Player Comments on Northwest High
When a game begins with the question, "Do you wake up or stay in bed?" that gives you a pretty good idea of what to expect.
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Avery_Moore
on 7/14/2020 11:26:02 AM with a score of 0
There isn’t a single good ending and I have no idea what happened help
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SpaghettiMan
on 10/2/2019 12:35:36 AM with a score of 0
Really... you should have put more work into it.
Firstly, lemme talk about the grammar. There were punctuation mistakes and at some parts I don't even understand what're you saying.
Next, the description is totally lacking stuff. Who exactly is he? What's his goal? Where is he? What is his relationship with others? Is he popular? And love at first sight is almost impossible.
The options, about 2 on every page, which makes it a simple story. It's too short and simple, you meet a girl, you fight her boyfriend, the story ends.
This looks like a storygame which you put it together in 5 minutes. When you start writing a storygame, make sure you actually wanna write one. Rated 1/8 :(
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StoryTurtle
on 6/29/2019 11:23:38 AM with a score of 0
very short and kind of weird. Not many choices to branch out from.
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WingsofWinter
on 5/15/2019 2:26:44 PM with a score of 0
I don't get the rating why is it 6/8 almost nothing inappropriate happens.
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— TheLegend27 on 3/17/2019 6:25:07 PM with a score of 0
No real choices, and very linear. Hell, I can't even be allowed to say what I want to, because I was told:
"You really talk about girls like that. You are so horrible. I'm gonna turn you into a nice guy."
I'm like, seriously?
Also, you need to fix the grammar mistakes and make sure you start a new paragraph every time there's a new speaker. 2/8.
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crazygurl
on 6/15/2017 7:10:47 PM with a score of 0
And the moral of this story is: the uppercut ALWAYS connects.
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Saika
on 5/8/2017 9:43:39 AM with a score of 0
I can't believe I won't a fight the other ending was dieing in garbage
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— Sadness on 3/14/2017 8:18:25 PM with a score of 0
It could use some more work. I give it 5/10
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Midnightmagic4399
on 8/15/2016 9:00:00 AM with a score of 0
Good storygame to play, but it was weird. Like at the beginning, I chose a T-shirt and jeans but I couldn't wear them. I had to wear the other outfit.
If you want to make me happy with this story game, could you please add something more to it? You give both links, but the player can only choose one of them. A good story game should have multiple links on one page.
Over all, I would give this a 3/10. It could be better.
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Midnightmagic4399
on 8/15/2016 8:56:42 AM with a score of 0
WALLET STEALING TIIIME!!!!
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thebigE
on 4/24/2016 8:17:37 AM with a score of 0
The main problem with this story is how linear it is. No one likes to choose to not take the wallet only to be told 'ha, ha, you're taking it anyway!' No matter what you choose, you are pushed along the single path the author wants you to take. This takes the 'choose your' out of the story.
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AllThatIsGold
on 1/10/2016 5:03:52 PM with a score of 0
This was really linear and really short. The whole point of these story games is to give the player an actual choice. You gave the illusion of choice, but then still directed the player to one linear path.
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Hazel_Zhang
on 12/30/2015 4:30:15 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, very linear but your explanations for why are amusing, it's semi-well written and the story as a whole is not bad.
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DeathIncarnate
on 7/28/2015 3:24:20 PM with a score of 0
Um... some of the things in this story just didn't connect. I chose to wear a T-shirt and jeans, but it later says someone spilled their lunch on my throwback outfit. ???
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GMB13carat
on 7/1/2015 9:35:47 PM with a score of 0
I gave a five out of eight, only because of the ending I got xD
Not sure why, "You wake up in a room where all four of them kill you" is so funny, but oh well, I have a twisted sense of humor. xP
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KraZKidMJCB
on 6/13/2015 11:44:01 PM with a score of 0
Woah. Boom. By the way, that was the sound of my head exploding. Yus sirj
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Cloudflame
on 6/12/2015 3:40:49 PM with a score of 0
When I made the choice to not take the wallet, it later said I had...????
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— Guest on 6/2/2015 11:27:53 AM with a score of 0
The writing wasn't awful but it wasn't great either, enjoyable enough for a 10 minute game :)
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Will11
on 3/9/2015 9:02:30 AM with a score of 0
Wow...
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CutePie123
on 2/8/2015 8:36:41 PM with a score of 0
that was good
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— maiya on 11/27/2014 3:01:41 PM with a score of 0
That was a great game although violence is not the only way to handle things.
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— Jay on 10/26/2014 6:33:35 PM with a score of 0
It was good fun but short. Not much of a plot but the fights are well written.
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— Jordi P on 10/6/2014 12:54:18 PM with a score of 0
It was pretty meh. As some other people say you really don't get uch choice at all. It's too random and brief, but the fights were handled decently.
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31TeV
on 9/24/2014 9:59:19 AM with a score of 0
There was no choice at all. You are forced to follow the set path, and it's not even a good one.
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dman2life
on 10/13/2013 6:18:41 AM with a score of 0
Bleh, boring and dumb.
