Player Comments on Virtual Video Game

The fact you can buy cheat codes and use them is a good idea. Unfortunately, I rarely got a choice to use some of them, and when I did, didn't make much sense. Also, I'd like to hear more about how the kids at school are disappearing. That plot point sort of got dropped and suddenly I was just fighting the boss. Maybe I skipped too well with cheat codes. A decent effort.

— madglee on 8/23/2006 5:28:48 PM with a score of 0

I like this

— Abgeofriends on 10/27/2023 2:19:26 PM with a score of 0

Its ok

— Farkunda on 8/5/2023 8:31:58 AM with a score of 0

Very short, but the concept of cheat codes was really fun!

— Nonamebutilikedthisgame on 2/12/2023 6:42:53 PM with a score of 0

In my opinion, it wasn't the best. I don't like how there are chance choices because the game just ends, and if you're really far in the game and didn't save, you'll have to start over again.

— Tallulah on 1/6/2023 3:27:50 PM with a score of 0

a lot of things are left to chance .-.

— - on 4/22/2022 1:47:06 AM with a score of 0

Cool

— Carter on 4/1/2021 9:25:38 AM with a score of 0

cool!

— Leohasbeenbanned on 1/30/2021 5:10:52 PM with a score of 0

hi mack more plz

— steven on 9/14/2020 11:29:29 AM with a score of 0

Heh pretty cool!

— DUDE_MAN on 6/9/2019 5:09:10 PM with a score of 0

cool

— gamermas on 5/8/2019 8:37:53 AM with a score of 0

Cute game, thanks for the story! :D

— stealth5106 on 2/1/2019 12:18:05 PM with a score of 0

This is way too short, many typos/grammar issues, doesn't make sense and lots of unnecessary stuff, and really illogical. I'm not a video game expert, but I don't think any game ever made has a "grow mustache" cheat code. I think it is generous to give this game a 3/8.

— abchiaramonte on 7/24/2018 8:10:04 AM with a score of 0

It was a good game overall.

— MusicalNerd7 on 6/4/2018 10:42:12 AM with a score of 0

Wooooooooooo
Video Games
oh snap I'm going to get arrested

— Dragoneel on 4/4/2018 12:47:16 PM with a score of 0

I did like it, and sorta did not. But it was very very fun, completedin about 5-10 minutes!

— Existence on 9/8/2017 12:29:38 AM with a score of 0

A lot of this depended entirely on guesswork and chance...

— crazygurl on 7/13/2017 9:41:54 PM with a score of 0

The story was way to confusing and based on randomness to be good. It also had lots of grammar errors, making it really hard to read.

— Nonono on 5/22/2017 3:23:14 PM with a score of 0

Fun!

— Harry Potter on 3/10/2017 4:49:19 AM with a score of 0

Lots and lots of grammar errors that made reading difficult. I also don't agree with losing based on what I clicked on rather than using any really thought process. It might be better without the backstory of the missing classmates. It doesn't really seem to fit.

— Quorrah on 2/26/2017 4:36:15 PM with a score of 0

Great job.[I just say this to cheer people up.]

— Stormfeather on 11/23/2016 3:21:20 PM with a score of 0

Well I have honestly no idea why I couldn't stop reading it. It did have many many spelling errors one time due to a spelling error I couldn't even figure out what was going on but the awesome story made up for everything also I love the idea of having to guess which link to press instead of having to look for hints throughout the storygame. overall a good read but because of the spelling errors I only gave it a 7/8 I would advise you to proofread

— TinyTerd10 on 11/20/2016 10:20:38 PM with a score of 0

Honestly, I guess it has a good plot and all. Words and maybe grammer could and should be improved. Partial extra sentences and words. Either way, good effort but could be improved to be amazing.

— WhisperingFlower on 10/4/2016 7:23:04 PM with a score of 0

So, little boring but still a little fun

— AmesomeSauce on 9/7/2016 3:57:51 PM with a score of 0

That was fun

— annaisawesome on 7/15/2016 11:35:09 AM with a score of 0

Uh yeah. I guess it was alright. Could've been much improved. You clearly only spent about two days maximum on this story. I gave you 4/8 for effort and originality though. So well done for that.

— Cocoabeans on 6/13/2016 1:56:37 PM with a score of 0

It was a great story, but the plot kind of threw me off.

