Dead Justice rises from the dead

Player Rating1.47/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 16 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level2/8

"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.

This game is a funny game but is also a bit weird


I had spent 4 days on this game. This is my first game ever.


Player Comments

Short used new wrong, should be knew no plot or story no good ending. Realy it's way to short (5 pages).
-- Dmanxbox on 11/10/2015 5:14:51 PM with a score of 0
Short. I ended the game in less than three minutes. Try to put more time into this game if you want it to be good quality.

Grammar. Please, try your best to at least put this through a word processor or something.

Well, the story made no sense... hard to follow, etc.

-- RoyalGhost_007 on 11/10/2015 11:39:59 AM with a score of 0
I am not sure what Dead Justice is but I'll take a guess he's not giving away free balloons... I'm pretty sure this is your first story EVER so it's not a bad effort. You need to work on your grammar: CAPITAL LETTERS, "quotation marks" and such things, try showing this to one of your parents or your teacher to read before publishing it on here.

There's not too much to say about this except keep working to make your stories longer, the punctuation better and put in a few more characters :) The more you write the better you'll get :D
-- Will11 on 11/10/2015 5:56:44 AM with a score of 0
it was a good game but some of it didn't make sense
-- clarkey123459 on 11/10/2015 2:20:38 AM with a score of 0
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