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— Whitney Graham on 9/27/2013 2:30:52 PM with a score of 0
Good try but tbh I don't like the whole "make your choice. Then I will cancel and choose anyway" vibe.... Not for me, I'm afraid
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Sloe
on 8/10/2013 6:52:58 PM with a score of 0
this game lacked much choice
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HaruhiSuzumiya
on 6/16/2013 6:48:59 AM with a score of 0
i actually thought it was pretty good. ^^'
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TharaApples
on 6/8/2013 9:42:05 PM with a score of 0
This is one of the worst things I have ever, ever seen. You could AT THE VERY LEAST add a good story and not your suck-ass life.
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skillfulljack
on 5/18/2013 2:53:17 PM with a score of 0
criminal mastermind?
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JamesValkyrie
on 3/19/2013 9:37:16 PM with a score of 0
da fuq is dis
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— styles on 1/22/2013 6:54:16 PM with a score of 0
I got into a fight with some jackoffs at school. Result: "Now you think of your self as a criminal mastermind."
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Loon
on 1/9/2013 5:38:56 PM with a score of 0
Half the choices end the game, and the other half is a choice in which you force us to take the correct choice.
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Aman
on 12/27/2012 9:39:05 PM with a score of 0
Wurd to yo Mama. ^_^
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Briar_Rose
on 11/17/2012 6:28:35 PM with a score of 0
The hell is this rubbish? Why do I have to talk like a chav? 1/8.
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Zane
on 11/17/2012 10:56:20 AM with a score of 0
okay
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alex2208
on 6/15/2012 10:49:07 AM with a score of 0
3/8
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betaband
on 5/30/2012 11:06:26 PM with a score of 0
I'm entertained, but I'd like a little more description.
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Resthera
on 2/13/2012 11:49:55 AM with a score of 0
You remind me of the babe.
What babe?
The babe with the power.
What power?
The power of voodoo.
Who do?
You do.
Do what?
Remind me of the babe. . . .
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NeverMind
on 1/28/2012 5:57:03 PM with a score of 0
funny for a short story
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Nyxora
on 1/16/2012 3:06:55 AM with a score of 0
Darn it..>.< never have I been forced to steal a wallet before now..
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— DQEight on 9/12/2011 8:18:33 PM with a score of 0
That was amusing!
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DRBickham
on 5/17/2011 1:20:29 AM with a score of 0
Worthy of a chuckle, keep practicing your skills
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tgsunrise
on 5/7/2011 5:38:34 PM with a score of 0
Amusing.
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Seeker
on 4/19/2011 6:35:33 PM with a score of 0
this story is soooo short
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Salidia
on 3/10/2011 7:57:10 PM with a score of 0
i won
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Salidia
on 2/17/2011 7:35:18 PM with a score of 0
this was a good story for a first. good job!
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fergie14233
on 11/14/2010 12:14:13 PM with a score of 0
its okay i think
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donnydude
on 3/14/2009 8:19:29 PM with a score of 0
Not bad in its own respect, but how did I beat up the other three?
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primates
on 5/24/2007 10:13:34 PM with a score of 0
There are 4 kinds of football: Association Football (Soccer), Gaelic Football, Australian Football, and American Football. Of these, only Association Football fits the name because only the Goalkeeper can handle the ball.
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Rommel
on 3/30/2007 5:18:52 AM with a score of 0
Pretty linear but still fun.
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DarthVader_13
on 2/28/2007 7:32:17 PM with a score of 0
Next time try and focus on giving people more choices. I tried to sleep in, and do a number of other things where I ended up having to do the same thing. Not really a choose-your-own-adventure story, but still, it's your first try.
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October
on 2/10/2007 9:27:28 PM with a score of 0
Not too bad.
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PrinceOProvidence
on 1/6/2007 4:50:02 PM with a score of 0
it was way fun
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havok
on 11/15/2006 8:06:20 AM with a score of 0
Ha, Sweet game.
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— Anubis on 10/22/2006 6:35:00 PM with a score of 0
This is actually pretty good. Even though all the choices basically lead to the same place, it was fun. The dialogue sounds a bit fake, and could be livened up. Also, there should be more descriptions and story.
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madglee
on 9/11/2006 9:20:51 AM with a score of 0
OK for a 1st game. Needs more effort tho.
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— Miccy2000 on 1/12/2006 7:29:27 PM with a score of 0
I hate this game! It needs to improve 10X
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— JJJ on 10/17/2005 6:12:50 PM with a score of 0
This is stupid. Morale: Dont make games if you suck. 2/10.
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— JJJ on 6/15/2005 11:50:53 PM with a score of 0
That was fairly good, but too linear.
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— Al on 5/14/2005 7:03:14 PM with a score of 0
lol! I liked this game. Had fun playing through. thanks.
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— march5th00 on 12/12/2004 3:26:44 AM with a score of 0
Not bad, not bad
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— Joe on 7/29/2004 4:19:27 PM with a score of 0
hate to say it this way but i can tell that its your first. also, this kind of story has been done millions of times. more originality and some depth will make it a bit better.
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— nate on 6/25/2004 3:13:08 AM with a score of 0
That was an awesome game. Great job! That was really your first game ever? Wow you are talented.
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— Julie on 6/24/2004 8:02:32 AM with a score of 0
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