— Dawd on 4/22/2016 6:41:46 PM with a score of 0

The game isn't really that fun with a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes :///////

— blurryfacemartinez on 1/31/2016 9:23:48 PM with a score of 0

Was fun, a bit shor though.

— JohnSmith1219o2 on 11/30/2015 7:03:00 PM with a score of 0

I am gonna make a storygame

— Girlygamer20919 on 9/15/2015 12:01:02 AM with a score of 0

Short, but then again i did use the cheater's edition's features quite a bit.

— Justin2002 on 6/23/2015 8:08:47 PM with a score of 0

There was a bit of a problem with the gramma but overall it was a very fun and entertaining game.

— Penworth on 4/15/2015 10:17:02 PM with a score of 0

I enjoyed it, weird and illogical, but fun.

— WizzyCat on 3/24/2015 8:39:11 AM with a score of 0

haxed all the things
8/8 would have idea again

— Bob on 3/16/2015 7:12:31 AM with a score of 0

HAHAHAHA I HATE CONAN!!!!! *evil laughter*

— Wolfmist on 12/21/2014 12:53:41 PM with a score of 0

Cool

— NokadoThe on 10/19/2014 4:43:41 AM with a score of 0

Good story. Rather easy but engaging. Poor spelling and grammer lets it down. Add more depth and levels. Also try and make the game slightly more difficult.

— Jordi P on 10/2/2014 11:57:18 AM with a score of 0

Poor grammar. Interesting plot, though. I would like to see this expanded on.

— Malkalack on 8/10/2014 2:03:10 PM with a score of 0

It's okay ...

— djman3420 on 7/18/2014 10:42:29 PM with a score of 0

This is a good game

— Lolol on 7/3/2014 10:04:44 AM with a score of 0

2/8 it sucks bye

— hunter on 6/24/2014 2:35:09 AM with a score of 0

Needs more depth to the story. Add detail of your surroundings and don't make it a 50/50 chance to just lose, that's cheap and would make people mad in a long game that they then have to start over.

— Forby on 6/5/2014 10:51:42 AM with a score of 0

I never knew cheating was so useful

— Jordal on 3/5/2014 6:32:42 PM with a score of 0

Fun.

— EarthCollision on 2/28/2014 12:29:00 PM with a score of 0

Wow... Not what I excpected

— TheNightmare413 on 1/2/2014 5:57:17 PM with a score of 0

In many ways it makes me think of spy kids 3 ...

— kat on 3/18/2013 7:38:28 PM with a score of 0

GOOD MAKE MORE GAMES LIKE THAT I LIKE IT

— faded on 3/3/2013 4:30:53 AM with a score of 0

I wish I had more reason to choose one option or the other. "Pick IDEA 1 or IDEA 2" isn't really a fair way for me to play; it doesn't keep me from going back and picking the right option, but it also doesn't make me have fun. It was an interesting idea though.

— WaywardGirl on 2/22/2013 10:24:50 PM with a score of 0

Well written but too linear

— Omegagoldfish on 9/17/2012 7:53:00 PM with a score of 0

Awesome Approves!
Interesting, and had plot. Fun and I tried to memorize the cheats. Fun!
5/8.

— awesomeness1242 on 6/28/2012 7:31:38 PM with a score of 0

5

— CovElite on 5/31/2012 9:53:00 AM with a score of 0

Wish it was longer.

— CovElite on 5/25/2012 10:03:42 AM with a score of 0

meh...

— haledakota on 5/20/2012 11:36:01 AM with a score of 0

Too bad it's so short

— Xt1000305 on 4/23/2012 7:41:22 AM with a score of 0

random

— betaband on 4/14/2012 1:34:30 PM with a score of 0

weird. Play timescape or a demented teletubbie will strangle you

— betaband on 3/3/2012 12:55:16 PM with a score of 0

Eh, way too linear. kinda fun but no plot really. Just guess and if you fail go back =/ not difficult at all. Could've used character development, etc.

— ChaiHai on 9/27/2011 6:26:07 PM with a score of 0

meh

— ThisisBo on 6/19/2011 12:12:04 AM with a score of 0

Good.

— Killer999 on 6/8/2011 1:30:44 PM with a score of 0

Sweet!

