Wolf Adventures

Player Rating3.04/8

"#453 overall, #36 for 2015"
based on 152 ratings since 06/17/2015
played 1,672 times (finished 155)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level1/8

"appropriate for all ages"
Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

This game will throw you into the footsteps of a lone wolf, either trying to survive on his/her own or finding a pack to become top "dog." 



Please let me know what you think and if I should change anything!

Player Comments

There's an insanely low amount of details in this storygame. It's disapointing, because stories like these ones can be fleshed out quite easily. I noticed multiple grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed.

Nearly every choice leads me to an end game link. Do you really want someone to go into your storygame, click two buttons, and be done with it and leave a bad rating? It's disapointing to see little to no branching in storygames :(

Then there was the utter randomness of parts. I mean, when the storygame is almost over, THAT is when it asks if i'm a boy or a girl? That seems a little random to just ask in the middle of a storygame.

I would like to say, "the writing wasn't bad," but the writing really was pretty bad. Maybe you're a really good writer, but this was lacking detail, branching, emotion...

I really feel nothing for these characters. Maybe it's the lack of detail and emotion, or maybe it's because i'm a cold hearted person, I don't know.

Please work harder on your storygames. Make something you can be proud of :)

-- MinnieKing on 3/2/2017 7:54:04 PM
It was okay, I just think there was a lot of room for fleshing out of the branches and for this to become a lot less linear. It seemed to me that every other choice led to an "End Game" link and there was only one branch that didn't include you dying (for some reason the "Loner" and "Find another pack" branches seemed to connect at the end).
-- FazzTheMan on 6/20/2015 4:46:28 PM
It's all right but I really feel like in such a tiny game I shouldn't be finding so many errors. There can't have been much more than a page of text to look through overall.

>>>You creep forward and halt behind a bush at the boundaries of this packs territory. You realize it is a rouge pack, mean and lawless.<<< On the very first page here, 'packs' is missing an apostrophe, and I don't really understand why these wolves are wearing makeup, that seems very silly and random! Is it against the wolf law to wear makeup, and the other wolves picked on them until they became mean?

Various other issues were sprinkled throughout this, but
"You arent really none well and your fine with that." really stood out as being particularly painful to read.

You're not a bad writer, if you just proofread your work better and added a few more choices (maybe extend a couple of those branches that immediately end the game...like your entire pack getting killed because you took a nape) and use more descriptive writing this could be decent.

But I never understand why all these animal games abruptly end when the character becomes leader of their pack or clan or whatever, when it seems like they should just be getting started then with the introduction of some kind of plot.
-- mizal on 5/24/2015 11:16:43 AM
Adding on to my comment...

The other paths were also short! The option to start a pack was really bland, in my opinion. It's the same as other animal games: be a lone creature, find a mate, have children, start a group, the end.
Also, a golden pelt is not rare.
-- MrMustachio on 2/18/2017 10:26:55 AM
It's unrealistic when compared to a real wolf's life, but I suppose the story was meant to be unrealistic to some extent.

It was over in a flash. I tried to join the pack, showing submission to the alpha wolf, and he accepted me for whatever reason. Before I knew it, the game was over. I'll try to see the other paths and hopefully find a longer one, but for now it gets a 2/8.
-- MrMustachio on 2/18/2017 10:24:17 AM
A little short but fun!
-- Gabe on 11/7/2016 9:33:16 PM
Short, but not bad
-- LordMushroom on 10/7/2016 12:39:58 PM
Should be longer but other wise great!
-- Aetherskyes on 9/24/2016 3:48:50 PM
short but good honestly love it but then again my favorites are probably medium length
-- Aetherskyes on 9/23/2016 9:20:50 PM
It would have been good with better details on the environment and characters. Was hoping for this to be more descriptive as I would have enjoyed a story about packs and the ability to join one. Hope you try to rework this in the future.
-- Digit on 9/17/2016 12:31:15 AM
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