Player Comments on Where am I?

Well it was randomly abstract but the "it was all a dream" endings do tend to render anything that went before it pointless: we all have dreams and no one's going to buy a book to read an account of a fake dream unless it is meaningful in some way as opposed to random. Perhaps some people appreciate art for art's sake but that means that any human action could be called art, then actions lose their impact and life just sinks into meaninglessness. This story, though a bit unusual is pointless, I would recommend traditional things like a plot and characters.

This started out really well, but halfway through...I don't even know what happened. It turned into a quiz about saving this woman or something. Even for an abstract game, there should be something solid for the reader to hold onto.

It would have been nice to see more branching.
The storyline was a bit confusing; how exactly does the jinn relate to everything? If you want to add some culture or mythology into the game, you could probably do it in a more logical and effective way. The story could have benefited from less randomness.
Also, make sure you're consistent with your spelling of Quran. There's a few accepted spellings, but please choose one and stick with it.

I got the Jin Girl ending. It was a short and sweet story.

There's no continuity, and the choices are arbitrary with no real way to know the answers without using the "Go Back" button repeatedly.

meh it was decent.

lame short and plus how would we know the answers to the questions

Very short and linar

fun

It was okay but if u pick the wrong answer it just sends u back to the last question you had I mean why would you even do that I mean I would walk toward the chair and defiantly not the lady I mean what if she's bad and is faking I mean you can learn from your mistakes in this game

Meh. It was nice, but much too short. I would like to see more detail, and maybe more plotlines. All in all, I had fun.

Seth says NO!!!! I just didn't like it. 2/8

Interesting...

I appreciate abstract stuff MUCH more than the next guy.

This takes akward randomness to a new level.

No broken links or linkless pages. Most of the links where you die link to the exact same page, though, even where it doesn't work with the page before it. Also, the endings are all somewhat unsatisfying, and I think I detect shades of Hitler. All in all, though, pretty okay.

The game was random, but even though randomness is best suited for humor stories if you have enough skill you can pull this kind of thing off. The only problem is that you don't have it.

Just to random and to much didn't add up. You didn't explain a lot of things well and I know you were going for a wacky world kind of thing but it just fell kind of short. The only thing good about it was the spelling.

3/8

Playa, You don't understand that this is all a magical dream. When you die, you die in real life. Certainly your parents would find out that you are not breathing in your sleep. Unless they are always drunk.

The story makes no sense at all. How would anyone know I'm dead if I'm trapped in a room?