Alexandra and Hamilton Gates have always been intrigued by their parents work as a historian and archivist. They have grown up hearing stories of lost treasures and ancient civilizations, and they have always dreamed of following in their parent's footsteps. When their parents go missing, leaving them a cryptic message about a lost Aztec treasure, they know that they must take up the search themselves.

As a fan of the National Treasure movies, it's your turn to make history and join the fun - keep your Battery charged, avoid Dead Ends, read HISTORICAL maps - and finish with a perfect 100 SCORE! So sit back, buckle-up and enjoy the ride.

OK, here we go. It was 1832, on a night much like this...

Thanks Alienrun for your constructive criticism, I changed some things you noted (the battery can't be fully charged) and will publish it soon. The prose is still flowery, but hey, so am I :D - I hope you'll give it another chance.

As I mentioned in another post here, 'It's more of a game then a multi-path story. There are sidetracks and dead ends and currently I've found only found one way to score 100 and find the treasure too. I have enjoyed playing it and I hope others agree and accept the challenge.'
 

Thanks DireRyse for giving it a look, I agree with you and Peng, it is fanfic. Nick Cage!
I've played through it multiple times, so I think it's ready to publish.

It's more of a game then a multi-path story. There are sidetracks and dead ends and currently I've found only found one way to score 100 and find the treasure too. I have enjoyed playing it and I hope others agree and accept the challenge. 
Oh, and there's also a 'red herring' so I hope that doesn't upset folks :D