story does a good job of branching and including different storylines based upon choices that you make. In some of these, however, I thought they ended too fast and wish there was more narrative after the choice. There was a great variety of endings based upon choices, and it was fun to see where each path would lead.

The story itself seems decently written. There were a couple places where paragraph breaks and structuring would have made it a better read. However, this did not distract from the story for me.

The main disappointment that was that I never found out exactly why I was placed in the VANVID in the first place. At the start, this seemed like something I was on a quest for (along with escaping), but I never found the answer. I wish the narrative answered this in the storylines.

Overall, this is a good game with a solid story. As far as CYA it has defined branches of story based upon character choices and has a variety of endings. I enjoyed my time with this story.

Good and short.

A pretty fun, neat little game. There's nothing major, as far as I see, to critique here. I wish I learned some more about Vanvid though.

OKAAAAYY... that was good and I give it a 6/8.

That was a VERY good adventure. It was kinda long though. That might be because I played through all the possible outcomes though.

Loved it! I loved that you could choose to help people and to lie, and everything! This is one of my favorite games! I rated it 8/8! If you look at my rating system on my profile, you will see that this game is perfect! There's sort of a mystery in it, and I love that!

Awesome!

I reckon it was pretty kool and different XD
Keep up the good work =)

Is there a single actually good ending.

This was a nice, mysterious story--6/8--but the place was never explained properly.

Wow beautiful story, I loved the bit with the wolf. I concur that paragraphs would have helped make it easier on the eyes, but other than that very nice.

I thought it was interesting, it reminded me of Alice in wonderland actually. In the end, I was one with nature. I'll see if I can't find an ending more to my liking on my next try.

IM GOLD!!!! *poses before turning solid*

Not bad, but I'd like there to be some separation between paragraphs.

6/8 pew pew pew pew pew pew