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Just Need To Test The First Two Pages For Errors

3 years ago

As the title says. I did some kinda complex coding on the first two (and only two so far) pages of my new story game and I want to make sure everything is working right. Click the link and check it out, tell me what you think, and if there's anything wonky with the coding. If everything looks good, I'll continue doing what I'm doing with the in-text links and I'll pop in an update here and there so people can test it every few chapters. Thanks in advance!

The link: https://chooseyourstory.com/story/astria

Just Need To Test The First Two Pages For Errors

3 years ago
Wonky thing #1: no one can access your story, because that's not how links work.

Just Need To Test The First Two Pages For Errors

3 years ago
Oh. Whoops. How do I make the link clickable? ^^'

Just Need To Test The First Two Pages For Errors

3 years ago
If I type it out it will just create a link, and getting around this requires extra effort. You should go and look up how to do an html link, because that's faster than waiting for someone less lazy to come along.

Just Need To Test The First Two Pages For Errors

3 years ago
This should fix it: Link to my game