Player Comments on Gerard's Bad Dream

I could list all the things wrong with this storygame, but I don’t want to write a 5,000 word review.

... Why? Why does this game exist? Just... Why? >.<

No Richard. 1/8

You know, just because your brother does something stupid doesn't mean you have to put it on display all over the internet.

I'm pretty sure the only reason to game has survived this long is because it requires a LOT of clicking to reach the End Game link through all the railroading and forced looping. Most readers would've just given up in disgust.

I installed an escape hatch on the first page and now a few others can express their opinion about it before I unpublished it tonight.

I didn't like it. First, there was no actual choices for the player. It just loops over and over again until you pick the choice that the author wants you to pick. Seriously? What is the point of the storygame then?
Secondly, it lacks description. No backstory, no reason of all the events that happen... it was just a mess of unmeaningful words.
Thirdly, the grammar and punctuation. Question marks turn into fullstops and the choices are questions! It is such a mess!
Please put more effort into your storygames. 1/8

Fucking terrible. You should've killed your brother before he had the chance to write this.

WTF
That is all I can think of to describe this game. Horrible grammer, and choices that don't even make sense

That was almost insufferable.

Wow. That was a bit confusing.

What just happened?

Would appreciate some more options and some more correlation between pages. Enjoyed that road system, though. Pretty hazardous place.

So, the game's like Groundhog day where if you do something wrong, you wake up again with your wife yelling at you to go to work, and the good ending is... You wake up again with your wife yelling at you to go to work :p

Linear but funny!

freaky dream

wierd.

it's alrightttt. weird reoccuring dream sequence.

I felt like this game needlessly insulted my manhood...repeatedly...

it was.... interesting. but there was only one way to win. you need to make it win more than one way

its kind of fun

this game is ok

Linear...

It's cool better than anything i'll ever do at least.

Wow, I have a hard time believing a kid, as you suggest wrote this, it is very well developed and gives a great sense of story.

linear but good... killer ferrets lol

Too linear, random, and unenjoyable.

this game had no real point to it and is extremrly redundant.

Preety fun, Good job!

Nice game!

Woah... I must have been dreaming for days... Great concept! you keep waking up and finding it was all a dream until you beat the "evil bad guy." next time multiple dreams? 6/8

Kind of neat, and fairly dream-like. (I've never actually read specific directions on a map in a dream before, though. Have you?)

It's a pretty good story though. I had to go through it quite a few times though.

I liked this story. The randomness of everything correlates well to a dream. There were a lot of funny parts, like machine-gun wielding jack in the boxes. A way to improve it would be to have the dream world and waking world different, and the guy could have narcolepsy and pass into the dream world sometimes. lol.

those directions got totally annoying.

not bad, not bad.

This game was made to be the best that it could be, considering the plot, which was abysmal. This ranked a 4/8 on the Assasin scale and does not advance to the round robbin.

Stupid, overly hard (if the window opens wihout a back button, make sure you right click and open a new window on the first choice. Trust me), and not funny at all.
Try a bit harder next time