Player Comments on Zombieland

Pretty good! There's many Zombie stories on this site, but I don't think that I've ever had the pleasure of reading one in the perspective of the Zombie. I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by what I read, and only continued to be so as I read through each page.

The writing in this was certainly one of it's strong points, there was a subtle humor in the wittiness of the dialogue, so much so that I found myself genuinely chuckling and smiling to myself as I read.

How you were able to make becoming a zombie fun, I have no idea but I certainly found myself enjoying my new undead life in this story. Thanks in part to the excellent sentence structure and grammar that held this storygame together in a nice enjoyable package.

I really found myself wishing it was longer, so I could read this even more. This was really a rather interesting take on the typical zombie game, so kudos on that! :)

The only thing that holds this back in my opinion is that so many of the paths leads to the demise of the player, it really made me feel that there was more that could've been capitulated on in making this a more lengthier and enjoyable storygame.

So I suppose that it does make this a bit linear in a way.

Still, this was decently written and certainly a blast to read at the end of day.

I really enjoyed this, but so wish there was a versions without the unnecessary curse words so I could use it with my high school students! I know they hear worse, but I like having a job. :)

Not too bad!

This story was fairly enjoyable. The writing was decent, and provided a humorous tone. As compared to most zombie games that have one trying to kill or escape the zombies, this story has you trying to survive AS a zombie. For a short game, branching was ok. My main complaint would be that it is a bit short, and could have benefitted by being longer.

Overall, fun quick read.

Why do I die either which way? It was fun as it lasted, though. Can the author make a vampire story game?! THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!

Meh. It was funny but short and linear. 3/8.

too short and only ending that you dont die is anti climatic

did every ending

aw

yeah

come on

rats again

rats

Engaging. Nice, simple zombie story.

it was good

Very enjoyable.

It good

Cool, should be longer though

zambie heaven... now shoo
XD

I FOUND ZOMBIE HAVEN!!!!!!!!!

more trial and error than anything

cool idea- being the zombie!

It was great! Although, I just couldn't figure out where the other zombie went.

Nice.

Not bad. Not bad, indeed.

Decent.

I'm glad I'm still in full control as myself and I don't have to eat anyone.

Its all right.

It quite didn't capture my interest. For me, It also lacked story.

The grammar and almost everything else was alright though.

I like the change in perspective. Definitely a rare point of view.. But, like almost every other comment states, it needs to be expanded/edited.

This is not so much interesting ! it sucks !

It's way too short.

it was great

A brilliant take on the cliche zombie survival story. It would be amazing if you stretched this out a bit more and gave the reader more choices.

Not horrible. It still needs a bit of work though.

that was short

4/8 its ok but extremely short and only one surviving ending

I love your style! I was audibly laughing at many parts!

It was really cool. Even the wrong ways were well thought out. But is the moral really "always eat people"? Because I died.

I wish the story was longer but it was fun playing the role of a zombie instead of a normal survivor.

A linear horror story with hardly any effort.

Nice?

Kinda fun, its a bit short though

linear

Good story, I can't say that it was very interesting but it did it's job just fine.

His was a good short story. I enjoyed it a lot. I got killed by a bounty hunter.

Sucks.

Good, but short

Okay, this was different.

Such a nice game. NO, NO, NO. People do not, unfortunately, enjoy playing as demented zombies.

...u always die?!?!

Is it possible to win this? I kept going back and trying different options until I felt like a zombie had eaten my brain. Fun game

It was fun being a zombie

needs a longer story line and less dumb deaths and also a better ending but all in all its good

A good idea to do a zombie game from the perspective of a zombie (who can still think) since this site dosnt have any yet but still very short and liner.

why would somebody make a zombie game when you start out as a zombie

Ok could use some work

This is not good

yes i am crazy want to hear my evil luagh?

is there a pert 2?

Malo!

Not bad!!!

zombies dont feel pain.

short but good

A pretty short game. I wanted to see more...

fun!

Not bad! I liked it.

Couldnt survive no matter what

It was alright.. I wish it were longer. I found the haven, but yeah. You could've done alot more with this. I wanted more.

Lol, I found a zombie haven.

Pretty good.

lol moral: always eat people

One of the better zombie games. Could use a bit of improvement, but it's not that bad.

fun but I wish for a bit more i finished it easy in 10 choices... I like the new view on zombies though. do you explore why they bite people in other choices?

Just as it got good... over. Oh well, it was pretty cool.

Damn- just as the story was getting good, it was over.

Really gave me an experience of what it was like to be a zombie. That alone makes it a good, original story. It was also creatively written. I just wish it was longer- this felt more like Act I than a complete story.

its alright pretty good i got to zombie haven

Alright, I won now. Just for ****s and giggles, I went back and check out all the fun ways to die. Always a nice pass time. Anyway, good story. Will there be a sequel? 5/8

I like this. All though I have already played one game for PC that involves being a zombie, "Stubs the Zombie" this was interesting none the less. One little detail though, "And the moral of the story is: always eat people." that moral for this game is wrong. If you eat the bum's brain, you end up being killed by bounty hunters. I don't mind dying from wrong choices, I have read the Zork books, just try not to make mistakes such as that.

Interesting concept, but I don't feel that it was used the way it should have been. The zombies acted too human, and there weren't enough common zombie cliches referred to in this game (Like super zombies by night). Overall, I felt a bit trapped, it feels a bit claustrophobic. I would love to see you expand on this idea with a day/night system, a few more touches, and more area in which to explore.

6/8 i died fast

Oh, Cazmanian Devil, when are you not awesome? (Hint: Never.)

6/8 not bad

This game is really not bad - it's well written, it's a neat idea, but it ends rather abruptly at times without reason. Had you put a bit more time into this game, it would really have been a winner.

it was cool to end up in zombie heavin

Moral of the story is to always eat people!? I died like that as well, I think the moral of the story is to not become a zombie.

Well, other than a weird fake moral that will kill you in this story, it's not that bad. I like the idea of taking over a zombie counter part (I love Stubbs the zombie for PC). So, I give you rep for that.

twiggy didnt really right thet i did, and i will keep making comments until she is the best

any1 who didnt like this game is jelous of your wonderful talents as yours is the best eva on this sight and you lot all suck like mad.

Nice game! Not too linear, and a good amount of words!

wow ive neva read sumin quite like it

caroloine this was the bestest story that i have eva read congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good writing, neat idea.

This was pretty terrible

Written very well.

It was written brilliantly, and it's a shame it had to end so early in, but it was a good game. Well done.

A pleasure reading this. Without question, some of the best writing on the site. Particularly like the reference to 28 days later, though you left out the "f*cking." Lol. The story isn't long enough, and there are not enough choices, or I would've given this an 8. I'm sure you have it in you - please write more for this site!

Hey! Not bad! I like your writing! Plus, your grammar and spelling is excellent! Lookin' forward for ZombieLand 2, but make sure not to have too much bloody death.

Weird but good. You die a lot though.

Nice writing, but needs more choices. And no offence, but I really don't like the whole talking thing. Geez, you ARE a zombie ya know...

okay, well, you always die in this game. That really sucks.