Player Comments on Lord of the Flies sample
Awesome writing, but was it Piggy who killed me?
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— Q on 10/29/2025 2:11:18 PM with a score of 0
it was ok, but random, no way to win, you only die, either path you choose you end up in the same place, and i haven't read the book, but i think the piglet's supposed to be my friend.
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fergie14233
on 1/24/2011 6:59:23 PM with a score of 0
While your writing is good, and you do a great job of mimicking Golding's style, there just isn't any substance to this story at all. Too short, and not true to the book. Piggy wouldn't attack me for that. I felt like you quickly lost inspiration.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 12/9/2010 6:59:48 PM with a score of 0
I've done everything possible to finish it. Is there even a way to do so? You have an excellent writing style, great grammar, but I died to the pig horde, the T Rex, and the boys eating me, not to mention the squid. Hints?
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— Poet on 12/8/2010 11:59:39 PM with a score of 0
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