— tgsunrise on 5/7/2011 6:33:33 PM with a score of 0

Guessing game but a good theme

— bradhal on 4/29/2011 4:53:51 PM with a score of 0

um. ok. some grammar mistakes. and i didn't understand the plot. since when was i in a classroom?

— fergie14233 on 12/19/2010 1:13:00 AM with a score of 0

Pretty good game

— xDante on 8/30/2010 12:54:48 AM with a score of 0

This was a very interesting and creative game, I like the idea of the whole thing but it didn't seem detailed enough for me but good job anyways!

— iprototype on 2/24/2010 5:14:11 PM with a score of 0

good game

— Vince on 2/13/2010 7:20:19 AM with a score of 0

meh.

— demonstar31 on 12/7/2009 2:05:55 PM with a score of 0

This is the best game I've played on chooseyourstory.com! Your grammar needs a little work but other than that, WOW!

— NealShustermanFan on 7/16/2009 3:13:46 PM with a score of 0

I liked it it was pretty good, for a first game its awesome.

— Lokloklok on 1/28/2009 6:44:03 PM with a score of 0

its funn.

— tinaa on 7/16/2008 11:49:01 PM with a score of 0

Nice story! I love video games and pretty much every video game on your profile page is one of my favorite games too. I also liked the ablilty to enter in cheat codes. Pretty cool for a first game!

— X8-Bliss on 6/2/2008 10:59:41 PM with a score of 0

it was pretty cool, i like how you can get cheats and evreything

— kidgav on 4/18/2008 4:10:59 PM with a score of 0

sort of good, good be better though...

— 12martinj on 12/10/2007 7:52:01 PM with a score of 0

i dont get it

— chris_zelda on 8/12/2007 8:07:25 PM with a score of 0

Sweet! I won.
Cool "video" game

— th*mage*of*kings on 6/12/2007 4:49:12 PM with a score of 0

I've finished it. It's a little too short for my liking. I would have liked to see level 12...

— Rommel on 3/17/2007 10:46:58 PM with a score of 0

Worth every cent. 6/8. have somone teach you how to use Items and Random Variables

— Rommel on 3/17/2007 10:43:34 PM with a score of 0

I've commented on this before. Obviously my rating got deleted as well. Still, an okay game.

— October on 10/27/2006 10:04:07 AM with a score of 0

uh...

— evilplaster on 9/23/2006 4:17:46 PM with a score of 0

WEEEIRD.

— hamburgerfish on 9/21/2006 5:17:14 PM with a score of 0

Pretty cool,but the game depends on luck.

— Nooguhnier on 8/26/2006 10:25:09 PM with a score of 0

Cool how you did the cheats, but the randomness when you were attacking was rather stupid. It was an alright game otherwise.

— Anubis on 8/25/2006 7:50:09 PM with a score of 0

I didn't warp and still didn't get to use any superjump or anything. Still, there was no further commentary on the whole video game turned reality parts.

— madglee on 8/23/2006 5:31:21 PM with a score of 0

Cool story. I like the aiming.

— on 6/17/2006 7:26:23 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good!

— Anna on 6/15/2006 12:30:37 PM with a score of 0

yea i kind of like this game when i ws tryin to pick which virus to choose it was hard cause it was my first try playin this game but anyways i like this game its cool and fun

— axel osorio on 5/9/2006 8:23:59 AM with a score of 0

good enough for a first game, but not that great.

— weedy on 5/5/2006 4:56:07 PM with a score of 0

Not a bad game, I enjoyed playing it!

— GodsSlayer on 4/25/2006 7:51:06 PM with a score of 0

Okay, that was just odd. Fun, but odd.

— havacoman on 4/24/2006 5:56:02 PM with a score of 0

um...it didnt make much sence

— Riftmaker04 on 4/24/2006 2:53:30 PM with a score of 0

It was boring

— nathan on 4/22/2006 2:47:51 PM with a score of 0

That was a great first game, and despite it being a basic game instead of advanced, it still managed to entertain. Not that original but still awesome all the same.

— Miccy2000 on 4/22/2006 5:48:18 AM with a score of 0

A decent game with an awesome plot. Kinda short though.

— Deven711 on 4/20/2006 10:41:42 PM with a score of 0

Great first game but its soooo clicher.

— JJJ on 4/20/2006 3:54:25 PM with a score of 0