Player Comments on Harvest Moon

Uhh... Well to be fair your writing isn't bad, but I really doubt this way of writing a story game is going to work. You can't just say. "You are a character. You move to a place. Tell me what you want to do next." It's your story. You kind of have to make it up yourself. Plus, I don't really know anything about Harvest Moon, so I don't know which island to pick anyway. I don't know the difference between them.