Your Choices (Really Early Beta)

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 2 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"no possible way to lose"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

Your Choices make YOUR story I've made it as choicey as I could comment if you have ideas of how it could have more!

Player Comments

Way too short to be a story, and I didn't know people could skip attending their own birth either.

You learn something new everyday!

Any way, I think you should take this down before the mods do and do some serious work. I'm talking plot, characters, arcs, themes, the whole nine yards if you want to truly write a good story.

I would also suggest taking a look at some of the featured stories and seeing what the standards people expect here.

Good luck.
-- corgi213 on 12/9/2018 9:25:07 PM with a score of 0
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