Player Comments on You V.S Zombies

The descriptions were excessively short, many endings seemed abrupt and illogical (like how one man randomly does a pirouette like a bloody ballerina and cuts your throat).

Try going for more detail and sense.

— PcGenie on 5/18/2016 5:39:14 AM with a score of 0

the maturity level should be like 2-3, not 7!

— Honeydusk842 on 5/3/2016 8:35:32 PM with a score of 0

There wasn't any real description of the setting. There was no backstory. A lot of the endings felt lazy. Those are just a few things to work on.

— Visitor on 4/18/2016 9:37:33 PM with a score of 0

It was fine, but it didn't really stand out from any other games.

— lolitup4 on 2/29/2016 3:40:06 PM with a score of 0

It was alright, but was very shoddy.

— Zaguiza14 on 12/5/2015 11:56:26 PM with a score of 0

So, once I got to the plane no matter what I did I got killed

— JohnSmith1219o2 on 11/25/2015 1:52:05 PM with a score of 0

I'll be honest; I thought it was a bit lazy. I like the fact that you did put some effort into this and is certainly better than some other games that I've played, but this was just a bit poor.

— HJPike on 11/4/2015 7:16:28 PM with a score of 0

That was pretty cool. It should be rated for all ages. I survived :D

— BanditSparky on 8/20/2015 8:15:47 PM with a score of 0

You spelled embarrassed wrong, lol. You should make this longer and have more of a story to it.

— corgi213 on 8/17/2015 8:15:56 AM with a score of 0

so there was no way to kill the girl...well that sucks

— Sixsmith on 8/10/2015 10:34:32 AM with a score of 0

Seriously do better!

— Shadow_Strider on 8/2/2015 1:26:53 PM with a score of 0

Extreme lack of detail in this story-game. The events happen too fast and there is no build-up in-between them.

— Combatant_Zero on 8/1/2015 2:27:58 PM with a score of 0

I chose hug it and died, what's up with that. Everyone knows the power of love conquers all, I wish I could go into more detail abput the game but that's as far as I felt lile going. I can't play a game where doing what I enjoy kills me, I'm a zombie hugger for life.

— DeathIncarnate on 7/31/2015 6:26:53 AM with a score of 0

Jee whiz, I died of being killed. Huh. Okay... but anyway, this game was a teeny bit linear, and items could have been used for practically in some places. The story wasn't really present; I didn't care about my character or anyone else. I died, big whoop. Also, pro tip: writing "What do you do?" after every page will seriously piss people off.

— GMB13carat on 7/18/2015 6:56:44 PM with a score of 0

pretty good, especially for a first story (although this is the first story I've found on this website).
although I think if you woke up with a zombie in your room it would be eating you by then.

— dead yellow on 7/15/2015 11:21:08 PM with a score of 0

Limited options. Not very practical.

— mvrk on 7/15/2015 8:55:24 PM with a score of 0

Meh. With a little more technique and writing improvement, I'm sure you could do great things. Keep on writing :3

— imagine13 on 7/15/2015 5:09:53 PM with a score of 0

Haha I like the way the story told us everything we need to know about the story :D This was ok, you offered us a good amount of choices and various endings making this story a good way to kill five minutes. Beyond the familiar "survive the zombie apocalypse" there wasn't any plot which made this more of a game than a story, though it was enjoyable enough :)

— Will11 on 7/15/2015 12:23:42 AM with a score of 0

Meh... Even I can't see myself get up in the middle of the night with a knife and tomahawk a zombie and beat the crap of big guys, or drive a van. You just basically made the player God and it was like a cake walk.