Player Comments on If I'm louder will you see me? (1D)

This is pretty much the average 13 year old girl's sexual fantasy, not a story game.
Also, ck23838, thanks for the compliment.

This was horrible. I can't say as horrible as ArrowzworrA's games, but still horrible. If you meet the One Direction boys who order 20 chicken wings, each link leads to a new page without any links to continue the game. Pages with dead-end links like this should be fixed.

Most of the sentences did not make sense, and the grammar needs serious fixing. I'll introduce some nice little symbols that can be utilized: ",.!: as well as the shift button. I have to admit that some effort was put in this, with the rich text editor, but I'd rather have a good game with all black, same-font words. 2/8.